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Work hard, it's not bad

I just finished reading it. It was okay at first, but it was a little bit poisonous to see the inexplicable yandere licking the Master. If you don't read these, the writing is indeed very good. Later, I got a Taoist companion from the Master's previous life. It felt completely unnecessary. Maybe the author wanted to whitewash the Master. My personal suggestion Ah, if a character is ruined, don't save it, especially if it's a secret character. If the first heroine collapses, then focus on bringing up the second, third, or fourth heroine. After all, there is a high chance that a character who fails to be saved will become a poisonous point. It may also affect the impression left by the protagonist on readers, which is very bad, especially when the book is just starting out like this. If you write according to your own outline, and the character is broken, you will arrange another person who can replace the first heroine to make the character dilute. The author's strengths are his writing style and plot arrangement which are quite good (if you don't count the areas where the writing is a bit broken). In addition, the book has just started and there is no need to make major changes to the outline to affect the subsequent story.

A quick start, the best harem stallion novel, very comfortable to read, the plot is very novel

Let me talk about my own viewing experience. I personally feel that it is very good and it suits my taste. I watched the recording of Goddess Qiong Ming a few days ago and my heart broke. This novel just made me wash my eyes. I hope that the master will not be made into a puppet, so that there will be no viewing experience. It is better to use the master to make her fall step by step, and finally become a fool who will be broken without the protagonist. You can also use her to make the male protagonist heartbroken step by step. Can you think about it, the author? Please [laughs] It's just my personal opinion. If you complain, you're right, but I won't think I'm wrong either [makes a face] emmmm, it was written wrong. It breaks the heart of the son of destiny, not the male protagonist.

It's very well written, you must stick to it.

It makes me laugh so hard. This system of yours must be code written by a certain programmer. Grab whatever is missing.

It looks good. I hope the author will continue to work hard and keep writing. This is not good enough [laughing and crying]

Wonderful, this is how it tastes! ! !

I read a lot of books and found one thing in common. You can never stand up by being a licker. No matter how humiliated and suppressed you are, no matter how much revenge and hatred you talk about, in fact, you have to lick when you should. It is called affectionate. After thinking a little more deeply, many of these books are written by new authors who do not have that rich writing experience. The behavior of the protagonists in their works is probably what they think and think when they put themselves in their shoes. Could it be deduced that these authors themselves have this kind of dog-licking mentality without even knowing it, so the dog-licking in their works is also limited? The key point is that the market for such dog-licking-related books, movies, and TV series is getting bigger and bigger, and it's not easy, hehehe. I didn't give a low score. I read the beginning and skipped through some more. I didn't mean to offend the author, but I just had a whim to think about it and wanted to see what others had to say.

Ahem, cough, cough, don't stay up late at night and watch [sneaky laugh][sneaky laugh][sneaky laugh]

Keep it up!

It feels very good, the update frequency is fast, even during the Chinese New Year, two chapters were updated every day, and the driving writing is simple and clear enough, unlike other articles that are like reading comprehension. Although the first few chapters are a bit strange, they are just right, and there are emotional lines. It is not a brainless Teddy novel, and there are not too many poisonous points. I think this book will definitely survive to the end.

I didn't watch it for long, but I still gave the author a five-star rating. Later on, I felt that the protagonist was a bit sick of love and hate. I have a little bit of fun with other women, and I feel like the author still worked very hard. I read it quickly and there are some shortcomings, I hope you can understand.

It's pretty good, but a bit lacking. The author is careful about being sent a razor blade. Please update it soon. Can the protagonist be a little crazier?

Don't be happy with things, don't be sad with yourself. Everyone comes by fate. Squirt if you like [making faces]

I took a look at it. In the early stage, the master was too poisonous, so points were deducted. Later, the writing was quite good. I saw that in the latest chapter, it was prepared to play a big role. But the persona of your master in the early stage can no longer be the first heroine. It can be said that the heroine position cannot be reserved, otherwise there will be a lot of people scolding me. How will you wash it later? Or how to write it? I'm still looking forward to it.

Very beautiful, very exciting

Update quickly, otherwise I will issue five-star installments [angry][angry][angry] Come on, I like this kind of protagonist. He is sentimental but not sentimental. A bit of yandere attribute is really fun. I still like the character of Master very much. This kind of mutual abuse makes each other want to blend into myself. The multiple female protagonists are a cool plot, and The Master is a plot, which is very interesting. As for those who say that the plot between Master and Ye Chu is poisonous, I think it's okay. There is no actual relationship between the two. At most, they held hands and couldn't figure out which one was poisonous. Maybe everyone's mysophobia is a bit serious, but such a serious mysophobia is a bit abnormal. I support the author, and I have only one request: don't turn Master into a puppet. I dare say that most of the people who still keep the book like Master. After all, she has so many roles. Writing her off will make a small number of people happy, but their loyalty is difficult to guarantee. Without Master, this book will not be far from GG. Keep Master, and you will win the favor of most readers. So don't neglect us just to please the bad prostitutes [cry] [cry] [cry] High energy ahead, blade warning My favorite author is so much, hehe~ I like it so much... So the author must, must be good~ Hehe hehe hehe~ Don't make me unhappy... Because I can't tolerate sand~ hehehe. . . But I am/can, but the author is so fluent (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡ Remember~ you must be obedient... Hehehe~hehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehe~

[Lick the screen] [lick the screen] [lick the screen] [lick the screen] [lick the screen] [lick the screen] [lick the screen] [lick the screen] [lick the screen] [lick the screen] [lick the screen] [lick the screen] The author of Tama must insist on writing [angry] [angry]

I hope the author can clarify the relationship between the protagonist and the master. If it weren't for Nuyin, the master would never like the protagonist in this life. I hope the author can see it. (Personal suggestion)

Very beautiful, very beautiful

Okay, who is the heroine?

Good, good, great.

Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie! Good-looking [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

Read three chapters. Just because you said you turned this woman into a puppet, she will get 5 stars directly.

This is a "peerless" book, okay, I'll blow it.

There are a lot of memes on the Internet, they are quite funny

This book is okay, it's not a green text [thinking][thinking]. If you want to read a green text, I suggest you read the Record of the Goddess Qiongming[laughing][laughing]

Very nice, keep up the good work bro

Five stars, must be five stars