Han Zong**********

Come on, come on, come on When you read a novel, there cannot be any bad writing. I hope you can point it out so that I can correct it in time. I may not be as professional as you in many aspects. I hope you don't mind the things in it.

I originally wanted to give it five stars, but I have to say it's really beautiful.

It's so beautiful, the car is super fast (kind of m)

The author took screenshots of those books he was reading recently and posted some photos.

Come on! You write a book and I illustrate it for you. I've already edited a lot of pictures. Please hurry up and I'll add them to you. [Adoration]

Let's talk about Aunt Meijing and her daughter [making faces] The author asks Yang Qiaoan, Wu Chunhua and Song Yichen to join us [making faces]

It looks good, I love it [Admiration] I'd give it a 4 out of 10 points [laughing evilly]

If the author adds more pictures, more people will see it [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

I never expected that there would be people writing about this subject [laughing evilly] [Learned]

When will the author add a club of seniors, mothers and daughters who sell tofu, kings of hypnosis from another world, keep it a secret from mother, daughter's best friends all belong to ME, overflowing swimming pool, color chakra or happy apartment or something like that [laughing] [laughing] [laughing]

You can't just control your points, you need more encouragement and encouragement [laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

I think it's okay. I hope the protagonist can be included in more Korean comics in the future. In addition, if you want to write about super powers, you can rob the protagonist's items in Korean comics, such as the potion in hormones to attract the opposite sex, the panty notes, the universal resume, etc. I also want to ask the author if he has read the Korean comic Era of Face Reading? I just read it recently, I've been looking for fan fiction

Writing about Brave New World is very popular, after all, most people have read it.

It suits my taste very well. After all, I have read countless comics, especially Korean comics [laughing] That's it, I forgot to rate it. . .

The bottom line is [Chigua][Chigua][Chigua]. What's good is that the characterization of the characters still needs work. After all, you fall in love too quickly. Although Korean comics are like this, there are also those processes and details [laughter]. The details given by the author are still too few. I suggest you create a group to fill in some details [laughter] [Smile][Smile], overall it's pretty good. I just hope that the characters in the future won't fall in love so quickly, at least there will be a process, otherwise it will feel like it was for nothing. By the way, will there be characters in the new world in the future [Smile] or mm teaching [Smile][Note]

Dear viewers, after watching Fitness Coach, I have always had a question. Is Yichen being asked out by Jason whether he did aerobic exercise to leave a suspense, or is it just for the sake of the follow-up plot. I'll also control the points

The author should grasp his skills, don't worry about Tang San.

True 6, directly combine all the comics in Paradise, I have to say that this idea is very good, I am very optimistic about you. Protection protection, authors need protection. (Pressure)

Good old age! Den Dua Lang. [Cool]

I heard that the more people follow, the author can post pictures in articles, but I don't know how many.

What's going on? The author mentioned earlier why the above picture has never been uploaded? It's good to read, but I don't know what some of them look like, which makes me feel uncomfortable. The main reason is that these comics can be found in search, unlike other novels that are all about fantasy. I really want to see what I can find like this. Pictured above! Oh, it depends on fantasy, but I have never seen some of them, what do I think?

I couldn't find the book club group on the homepage.

It's a great book. I really like the subject matter. It's so awesome. Anyone who has read Korean comics will read it. I've also read some of the comics in it. They're really awesome. If you don't like it, you can leave, but don't criticize me. I've only read a few chapters, but I thought it was so interesting and interesting, so I commented. Please don't criticize me. Author, keep it up, follow it, follow you, brother, keep it up,

Isn't it getting cold? I think the one next door is getting cold.

I still like thrills, Korean ones, Train to Busan, Sweet Home

It was necessary, and I accidentally came across a novel with this kind of material. @ManchuanqingmengyaoxingheV Hehe🤤🤤🤤

[Sending Hearts] It's so pretty. Score 4⭐️

What is the author's group number? I didn't find it. If you see it, just reply to me. Thank you.

To be honest, I kind of want to improve my score, but my score is already very low. When will this book disappear?

I'm telling you, this book is really cool [laughing crookedly][laughing cringeyly][laughing crookedly]