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The universe is invincible and very beautiful. This villain story is not pretentious. It is not like other villain stories that are just trying to avoid the protagonist. The latter part is very exciting, which is the author's update speed. I don't like it very much. Even the production team's donkeys can't compare. Look at Tang Yu's book next door. Before it became popular, people wrote more than ten chapters a day, so the author wants to write more [ Eat melon ] [ Eat melon ]

This book is anti-thinking, breaks the rules, and is very attractive. The plot has ups and downs, one link after another, and it is fascinating! It's really good, good luck to the author!

Definitely five stars, I most like to read novels about the male protagonist San Long Aotian.

Five-star praise! Many books like this have been discontinued. I hope the author can stick to it. I also hope that more funny elements can be added to this book so that it can be more interesting to read. I hope the author will continue to work hard! Fighting!

Old theme, well written The writing is rated 70%, overall it's smooth, but the wording in some places needs to be considered. The plot is seven points, and the old theme is a bit shabby, but overall it is still very good. If this is the first time to watch this theme, then this work is really good. The logic is 4 points. The logic problems in the early details are very serious. Too many clues were ignored, causing the main line logic to be affected. For example, Liu Mingming heard that Lin Yu was related to the black owl, but ignored it. A normal person should tell his father directly and start investigating. Similar problems occurred several times, but this one is the one I remember clearly. Such problems improved later. The characters are seven points. The highlight of this work is the portrayal of the protagonist. Similarly, the portrayal of the harem is also relatively good, but there is still a lot of room for improvement.

It's over, it's over. How can I put it [Thinking] It is quite creative, and I can keep reading. Some books do nothing but kill Long Aotian Queen, and I have no desire to read it. This is a very good book, I can give it five stars [Like] [Like] [Like] The plot, plot, characters, and design are all great. The author's next book is about cultivating immortals, you can follow it, and this book basically has no poisonous points. Ahem, I digressed. It is very good to finish the book at this point, but it still gives people a feeling that it is still unfinished and full of passion! In the circle of villain novels, your book can already surpass 90% of the books [laughs] You can still think of bringing the heroine back to the present world [laughing] I personally hate Long Aotian very much, as if everything belongs to him, hypocritical! Hypocrite [Angry] If you want to get into the circle of villain novels, I advise you to read this book first. [Thinking] I am not exaggerating that this book can already be used as a benchmark [Pout] The standard for measuring a good book [Like] I can only say that it is a very good book and I strongly support the author. I followed this book when it started, and I have witnessed the growth of the author! Keep up the good work, keep up the good work [Tulip][Tulip][Turn lip]Always support! ! !

After reading it, I think this book is very interesting and the plot is also very good. If there is any improvement, it would be not to finish it too quickly (*^ω^*), and I would like to dedicate it to those who have read a little bit and don't make any comments there.

So far it looks pretty good. I like to read stories where the protagonist goes through the plot and gets stabbed in the back by the heroine. I hope the author sticks to it.

After reading through so many books, I personally think this one is the best to read (so far) and it doesn't have so many bad jokes. The plot is comfortable. I hope that the later ones won't be bad. I will continue to follow it.

The writing is good, but the plot has its ups and downs, which is not very satisfying. It would have been better if there was no "system forced to replay the plot while maintaining the character" setting! In short, it's very good, keep up the good work!

It's a masterpiece of a villain's voice. It seems a bit frustrating at the beginning. I hope it's sweeter at the end and doesn't involve some ncs who are greedy for the beauty of the female protagonist. After all, in the real world, the characters should not be as stupid as in the novel world. It's not easy for the male protagonist to go all the way. I also hope that the harem will only have that many people, and it feels okay. I switched to a farming novel, mainly because I really felt that the male protagonist was too frustrated in the early stage. I hope he can live a better life in the real world and create his own power. The sweeter the better, and being a dad is not bad. However, I still hope that the male protagonist and female protagonists will have their (female protagonists') family blessings when they get married. After all, isn't the blessing of parents the most beautiful thing? Besides, they came to the real world alone to accompany the male protagonist. It depends on how the author plays it! Hope there is a perfect ending! [Laughing][laughing][laughing]

Originally I just had no book to read, so I just came in and took a look, but the writing style and the characterization of the characters made me very interested in this novel, so I kept reading it, even staying up late to read it. The more I read, the more surprised I became. This novel is definitely the best depiction of objects and emotions in any novel I have ever read. The best book, every character is vividly written, especially the reflection at the end. The male protagonist and the female protagonist cross dimensions and have a dialogue with us. This is the sadness and tears of the readers who have read this book in its entirety. In my heart, it is definitely an urban harem novel that can be considered a masterpiece. The final ending is a treasure for readers who have the patience to read the entire book.

After reading it, tell me a few words about my process of reading this book. In fact, when I was reading this book, I also let it fall to dust in the middle, but then I picked it up again. When I read about the last 70 chapters, there will be a few plots and sentences in the book that make your eyes light up from time to time, and the depth that does not match the online text. It is as if I am reading a novel instead of a brainless online novel. At the end of the book, the author wrote a few sentences from the perspective of each character, and he was more attentive. The overall experience is quite good (compared to the cool novels I have read on Tomato)

Hehehe~ It would be great if I could post more good-looking ones~ Great~ I personally love watching it~ Although there is some poison in the back, it does not affect my viewing experience~[shy][shy][shy]

I love it. Every heroine is very distinctive, with laughs, touches, and cars. The only shortcoming in my opinion is that the male protagonist is a bit cliche when he first returns to the real world and has no background. Everything else is great. The theme of the ending is also sublimated. I really didn't expect it. The last chapter of the extra chapter is a bit ironic. I guess I will be able to brainstorm another masterpiece later and then I can't sleep. If I want to talk about the poisonous points, the biggest poisonous point in my opinion is the extras. The heroines have smoothed their edges due to time. It feels very realistic and people will be smoothed away bit by bit. However, this is contrary to the beauty that I hope to get when I read novels, so I think it is a bit poisonous. But later, when her daughter saw Fang Yuanyuan's cosplay suit, it was considered a hidden correction. Maybe Gu Xin would let Fang Yuanyuan find her original love. Maybe Yutian will find that she is cute and will get more love, maybe Huayinjiang will know that Lao Gu likes her original style. When people are capable, they will change in the direction they want, and when they are incompetent, they will change in the direction expected by others. I still can't understand why the heroines change? The final closing remarks are also great. It can be seen that the author is very attentive, and the ending is full of flowers. Goodbye!

(The overall review is that it is a good book) The first part may be a little bit toxic, but after Gu Chenan's resistance, it became good. The final portrayal of real-world characters, the final chapter, and the extra chapters all feel better than other novels... In short, thank you for accompanying me.

@WHAT A PERSON @WHAT A PERSON @WHAT A PERSON I like this novel very much, especially Bai Yutian. I give this little loli 12 points of praise. Apart from the short length, there are not many points to complain about. Big boost for the author [laughs] Leave a souvenir August 13, 2023 20:54:33 (The ending is great! [Blow a kiss] [Laugh])

Okay, but the shortcoming is that the description of the voice in this book is not natural and a little strange, but I still spent a few days to read it. I originally wanted to give it four stars, but I still gave it five stars. Because this is one of the few novels that I have finished reading. It's not amazing, it can be said to be average. The plot is cliche and boring, but it's pretty good to watch. It doesn't have any serious plot points, and it ends pretty quickly without being particularly frustrating. The real world is a bit interesting, and the heroine's writing also left an impression on me. Does Mr. Gu just like stockings? Aren't his legs better? ? I wish the author a bright future and write more

Unique The male protagonist has upright views and a good personality. Similar to the public Harem OK Can you add some pictures? [Thinking][Crazy][Crazy] It greatly reduces my space for performance [Thinking]

To be honest, this book is a rare book that I haven't fast-forwarded. Mainly, I haven't read this type of book before. There are many time-traveling villain stories, but this is the first time I read one that can bring reality. The idea alone is very attractive, especially in the current Internet environment. Maybe the only flaw is the emotional scene. Even if the female protagonists can hear the male protagonist's voice, the relationship still feels too fast. I think the system girl is quite abrupt. I think other things are ok and basically non-toxic. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

Overall it's good (I want to give it four and a half stars), but there's no need to write about the kidnapping part. Just ask the Dragon King and the others for the final duel. It has to be a poisonous one. It can be seen that the author was a bit hasty in writing later, but the overall quality is 🍅. Five stars. The ending is good but it's actually quite a pity. Besides, I think the poisonous points can be ignored [I almost cried]

It is a rare masterpiece, so this is it. You are the first novelist to pay attention to because of a novel. Your writing style is very good, but some aspects need to be improved. You pursue perfection (but you can look at it from a distance and don't play with perfection. After all, perfection is elusive). You can listen to readers' opinions. You are humane and worldly, and you can only read it. I am grateful that it was already finished when I read it. After reading it, I couldn't help but feel a little emotional. Thank you to the author for persevering to finish the story (although it feels very short and could have described some characters in more detail). Everyone has different personal preferences. Anyway, I quite like it, but it made me feel lackluster at seven in the morning the next day [smiles]

The article is very interesting and the writing style is great, but I can't read it in one go. It's not perfect or complete enough. I hope the author can work harder and come on. I hope the author can finish it word by word next time, Oli! ! ! Good reviews, good reviews, good reviews? ! I have to say it three times [Thinking] [Working on the manuscript] [Like] [Like] [Love] [Love] [Stare] [Stare] [Upvote] [Upvote] [Sneaky smile] [Sneaky smile]

Quick update, it's similar to a book I've read before about the villain and the heroine being childhood sweethearts, but the protagonist appears and later changes his mind because the villain gave the heroine the paintings he drew from childhood to adulthood.

Objectively speaking, four and a half stars, but for me it is a well-deserved five stars. Let me just make a few comments (personal opinion) 1. First of all, although there are many works with the theme of villains who express their voices, the later travel back to reality and the subsequent themes are very novel. 2. In terms of emotional scenes, most of the female protagonists are very good and have relatively distinct personalities. 3. In the early stage, they are indeed aggrieved, but in the middle stage, they gradually resist until the end. Isn't this just the thinking of normal people? Although it is a refreshing novel. But if it's fun from the beginning to the end, I don't think it's particularly engaging. 4. Although there aren't many scenes in the male protagonist's harem, it's just right. It's not like the stallion male protagonist just looking at it. 5. My favorite part is the second half of returning to reality, especially the part where the villain meets the author of the novel in reality. I feel really good, both narratively and lyrically. 6. The extra is also very humane, making up for the setting of a female protagonist and a system mother, as well as the depiction of children and a small number of children's futures. Summary: I think this book is in my top three for this subject matter. Not only is it a novel subject matter that brings the heroine back to reality, but it is also very good in terms of the character portrayal of the heroine and the emotional scenes. This is also the reason why I gave it five stars. It is a very good book. Finally, I hope everyone can be their own protagonists in the real world.

To be honest, the villain is a bit too cowardly, but the follow-up is very good. I hope you can be patient. The villain in the back is really in line with the temperament and calmness I want to see. This book is highly recommended. My opinions may be a bit individualistic. Please don't be violent online. Please

This book is really good to read. It may be a little frustrating at first, but unlike other villain novels, the pace has always been good, there are twists and turns, there are transformations, the holes that need to be filled have been filled in, and the ending is clear. I can say that I read it in one sitting, and I burst into tears at the end. I won't say more, it's so good.

It's so touching. The ending was like a revolving door. Written from a special angle, it's very tear-jerking and makes people reluctant to let go.

First of all, this book is really good. Each character is given a life in the author's writing. Each character has its own personality characteristics. The way the male protagonist expresses love is also different. The end of the novel also teaches people a truth. Don't do whatever you want based on your family's power. We should work hard with our own hands. Finally, I wish everyone can become a master of life. This book is really recommended.

I have finished reading it and have been following it since the 100th chapter. The plot and settings are some of the best I have ever seen. The male protagonist was a bit eunuch and rigid at the beginning, but he let go in the later stages. It was a bit annoying at the time. However, although the male protagonist's setting was not very good at the time, he saved it later. Now the ending enters the real world. I really didn't expect this. It is a very happy end. I cried a little at the end. Plot: 5 points Personality: 4 points Ending: 5 points