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Give yourself a five-star rating hahaha Another one hahaha

It's pretty good-looking, but I'm just asking, is it really not a double heroine post [Chigua]

Big boost to the author, this book is very well written.

The author is very familiar with Genshin Impact. It is good to bring the characters into the plot and have his own ideas, rather than simply telling the plot. The disadvantage is that there is a lack of handling of the details of the characters in Genshin Impact. Each character in Genshin Impact has their own story, and the protagonist does not reflect their unique personality charm in the process of meeting and getting along with them. Such as Zhongli's sense of security, Barbatos' understanding of freedom, etc. Genshin Impact is a game that I really like. It has been 6 months since I started playing it. From the casual play to the current obsession, among the games I have played, there has never been a game that made me yearn for the world inside, so I think there is still room for improvement. This is my personal opinion. After all, there are a thousand Hamorets among a thousand people. Come on, author!

It's okay, actually I think it's just average [laughing][laughing][thinking][thinking] Hmm... I'm not pretending anymore, I'm showing off, I'm... Ahem... I'm in a drama, I have to say it's really pretty, but the author, your group is too clean, there's no porn at all [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] Bad comments

I really like the style of this book, but... Can there be more plots with two female protagonists (ฅ>ω<*ฅ) QWQ By the way, I hope the author is not crooked, has ten consecutive double golds, and can get full life seven or seven (crossed out) Barbatos as soon as possible

There should be no knife without a knife. The author is a great person. He is more casual and relaxed. I don't see any heavy topics. There are no poisonous points. The writing style is okay. Anyway, I am attracted by it and I will go directly to the latest chapter. I hope it will not end hastily and leave a happy family ending for everyone. Finally, a belated happy birthday to the author! ! ! I wish you a burst of inspiration in the new year, and keep updating more!

I don't dare to give it a high rating because I'm afraid that the books I've seen before have been blocked. Some people say it's because fellow authors are jealous, and some people say it's because Tomato mistakenly thinks it's a score increase. Anyway, I think it's okay to give 5 stars [face covering] No one should know if I change it, hehe [laughing evilly]

Come on, take these five stars and keep walking...

It's my favorite type, but it's so short. It would be better if it was Lily. (ง •̀_•́)งCome on

It looks good, but I don't know if it can restore Xia An's memory, such as the magic of the Son of God. Based on this emotion, I feel that Xia An, who has lost his memory, will turn black on the spot and kill him through the abyss...

The author's writing is very good, but there are some broken things that could be added to the introduction. I finished reading it in the first few days. In 2023, only 4 or 5 chapters were updated in June 2024. It has been a year of exhaustion and the update is too slow. Anyway, it is a very good book. This is not only my favorite book, but also the first book I read. I have been tired of reading this book for another month. I hope the author can read this review and take my suggestions. I won't say anymore, I continue reading.

I felt very comfortable after watching it, without myocardial infarction, depression, high blood pressure, or anything like that. The plot is somewhat unreasonable but seems to be normal, so it's harmless. All in all, not bad. Suitable for relaxing 👀

Mao-chan, your book is very good. The character design is not broken and the plot is not much different. But I feel very confused about the character of the protagonist. I think she is cute, but I only feel the emotional intelligence of a fool. She likes to post, but I feel that she is more like a straight woman, and the combat power is too nb. The core of Herrscher from the studio next door have moved here. Just a post-lily article and a cool article are very strange, Meow-chan. Another thing is that the plot at the beginning is almost uninteresting. Shen He's plot goes by too fast, just like a revolving lantern, and it disappears. Although I know Shen He's character and plot, if it is not established in the text, it feels like a paper man. [Pouts] There is also the emotional problem of the protagonist. Mao Jiang, if you want the protagonist to want or feel warmth, you should slowly accumulate it. In the end, it will fall into place, and Yanzu readers can feel the resonance. As a book reader, I listened word for word, and the impression the protagonist gave me was this: "Feng Aotian + an idiot with no emotional intelligence + embarrassing emotional problems + a bisexual with ambiguous sexual orientation." Hmm... I don't even know what to say [face covering] If you don't know how to write, Mao-chan, I recommend a few books that I think have good character designs and acceptable plots, such as "Genshin Impact: Winter Old Six's Survival Manual", "Genshin Impact: Sticking Stickers Makes You Stronger", "The Secret World of Ghosts: This Doctor is Too Scary" Of course, Mao-chan, you have a hard time writing articles, and I can understand it (because I have written before). Those who speak unpleasantly just say things with their arms akimbo without hurting their backs, and just complain when they feel it is not working. That is a matter of personal cultivation and has nothing to do with you (unless the article is really bad). Okay, I've forced you so much, just take a look at it, Mao-chan, I'll withdraw first (dodge)

In terms of characterization and description, it is very good. I suggest that you add some description of the environment to give a more immersive feeling, rather than directly connecting the dialogue (please forgive me if I am wrong). In addition, I prefer daily life, so I am not particularly interested in battle scenes. Overall, it is very good. I highly recommend it. Loli is the best.

It's pretty good, but I feel like Xilin's death was too sudden. With so many abilities, she can still resist, right? (´-ι_-｀)

It's really good to watch, but the main plot of the game is a bit awkward for me. But I finally met such an active author who was reluctant to give up, so I persevered. The rest of the story is very interesting, so I suggest you skip the main plot chapters if you find it awkward.

Great, but one chapter is too short!

The connection between the characters' speech and the description of the fights are slightly inferior, but overall it's very good. And as long as you like white-haired lolita, we are friends! [Laughing evilly] But I feel that the characters of Brother Long and Yaya are a bit too evil.

The writing is good, I hope you will continue to work hard [Sending heartfelt wishes]

It's so beautiful that I must give it a five-star rating [laughing]

The description of daily life is really good, not impatient or impatient, it fits the original game very well, and the protagonist is also very cute [sending my heart] But it's just a little short [makes a face]

There is no reason for five stars, good work should be rewarded! In the question, if you read less than 30 minutes for 5 stars, you will be penalized: I just want to ask, who else can read a book of 100,000 words for six hours? Hahaha (ಡωಡ)hiahiahia, I am unparalleled in the world! ,

The writing style needs to be improved, but it's to my liking, keep up the good work! As I looked at it, I noticed that there seemed to be someone missing, a miner leader.

It looks good. Can you give me one of the 94 keys?

It is recommended that authors write 20,000 words a day (dog head)

It's very good. I'll come back a few times and the protagonist encounters a crisis.

I personally think it's wonderful, Don't comment too much on the others.

Very good looking @11 Come on

It looks good, and this is a collaboration between Genshin Impact and Honkai Impact