Dragon Ball: I Have an Immortality System

Great support for the author, the writing is so beautiful, the system skills and talents are so perfect. I hope that the world of high martial arts will kill monsters, and other worlds can write more, the better. If Blood Desolate destroys them all directly, plots against other people's bad guys, destroys the ancestor Hongjun, destroys the great road, destroys the way of heaven, plunders all materials, refines the prehistoric world, and then escapes from this world and continues to write about the prehistoric world. Don't write about the above, then the realm above will sound boring. The author can take a look at all the high-level martial arts worlds in animation, and finally say in the last sentence, don't write too much about the prehistoric era. After killing Ancestor Hongjun and Tiandao Dao, you can say goodbye and leave. Other worlds should only go to interesting places. Don't write about the uninteresting ones. That's it. That's it, the author

Don't deliberately suppress your combat power, otherwise it will be very boring. When your combat power reaches a certain level, you can go to GT or go to God of Destruction. Don't blindly suppress it. Don't deliberately suppress important things. Say it three times.

Not to mention that this novel is interesting about other cultivation methods. The author should not stop updating and unfinishing it. The other one is "I Seek Immortality in the World of Dragon Balls" which is also good, but it is a pity that the author ended it due to other reasons. The most pity is that the Dragon Ball Techniques run automatically. What a pity. , To be honest, if the author had written these three books, Dragon Ball I Just Want Immortality, Dragon Ball: I Am Goku's Twin Brother, and the Last Step, Dragon Ball I Can Automatically Turn the Kung Fu, directly into the last Dragon Ball I Can Automatically Turn Left Kung Fu, it would not be unfinished once it was written, I can be sure that this book The book is definitely a hit, although they say it is relatively weak, but those three novels are similar to Seeking the Demon in a sense where the protagonist's fate is controlled and he escapes and resists. It's a pity that the last novel was unfinished and ended immediately. If the last step of the novel is written seriously, plus the suggestions I gave him It is absolutely wonderful to go back to reality to fight against those people, to revive spiritual energy, etc. It is really a pity so the author should not finish the work and stop updating it. Although writing novels is a hobby, it may not be popular in the early stage, but it takes time. Among the many fanfics I have read, your novel has such potential. Come on, go for it.

Not bad, but there are too many things, and they may be "swallowed" later

I haven't watched it for long. I think the protagonist can promote the method of immortality in the later stage and recruit a few tool-man apprentices to open up new universes and expand the Dragon Ball map. Otherwise, only 18 universes are too small. The battle of immortal golden immortals can cause the birth and death of countless universes. In Dragon Ball, the three thousand worlds of immortality are created. After learning the three thousand avenues, the protagonist can refine the weapon of the Gate of Immortality (low configuration version)!

Five stars for you! It's quite interesting, but there are too many techniques, and the protagonist can't even practice them. The protagonist practices Dragon Ball Technique, and the protagonist's clone practices Immortality Technique... But I personally like it. After all, I love Dragon Ball Cultivation.

Very exciting, looking forward to the next book.

Another point is that the author should leave the portraits of the women he has found, that is, the women he is with, at the end of each chapter, so that the content can be more exciting, and the images of each character should be left at the end of each chapter.

This book is good, you can read it

It's okay to watch it for fun.