Theme: Black (the United States (government) that implements hegemony under capitalist control)
Attention! Not a cool article!
(The original author authorizes me to publish his novel on this platform and allows any modification. So if you don't like it, just complain to me)
No system, (very few people) weak superpowers, survival in the apocalypse, (late stage) world-class war, no savior!
Bai Wu woke up on the street, but he lost his memory. Who is he? What did he do before? He couldn't remember any of it. . . Does the cause of all this have anything to do with him? In order to find the answer, he had to embark on the road to find the truth. . .
Su Cheng was attacked by a zombie dog and swallowed its saliva. It seemed that he would be infected. However, when he woke up, he found that he was not infected, but seemed to be strengthened. Can the zombie virus really strengthen the human body? Is he really going to take the route of a cool male protagonist?
Will the island nation of Japan really resurrect imperialism?
Are the United States and Wu Kelan really the masterminds behind this?
Are intelligent zombies really awakening in the space capsule?
Can Bai Wu get his memory back?
What will happen to Su Cheng in the end?
What will happen to China in the end?
Where will the world end up?
What will the future of mankind be like?
Reader comments
Since as a publisher, I have the right to comment on the author's novel, after all, I am not the original author.
All in all it's pretty average!
Maybe it's not specific enough, so let me do a bunch of messy analysis:
Good ones (even worth learning):
△[Theme: Black (the United States (politics) that implements hegemony under capitalist control]]
△[There are several plot lines (the function is to make up for the limitations caused by the author's lack of descriptive power... Maybe, I analyzed it randomly)]
△[Serious science popularization (sometimes I do popular science unintentionally)]
Generally speaking (still seen in the past):
△[The length of the novel is about 400,000 words (a novella, but the author said that larger changes may be made in the future)]
△[Overall reasonableness (at least I don't see any big problems)]
△[Character setting (The author is inexperienced, so he is also very hard-headed in this aspect. Most people have extreme personalities, so it is easier for him to write. But that is general.)]
△[How exciting the plot is (there should be a twist or something)]
△[Sense of immersion (this... Tao is Tao, very Tao, experience it yourself)]
△[Attributes of non-shuangwen (personal favorite)]
Slightly worse (needs improvement):
△[The reasonableness of some details (probably due to the author's lack of experience)]
△[Overall descriptive power (lack of experience!)]
△[Detailed characterization (sometimes taking authenticity to a new level)]
△[Character portrayal (the character is pretty good)]
△[Overall rendering strength and rationality]
△[Overall rhythm]
△[Atmosphere (The tension in the apocalypse is not strong. However, the author may not write about survival in the apocalypse, so there is no need to highlight this atmosphere.]
It's so bad (needs criticism):
△[Update speed (whether it is the publisher or the original author)]
△[Author's experience (the original author has written more than 500,000 words before this, and the average one can only be called more than 100,000 words, and the others cannot be read. The original author claims: It is a miracle to be able to sign the contract)]
Since as a publisher, I have the right to comment on the author's novel, after all, I am not the original author. All in all it's pretty average! Maybe it's not specific enough, so let me do a bunch of messy analysis: Good ones (even worth learning): △[Theme: Black (the United States (politics) that implements hegemony under capitalist control]] △[There are several plot lines (the function is to make up for the limitations caused by the author's lack of descriptive power... Maybe, I analyzed it randomly)] △[Serious science popularization (sometimes I do popular science unintentionally)] Generally speaking (still seen in the past): △[The length of the novel is about 400,000 words (a novella, but the author said that larger changes may be made in the future)] △[Overall reasonableness (at least I don't see any big problems)] △[Character setting (The author is inexperienced, so he is also very hard-headed in this aspect. Most people have extreme personalities, so it is easier for him to write. But that is general.)] △[How exciting the plot is (there should be a twist or something)] △[Sense of immersion (this... Tao is Tao, very Tao, experience it yourself)] △[Attributes of non-shuangwen (personal favorite)] Slightly worse (needs improvement): △[The reasonableness of some details (probably due to the author's lack of experience)] △[Overall descriptive power (lack of experience!)] △[Detailed characterization (sometimes taking authenticity to a new level)] △[Character portrayal (the character is pretty good)] △[Overall rendering strength and rationality] △[Overall rhythm] △[Atmosphere (The tension in the apocalypse is not strong. However, the author may not write about survival in the apocalypse, so there is no need to highlight this atmosphere.] It's so bad (needs criticism): △[Update speed (whether it is the publisher or the original author)] △[Author's experience (the original author has written more than 500,000 words before this, and the average one can only be called more than 100,000 words, and the others cannot be read. The original author claims: It is a miracle to be able to sign the contract)]