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The writing is very good, but I personally think Nanami is too redundant.

It's super beautiful and has a strong sense of immersion. It is recommended to add a few more good-looking elves.

The Pipi tribe is in danger in Yuejian Mountain. Don't you want to find a way to protect them? The ghost type feels better than Gengar, and it can also hold things. The protagonist's ability is suitable for cultivating quasi-gods, accelerating growth, and becoming fat. Not many people write about being fat.

Your book is very well written! Strong sense of immersion

Good reading: In other words, there are only a few elven novels that suit my reading appetite. I hope the author can write well, and I hope the author can write this elven novel to a level of his own. Otherwise, this book will be a pity. (The shark-man scene almost made me abandon the book before, but luckily it was brought back later. People who respect life will never hate it.) The choice of heroine is also unique. Unlike other elf novels, they are all cabbage sisters or super-power sisters (I hope the author will not write too embarrassingly when writing emotional stories, which will easily make readers feel trapped in three rooms and one living room [laughs]). Different protagonists will always have different stories, and they will also attract different readers. There are rarely two books with the same heroine in my collection [laughs awkwardly]. I hope this book can be longer and include travel adventures in different regions. Elf stories include feelings, travel, conquering, and elves (I think people who like Pokémon must like to be a world champion, but it is more about different adventures and encounters. Otherwise, it would be a shame to travel back and forth just to become a world champion and fall in love with Sister Baicai) [laugh][laugh] It's @pass. Has the author changed? What I wrote after the Quartz Conference was not as good as before. It was short and weak, and the storyline was hard to explain in one sentence. The character of the protagonist has deteriorated, and it has become easier to conquer and train the elves. It was such a good book before, but now the writing style has changed so much that I feel like there are fewer people commenting! I hope the author... Forget it.. Just write your book as you wish! ! !

Can you tell me about the potential value? Potential value color

It looks good. I hope the main team can add a purple fat man and a fat man later.

So far, the writing is good, the pace is okay, neither too slow nor too fast, and the elves you can conquer are pretty good. When you find the ones you like, you can conquer and train them. It doesn't say what you specialize in or what kind of team you should form. This is pretty good, and the writing is quite heartwarming. Personally, the only bad thing is that there are too many storylines with Nanami.

Not bad, may I ask who the heroine is?

The writing is very good, but who knows the ranking of potential?

Come on, come on, come on! Nice! ! ! ! ! !

So awesome, the rhythm is great

Big cheers for the author!

There is still room for improvement in writing skills, but overall it is good. I hope the elves to be conquered will be more fresh in the future. I hope the author will add a Nido King and the huge rock snake on the mountain. Come on.

This book is very beautifully written

It's a good book but updates are too slow. Even the production team's donkeys don't dare to take a break like this.

Does anyone know the level?

Let's talk about potential value and level

Very good elf writing, the author continues to persevere

So wonderful! Come on, come on, come on! Breaking through a thousand chapters. . . . . . . . Good book, good book! Don't let readers down! ! Big

Not bad, not bad. Among the Pokémon I've watched, it's pretty good. The author should update it soon [Thinking]

It feels great. The author of one of the best Tomato Pokémon novels, please keep updating [Top post][Top post][Top post]

Does any heroine have a harem? Or do you still want to be a heroine without a heroine?

Nice looking and very comfortable

Not bad, not bad, so beautiful!

LOCK&LOCK HAPPY

Still very beautiful

Very nice, I'm reading it for the second time

The author writes very well

Not bad, keep up the good work