Something's Not Right with the Heroine

It is a rare Lily's love story that contains no insults to women and no misogyny. Every woman is very attractive. I really like Feng Meihui's character design. She is a high-flying flower who is selfish. Men are all springboards. She has to give in to get married to a wealthy family. She loves her daughter but not much. Everyone except herself is a tool. This kind of character will never have a good ending in other novels. But the author only treats her as a normal person and objectively depicts that women can be anyone.

I'll put the five-star review here first, it's very nice. Yan Zhixiao and Ning Bailu are great, great. However, I feel that the "system", the main god behind it, and the two departments are not good things. It's totally not enough!

Very good, I always feel that Xiaobai has the potential to be a yandere! ! Sunshine silly sweet girl & black-bellied little white flower (OS: these two are more jealous than the other). The article is generally good. In the later stage, the mysterious Lord God mentioned by the system should be revealed. Also, the author should work hard on the code. You are making me uncomfortable! ! ! [Cry][cry]

It's good to read. I think the lily plot of this book is much more reasonable than many other lily novels, because in the original book, the heroine loved a boy after all, so it wouldn't be right if she was shy about being flirted with by the current heroine from the beginning. Take it step by step and it will suit your appetite [laughs]

It's very interesting, but I hope the author can add more and not force it. Please don't criticize me, thank you. Authors are human beings too. Authors also need to rest. But if you are really okay, author, please update soon.

It's really good-looking [sending my heart] I really like this type [laughing] so please update more [please update more]

Good looking! This is my first time reading this kind of book. It's very interesting ~ Ning Bailu and Yan Zhixiao have a good relationship ~ [laughs] The only drawback is: there are too few chapters and it's not enough to read. I hope the author can update it quickly! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! [Shy] [Love]

Dear! This is the best two-female story I have ever read. Wow, you don't know, I lay in bed at night and watched it from 12 o'clock to 9 o'clock in the morning. Anyway, it's pretty good! Hurry up and force me to go to your house and steal the toilet seat! !

Well written (*๓´╰╯`๓)♡ Love it, love it, love it [adoration][adoration][adoration]

The writing is very good, and the portrayal of the two female protagonists is normal, without making the more aggressive one into a masculine TP or anything like that. The two heroines redeemed each other, and it was particularly sad to see Yan Zhixiao struggling to give up in the middle, but Xiaobai unconditionally accepted all of Zhixiao's shrinkage and weakness, and Zhixiao also firmly became Xiaobai's knight. She watched her heroine become stronger and stronger, becoming her unique king, while Xiaobai carefully protected Zhixiao, who was her knight and her rose. They would love each other forever until death. The deputy CP showed up so late but it was very nice. I didn't like the fact that Xiao Zhuo and Cheng Yao didn't meet their parents! This pair is very similar to a lily essay I wrote, but mine is the other way around, with the cold and innocent sister and the gentle and fishing-type sister. Lily race high!

It's pretty good. It's very sweet in the front and the emotional scenes are also good, but I guess it's definitely a knife in the back. After all, the system tasks are here. What else is there? The knife must be a knife (the child has been stunned by the knife [smile])

I try to be rational and objective in my ratings. I give full marks. This short story is worth it. Although it has some shortcomings, its flaws are not hidden. It is not a perfect work, but it is still an excellent short story. The shadow cast by the Sword of Damocles in the first and middle half of the article is always lingering, becoming the biggest driving force for the development of the story in the early stage, but it also always leaves the sweetness shrouded in a low pressure. I originally thought that this low pressure would continue to cover the air until it could not be contained, but it ended in the middle of the article. That's right. If it lasts too long, it cannot be called a sweet article [Blowing Kiss] The emotional line of the article can be said to be very delicate and amazing. There are obviously no major events, but the delicate emotions are reflected in ordinary daily life. This is rare. In fact, I also conceived a novel with equal respect for each other. However, after I actually wrote it, I realized that the writing was not strong enough to write what I wanted. I put it aside after writing a short amount. Rather than ending it hastily, it is better to be prepared and start again. In fact, regarding the reincarnation in the book, I thought that the protagonists would make a little trial and error in the reincarnation to earn enough chips for themselves to negotiate with the system. However, the system was in an absolute dominant position from beginning to end. But it doesn't matter, even this is good. After all, it is a new idea and it doesn't follow the old-fashioned plot. However, the description of the main god, system, etc. Is still missing in the book. I personally think this has become the biggest shortcoming of this book. Of course, in addition to this, there is also the rebirth of Miss Bai mentioned at the beginning. The article does not reach this point in time in the end. I can't help but wonder, is it better to push back the time point and let the timeline reach Miss Bai's rebirth and do it again than reincarnation? After all, reincarnation led to the incomplete main god system, etc. But no matter what, this short story is worthy of full stars, and the book review has even been written as a long review... I originally wanted to talk about the interesting clues and allusions in the book, so I will just mention it in one sentence. I won't say too much. I wish them to be at least worry-free in this life. Use your heart as the rhythm, use dreams as the rhyme, not only sing, but also sing the future.

Damn, it looks really good Ning Yan is pushed to death, so nice! Every character is very vivid~ The large text does not make people feel that the description is too vernacular and makes it awkward to read. It is just that there are too few chapters. When I read this text, I felt a whole new look. It is so attractive. Hey, I haven't stayed up late for a long time. I stayed up all night reading it. If you want to make a suggestion, let's put in more cookies! This system and everything will die to me! Children can't bear to see these cruel things [crying]

I like this type of writing very much. Unlike some stories where the heroine has strange emotions in her heart and falls in love with it. The heroine in this article is more vivid, with ups and downs of emotions and inner conflicts. I advise the author to read more every day.

Wow, very delicate psychological activities. I haven't seen a plot that made me feel less embarrassed in a long time. I watched it before and almost immediately after we met, I started asking my sister to have an affair (I'm sorry for disapproving). This plot made me shout: Lesbians, so beautiful [KISS] [Love] You little lovers must smash each other! ! ! ! !

It's really good. It's not a casual novel, it's in-depth. No matter which platform it's on, there aren't many such delicate Lily novels.

The rhythm of the story is very good, gradually and gradually, the plot is very close to reality, and there is no deliberate behavior. The protagonist's three views are unimaginable to me. There are still people with such correct views in novels today.

I like this story very much. It's very interesting and sweet. The emotional descriptions are so good. I can still bear some of the knives in the middle. [Full] This is the first time I've read all the extra chapters of the sub-cp. It's also very good. [Blow kiss]

It's so beautiful, I've never thanked the lilies in my hometown, I only love lilies [laughter]

It looks good. As a lily fan, I give it a thumbs up! ! (●'◡'●)ﾉ♥

I came across this novel by accident, and I was intrigued by the extra chapter at the beginning🌚💪🏻 Then I continued to read it. I can't say enough about Ning's doting, hahahahaha, and the trust and love for each other can be reflected. Moreover, I have rarely seen this kind of plot with system battles, so I watched it quite well. Overall, it is good, hehe [laughs]

Woo woo woo, it's so well written. The emotional description is really good. The collision of Zhixiao's rationality and sensibility. Bai Lu's delicate thoughts. There's nothing too big in the whole text. Their relationship is really touching. 17 Reincarnations. Falling in love 17 times. No matter how many times they reincarnate, they can't change the ending of I fall in love with you. It's really well written here. I can't even imagine what they would be like if they didn't have him. This novel is really well written. I've also read a lot of Lily articles. This book definitely ranks among the best. This is the first time I have posted such a long review. Ultimately, it is because the book is so beautiful. [Like] I really recommend it.

It's very beautiful. In fact, I saw it last year, but then I couldn't find it for some reason. I thought it was a pity. Then I found it again a few days ago. It's really beautiful. I'll still be attracted to the plot after watching it for a second time [laugh][laugh]

This book is so beautiful! I have found a lot of lily books, and this is one of the few that I like. I've seen a lot of weird developments in the relationship between the two heroines, but this is not the case, it's very natural and comfortable. Come on, the author, I'm optimistic about you＾0＾~

Wow wow wow wow wow this is really beautiful, a breath of fresh air in tomatoes, the writing is very good, and the character settings are also very good. I especially like to read Bai Hewen's description of the main CP, and this article happens to embody the kind of delicate brushwork that I like very well! Just looking at it makes me feel sweet and sticky (the description is very strange haha). The descriptions of the characters are also very realistic and appear to be very three-dimensional. Everyone has a personality caused by their original family and growth environment. Although it was a little rushed in the later stage, maybe I was eager to fill in the holes. ? But overall it looks good

Read the main text first and then the extras, otherwise it will be sweet, sweet on top of sweetness, and Cheng Zhuo's story is also very sweet. There is a story line, and the plot is good, with a little knife interspersed in the middle (not a big problem), but the shortcoming is that the plot of Yan Ning together is still too short. Overall it's very good, highly recommended! ! !

I really like this book. The content and plot are compact. If you look closely at the whole book, it may be a bit sloppy in some places, but it really won't affect the viewing experience! And the heroine gradually becomes more sinister later on, which is interesting to think about. [Thinking] Maybe some plots are a little bit biased, but everyone is good. It's so nonsense, why not go see it yourself [Love] I feel that this book is acceptable to everyone and does not make some people with mysophobia feel uncomfortable. Therefore, I recommend everyone to jump into this book directly!

Super exciting, very beautiful, especially the 60 or so pictures, very beautiful

This book is ingeniously written, and the plot is also very exciting. It is unique and has a unique flavor. [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love]

I read many parts of this book on another account, so it is possible that the system feels that I have read too little and the evaluation is untrue. But I actually finished reading this book. The world view of this book is very unique, and the writing is also very good. The writing style is very good, and the plot is very good. I really like to read it. It's just that the plot in the early stages was a little bit not very acceptable to me. But it doesn't affect it. Overall, this book is very well written, and I personally think it is one of the best books I have ever read.