Biochemical Siege: I Can Control Life

After roughly reading the existing chapters, I have some questions. For example, the first few chapters at the beginning; I don't know why it feels a bit strange when I read it carefully, and it has a kind of mind-numbing beauty. Second point: The author may have written the book in an idealistic way. Since it is an article about the zombie siege (how the protagonist is reincarnated is mentioned at the beginning), the process of the protagonist is too smooth. There is no sense of twists and turns in the first thirty chapters. It would be okay if it was written as a refreshing article. Then, others have already mentioned things like the life essence, zombie essence, etc. I won't go into details. Finally, the sense of crisis and the battle process are, well, not very good. Then, the behavior of the country is a bit too flattering to the protagonist team, because at the beginning, as long as the military still retains combat effectiveness, thermal weapons are almost a dimensionality-reducing blow to zombies, while the author praises special functions on a large scale. In addition to the Muzu mentioned in the article, if the speed at which the protagonist collects the life liquid is really followed, it is not difficult for me to think that Muzu should have been able to transform in strength at such a speed by cooperating with the country. Of course, the author's article also has many advantages. For example, compared with the locations and foreground processes of general zombie abilities, it is more relevant to ordinary life. The second point is that the composition of the protagonist group is relatively fresh. Compared with the general group of people who fight alone and only fight with close people first, it has a more life-like atmosphere. However, there are some problems. The subjectivity of the characters is a bit poor. I hope it can be improved. Of course, this is just my subjective wish, and the author can handle it as appropriate. I wish the author the best. 'May your writing be like divine help, may your writings and thoughts flow like a river of stars, may your every word shine in the world, and may your writing skills reach a higher level! '[Ask for attention][Ask for attention][Ask for attention][Like post][Like post][Like post][Ask for more updates][Ask for more updates] The author has also written more perfect stories later, and I hope the work will get better and better. 😘😘😘

In the world of zombies, the plot is very good and interesting, please write more!

Chen Huaian is so awesome, he will become a great player in the future! The author's writing style is smooth and impeccable! Worth recommending!

It looks good, the content is exciting, the writing is smooth and logical, and the IQ is online. It's worth a read.