I Behave Calmly Among Women

Save everyone's time. 1. If you are not a single female protagonist, don't enter if you don't like it. 2. The first volume was a bit messy due to my lack of experience. I wrote the Master to death, but I will write about reincarnation in the future. 3. The rest of the story will depend on that mission. This is the meaning. 4. The system is not very useful. 5. He is not the kind of delicate male protagonist, so if you don't like it, don't enter. 6. The stories between volumes are connected, but the connection is not big. 7. I don't write much about cultivation. I devote myself to writing about Shura Field and Yandere. 8. The male protagonist will become stronger in the later stage, after all, he is a yandere. But the first and middle stages will not be that strong, so readers who like to watch it too happily can stop there. 9. The heroine in my novel may be more gentle and not too tough. 10. There may be an acting plot, but the male protagonist himself is not good. 11. Don't complain about my fighting style, I really don't write about this kind of thing. 12. What we strive to create is a perfect ending.

I've read a few of the same genre, but this one is really good-looking. I can't explain why, but it's just good-looking [Blow kiss] [Like]

The author's writing is very good. I really like the character of the male protagonist described by the author. He does not describe the male protagonist as a female too much. I have to mention Drunken Haoyue's White Lotus. I can't accept such a description, but the plot of the story is really good. This description of the male protagonist's character reminded me of the two books "The True Man" and "The Self-cultivation of the Male God" written by Tudou. I really liked them. Both the author's books and Tudou's books are to my liking [adoration]. Among the Tomato Goddess, I have to mention the female swordswoman who eats a carrot, which is also very good. Come on, author [please update], I finished reading it in two days, it was not enough [crazy] [crazy]

So far, it seems that the logic is there, the plot is there, and it won my heart. I accidentally entered it when I was in a book shortage and read the latest chapter directly. Good luck to the author.

The plot description is very good in a book of the same type. Starting to look forward to the next volume

It's like a breath of fresh air among the books I've read recently. It's quite interesting.

The first volume is indeed not very good in all aspects of writing and plot, but the quality of the second volume has obviously improved a lot (it's like a replacement), but the new author is excusable. I hope you won't abandon the book because of the first volume. After all, there are really not many orthodox female heroes on the Tomato male channel. Five stars for the author.

Very good, maybe the plot is not that new, but it doesn't seem cliched. Overall, it may not be very amazing, but it is worth watching!

I feel good after reading this volume. Let me share my personal thoughts: When I saw the cover, I thought it was about a heroine who is casual. When I came in and saw the description of the protagonist, I subconsciously thought that this was a scumbag playing a trumpet. After all, the attitude was really as indifferent as water, as if the world is a chess game and I am the chess player. After reading for a while, I found that he revealed a clear and stupid character, and then I found that this seemed to be a yandere article. I don't understand yandere. I have not read the corresponding anime or novels, so I won't comment on it. However, I still want to say how to recycle the foreshadowing at the end of the first volume in the future. Overall evaluation: Good, eye-catching. Let's talk about what to do after reading it (I hope the author won't be liked by yandere) [laughing]

It's been a long time since I've seen a book of such good quality! It's just a pity that the master in the first volume will appear in the future, and I don't know if there will be another one in the future. In fact, I'm a little curious whether the ending will be that all the female protagonists in the world end up with the male protagonist! After all, the purpose of reading novels is to have no regrets!

Very good, very good, the author's writing is very delicate, and the characters are well created. Each character has a distinct personality on the page. The detailed description of the environment is also very good, which not only highlights the characters, but also pave the way for the subsequent plot. The story has ups and downs, and the twists in the plot are unexpected but reasonable. The plot of the whole text is compact and does not drag out at all. The author has grasped the three elements of the novel just right, making it a good book [please pay attention] [like] [love] @

It's okay. I don't think there's anything wrong with it. Of course, it's worse than Zui Haoyue. The number of words is a bit short at the moment, not enough to read, and then there is a feeling of blandness, neither teasing nor torture nor reversal (in fact, the author worked very hard to write, but it is really clear water) The car is not fast, almost no (*￣m￣) (bad review I am very optimistic about the author Da Da, and I hope he can write well (●°u°●) " Finally, the author should take care of himself (reject eunuchs) (observe carefully) Can you try to make it longer? It's a bit fast.

This is my first time reading this kind of article, it's very interesting [Sending my heart to you]

This book is really good, especially the third volume, which is written very well for me. Overall, it is great [admiration]. Let me talk about my thoughts: This is the book that I have really finished. I read it one by one, and I feel a little sense of accomplishment. In fact, it is not easy to write novels about female heroes, so I often look for good-looking novels about female heroes. The best ones I have found so far are this one and "For Peace" by Eating a Carrot. They are both very good, have a knife, and are very comfortable to read, haha. Finally, I hope you will move forward and look forward to the next book [Love] [Love]

This is the author's first book. The first volume lacks some excitement, and the plot description is somewhat imperfect. However, I have to say that the author's writing style is very good. Both the wording and the description of the emotional changes of the characters are very good. It is a good book worth reading.

This should be the first book that I followed from more than a dozen chapters to the end. Originally, I wasn't very interested in reading the first volume, but I persisted. But the story of Ye Zhaoli in the second volume made me fall in love with this book completely, and I waited for the update every night. But starting from the third volume, it felt a bit rushed, as if it ended hastily. The underworld ended even more hastily. Although it has shortcomings, I think this is still a book worth reading.

I feel that the actual rating of this book is actually around 4.2 Or 4.3. The early writing is quite good, and each heroine is trying his best to shape her. However, I feel that the author has an obsession with yandere [facepalm]. Basically, every heroine is more or less yandere, and later she will go to the underworld. The writing is really messy, and the force value is completely broken. I endured it and read it. To sum up, the first and middle stages are really well written, and the literary value is very high. I will try to read the following part of the underworld. After all, it seems to be the author's first book. It is already very good to have such results. Come on, author!

It's pretty good, but the ending where the villain dies is a bit sloppy. I feel like the author doesn't know what to write next, but it's a good ending, with a family reunion. The writing is also good, and there are few poisonous points. It's worth reading.

Overall, it's pretty good, about 8.5 Points. The ending is a bit rushed and some settings are added to forcefully fulfill the needs of the plot. However, the roles of the heroines are also good, and the emotional scenes are OK. I recommend watching it (Yandere).

Read the entire text without skipping. Although the author is very modest and only gave this book an 8-point rating, I think it is at least a 9.5-Point level. First of all, this book has underlying logic, and any unreasonable parts can be corrected by setting them up, so most places can be explained without making sense. Secondly, the author has certain cultural literacy. In terms of poetry, there is nothing bad; in terms of writing, you can see the continuity and transition. Finally, let's also mention the shortcomings. On the one hand, perhaps due to space limitations or other reasons, the author's description of emotions is somewhat lacking. The heroines fell in love too quickly, as if they were just greedy for sex. On the other hand, it felt that the author thought a lot, but ended too quickly and did not write it out. The ending was a bit sloppy. But! What is worthy of praise is that although it is sloppy, it is not brainless or perfunctory and worthy of readers. This is why I gave it 10 points! Although it ends quickly, it doesn't end badly, doesn't perfunctory the reader, and isn't brainless. 10 Points for this!

I came to review after reading the first volume. I can only say that the author's writing style is indeed good and the characters are well portrayed. Being able to have such strength in the field of female heroes is already very powerful. I have read quite a few female heroines. The enlightenment book "White Lotus in the World of Female Heroes" mentioned by the author is also my earliest. One of the books I have read in the past can only be said to be Zui Haoyue. After reading his book, I couldn't stand other novels about women for a while. Until now, I read the author's book again, and I am interested in reading it again. I don't know what other people think, but I personally like the character of the protagonist. Come on.

Overall, it's good, but the ending is a bit rushed, and some characters are a bit sloppy. But I read it in one day. Few books can attract me so much. I'm looking forward to reading it. The plot and emotions are good. It's the kind of feeling after being misunderstood and suppressed. I like it very much [Blow Kiss][Flow Kiss][Flow Kiss]

The author's literary talent is good, and the heroine's yandere and dihua are well portrayed. Except for the plot design and rhythm of the first volume, which is a bit stiff and delayed, the second volume gradually gets better. Although there are still some dissatisfaction in the conflict design, the overall look and feel is better than the first volume. Personally, I like the third volume the best, both in terms of plot and character creation. The look and feel is better than the first two volumes, and the fourth volume also starts well. However, in the later period, I felt that the author might want to finish it as soon as possible, so the pace was a lot faster. Many scenes were passed over in one stroke and the writing power required to reduce the difficulty of the story was reduced. However, I can understand it. Overall, it is still a good yandere novel. I like this deeply paranoid and suffocating love.

I skipped to the ending after reading two volumes. The female protagonist can see that they fall in love with the male protagonist because of his outstanding performance. What does the hero like about them? I seriously thought about their merits and wanted to praise them, but after thinking for a long time I could only see that they were beautiful and nothing else attractive! Male Protagonist: It's just the author's mission [punch out] Because he has to conquer the female protagonist and complete the task, the male protagonist's performance is too cheesy. Nuan Nan deducts one star, after all, Nuan Nan ranks behind the dog [stunned]

At first I thought the master was the heroine, but it turned out that the senior sister became yandere and got the body of the hero. I thought this was where the yandere novel started? Of course not. Later, he went to court and got married to the person he loved. Do you think the life of monogamy has just begun? Of course not, the male protagonist went to the second world to cause trouble again. The plots of the first two [realms] were quite normal, until the third one, the style of painting suddenly changed, and the author "Wuhu" gradually took off from the same place. In short, it was refreshing and caught off guard. The result is a happy ending. The situation is poetic and picturesque, the emotions are revealed in the words, and the writing style is unique in my life.

The plot is exciting and the writing is excellent in many places. Sometimes a description of an environment exaggerates the atmosphere and makes the character's psychology more prominent; sometimes a quotation of a poem makes people's eyes brighter. It may not fit the atmosphere, but it makes people feel fresh. There is no indiscriminate use of punctuation and sentence fragmentation like elementary school students; there is no random excerpting of chapters and sentences to make up the number of words like that of junior high school students; the protagonist does not have the disgusting wretchedness of a big man who picks his feet. The harem story is written as if it is true 😂. It seems that the author is also a person of the same fate who has thrived under the influence of exam-oriented education. [Laughing and crying]

This is the ninth book of 🍅, and I personally feel that the overall plot is good. The whole book is divided into four parts. I personally think that the main plot of the first three parts is fairly steady, but at the end of the journey to the underworld, the plot felt faster. The golden finger of the system was also offline for a while, and the ending was a bit like a deus ex machina. But fortunately, I made dumplings in the finale. I loved watching Dzogchen. It's a pity that the three Bai sisters didn't join the big family in the end? It would be better if you could continue to write a little more about the day after tomorrow [blowing kiss]

To be honest, this is the author's first book. The level is really average, but the writing style is very good. There are occasional small poisonous points, but the problem is not big. Overall, it is very nice. The author is very open to ask for advice and is very cute [laughs] [OK]. He carefully revised and listened to the opinions. I don't know why the reviews of this book always have "sharp reviews" saying that Du and Tang's are indeed not the best ones, but they are not so exaggerated. They are too violent [laughter]

It's okay, but it would be nice if it had a single female protagonist. Lu Sha really likes it! ! ! [Shy][Shy][Shy] That "little guy" is really great! ! ! It's completely different from other titles. I hope Lu Sha's role will be more ٩(*´◒`*)۶

The writing is really good, and the writing style is also very good. Many people may think that the system is too weak, but I think the author has controlled the presence of the system just right. I always feel that the highlight of this kind of White Lotus novel about female protagonists is that the weak male protagonist deals with multiple powerful female protagonists. If the male protagonist becomes too powerful, it will not have this flavor. Secondly, the author's character creation is very good. In this volume alone, I remember the male protagonist (it is rare that the male protagonist is an ordinary person with normal views), the master (a good master, he has nothing to say to the senior sister), the senior sister (the psychological portrayal of the yandere is very good), Sister Lu (a big sister, a hero), as well as the Demon Lord and Wang Xing (⁎⁍̴̛ᴗ⁍̴̛⁎) I hope the author will continue to work hard~