Note——[Dual heroines, dual perspectives]
Perspective 1: Su Qing is the main character
After Su Qing had a car accident in the modern world, she accidentally became the host of Lord Sword Spirit. Her mission was to practice, and she finally succeeded in ascension. Unexpectedly, something unexpected happened along the way, and she accidentally got involved with a certain big boss.
Reader comments
The plot is still good. If the writing is more detailed, the number of words is increased, the nonsense is written a little more, and the emotional lines are processed a little slower, it is indeed a very good novel. After removing the unreasonable parts, it is written into a pure and refreshing novel. Then the heroine is written to be more lively, and then the second heroine is made more sinister. Then the plot can be written as why the two of them are looking for something to travel and cultivate immortality. The mainland encounters various things. The two protagonists test each other on the road, and then write the plot of the knife passerby, and then the two confirm their feelings for each other. Well, the matter is resolved, and then they meet the final villain, and finally become a god, and finally live a happy life without shame. It is good, good, and the plot is good. Then I practice my writing. The first part is light and funny, and the second part is more sadistic. Well, that is a very good novel.
Well, the pace is too fast and there is too much to handle, but the writing is okay. If you write more, the author will definitely be able to write a super nice novel [flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss]
Let's collect the number of five-stars for the author [eat melon] and hope that the rating will be released soon [laughing evilly]
Nice! Nice! The author is begging me greatly! Update soon! [Top post]
Can you continue writing? I think this plot is very good [sad][sad][sad]
The plot was good, but the ending was too hasty. Also, Su Wu's perspective hasn't been finished yet, right?
I hope the author can continue writing and look forward to his future works.
It looks great, please give it a thumbs up to the author [Send heartfelt thanks]
Finished reading, good, good, good
Ahhhh, I want to see the follow-up, this ending makes me so uncomfortable
The author is great, this book can have a sequel, that is, the second one
There is so little emotional description. I wish there could be more. The ending is quite hasty. I'm really curious about Su Wu's perspective behind it.
I really like asking the author to publish a second book
It's so good, the plot doesn't drag, but the ending is a bit rushed
The plot is still good. If the writing is more detailed, the number of words is increased, the nonsense is written a little more, and the emotional lines are processed a little slower, it is indeed a very good novel. After removing the unreasonable parts, it is written into a pure and refreshing novel. Then the heroine is written to be more lively, and then the second heroine is made more sinister. Then the plot can be written as why the two of them are looking for something to travel and cultivate immortality. The mainland encounters various things. The two protagonists test each other on the road, and then write the plot of the knife passerby, and then the two confirm their feelings for each other. Well, the matter is resolved, and then they meet the final villain, and finally become a god, and finally live a happy life without shame. It is good, good, and the plot is good. Then I practice my writing. The first part is light and funny, and the second part is more sadistic. Well, that is a very good novel. Well, the pace is too fast and there is too much to handle, but the writing is okay. If you write more, the author will definitely be able to write a super nice novel [flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss]
Let's collect the number of five-stars for the author [eat melon] and hope that the rating will be released soon [laughing evilly]
Nice! Nice! The author is begging me greatly! Update soon! [Top post]
Can you continue writing? I think this plot is very good [sad][sad][sad]
The plot was good, but the ending was too hasty. Also, Su Wu's perspective hasn't been finished yet, right?
I hope the author can continue writing and look forward to his future works.
It looks great, please give it a thumbs up to the author [Send heartfelt thanks]
Finished reading, good, good, good
Ahhhh, I want to see the follow-up, this ending makes me so uncomfortable
The author is great, this book can have a sequel, that is, the second one
There is so little emotional description. I wish there could be more. The ending is quite hasty. I'm really curious about Su Wu's perspective behind it.
I really like asking the author to publish a second book
It's so good, the plot doesn't drag, but the ending is a bit rushed