I Got Played by the Sword Spirit
被剑灵坑了
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 200k Words
- Genre
- Unknown
- Subgenre
- Unknown
- Updated
- 3y ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Synopsis
92Chapters
4Reads
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The plot is still good. If the writing is more detailed, the number of words is increased, the nonsense is written a little more, and the emotional lines are processed a little slower, it is indeed a very good novel. After removing the unreasonable parts, it is written into a pure and refreshing novel. Then the heroine is written to be more lively, and then the second heroine is made more sinister. Then the plot can be written as why the two of them are looking for something to travel and cultivate immortality. The mainland encounters various things. The two protagonists test each other on the road, and then write the plot of the knife passerby, and then the two confirm their feelings for each other. Well, the matter is resolved, and then they meet the final villain, and finally become a god, and finally live a happy life without shame. It is good, good, and the plot is good. Then I practice my writing. The first part is light and funny, and the second part is more sadistic. Well, that is a very good novel. Well, the pace is too fast and there is too much to handle, but the writing is okay. If you write more, the author will definitely be able to write a super nice novel [flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss]
Let's collect the number of five-stars for the author [eat melon] and hope that the rating will be released soon [laughing evilly]
Nice! Nice! The author is begging me greatly! Update soon! [Top post]
Can you continue writing? I think this plot is very good [sad][sad][sad]
The plot was good, but the ending was too hasty. Also, Su Wu's perspective hasn't been finished yet, right?
I hope the author can continue writing and look forward to his future works.
There is so little emotional description. I wish there could be more. The ending is quite hasty. I'm really curious about Su Wu's perspective behind it.
Finished reading, good, good, good
It's so good, the plot doesn't drag, but the ending is a bit rushed
Ahhhh, I want to see the follow-up, this ending makes me so uncomfortable