I Became a Beautiful Girl and Started a Healing Life

The campus is not suitable for curing others, but society may be more suitable.

Oh my god, according to the current plot, there are already three or four beautiful girls who like the protagonist, but only Chen Qianqian likes her as a female cosplayer. Although Chen Qianqian only appeared in one chapter, I quite like her character. I got it [Note]

Regarding this matter, I will simply say a few words, as long as you understand it. In short, this matter is the situation now. Everyone can see the specifics and say a few words. Maybe you don't understand it clearly, but the meaning is that. If you don't know, you don't have to guess. I have seen this kind of thing a lot. I just want to say that everyone who understands understands. I won't explain it to those who don't understand. After all, it's good that you know it. Just take a closer look. Don't ask me what's wrong. The interests involved are too great. It won't be good for you or me to tell you. Just pretend you don't know. For the rest, I can only say that the water is very deep and a lot of things are involved. It's hard for you to find the detailed information yourself, and most of it has been deleted from the Internet, so I can only say that I understand everything. People who understand have basically made profits and landed ashore, etc. People who don't understand will never understand. The key is that people who understand understand it on their own. You don't know who understands and you can't ask for advice.

Pretty good. The subject matter and content are quite attractive. The writing style is clearly that of a new author. The story is told well, but I feel like the connection could be better. And then there is... A noteworthy point. It's the use of pronouns. I saw that the author likes to use her to represent the protagonist in the article, and they represent the protagonist group. This fact can easily cause readers to feel "fatigued" while reading. This actually doesn't matter, but you must also grasp the reference. For example, in Chapter 49, all the protagonists in the entire chapter are replaced by her, but in the middle of the article, the character referred to by "she" obviously changes. Original text: "Listening to Ai Qing's words, Qiu Ying thought about the same truth, and simply patted her face gently to make herself more awake. After that, she ran to get some milk, fruits and the like, and placed them on the table. After a simple breakfast, they started studying again. " There is a problem with the connection between reading here and the above, although the perspective here has changed, from Mu Yuan and Youyou's "flirting" to Ai Qing and Qiu Ying's review. Her two referents were transferred from Mu Yuan to Qiu Ying, and later to Mu Yuan (posting cos video). Although the perspective changes later, the image of the subject is still empty. Pronouns are originally just a more convenient reference, but excessive use may lead to overshadowing the subject. These are just my personal opinions. I don't often read paragraph reviews when I read books, so it may be just my reading experience. I was actually a new author before. After writing a chapter, I usually read the entire content of the chapter aloud or silently to ensure smooth flow. If the author has any ideas, you might as well try my method~

The protagonist has a bit of a charming physique, and then he bullies the protagonist... In the end, it turned into a job and a job, but he didn't use violence to bully the protagonist, he just asked him to run errands, and then he was not sure who was the heroine, maybe it was engraving... The second is the system, and then I don't know [face covering] and the plot of helping the homeless brothers. Anyone who has watched that video may not feel poisonous, because people are affectionate and the law is ruthless. Maybe the author has also rectified it~

I prefer this kind of relaxed style. Good luck, author!

Hey, Lily is infinitely good [learned] [laughing evilly]

Generally speaking, it's okay. There may be a little problem with the character description. Many times I feel that (well... Personally) she can be replaced with the protagonist's name, or another way of expression.

Very well written, keep it up

There is a character who seriously affects the progress of the plot, he is the author