After Becoming a Beautiful Girl, She Started a Healing Life

The campus is not suitable for curing others, but society may be more suitable.

Oh my god, according to the current plot, there are already three or four beautiful girls who like the protagonist, but only Chen Qianqian likes her as a female cosplayer. Although Chen Qianqian only appeared in one chapter, I quite like her character. I got it [Note]

Regarding this matter, I will simply say a few words, as long as you understand it. In short, this matter is the situation now. Everyone can see the specifics and say a few words. Maybe you don't understand it clearly, but the meaning is that. If you don't know, you don't have to guess. I have seen this kind of thing a lot. I just want to say that everyone who understands understands. I won't explain it to those who don't understand. After all, it's good that you know it. Just take a closer look. Don't ask me what's wrong. The interests involved are too great. It won't be good for you or me to tell you. Just pretend you don't know. For the rest, I can only say that the water is very deep and a lot of things are involved. It's hard for you to find the detailed information yourself, and most of it has been deleted from the Internet, so I can only say that I understand everything. People who understand have basically made profits and landed ashore, etc. People who don't understand will never understand. The key is that people who understand understand it on their own. You don't know who understands and you can't ask for advice.

I prefer this kind of relaxed style. Good luck, author!

The protagonist has a bit of a charming physique, and then he bullies the protagonist... In the end, it turned into a job and a job, but he didn't use violence to bully the protagonist, he just asked him to run errands, and then he was not sure who was the heroine, maybe it was engraving... The second is the system, and then I don't know [face covering] and the plot of helping the homeless brothers. Anyone who has watched that video may not feel poisonous, because people are affectionate and the law is ruthless. Maybe the author has also rectified it~

Pretty good. The subject matter and content are quite attractive. The writing style is clearly that of a new author. The story is told well, but I feel like the connection could be better. And then there is... A noteworthy point. It's the use of pronouns. I saw that the author likes to use her to represent the protagonist in the article, and they represent the protagonist group. This fact can easily cause readers to feel "fatigued" while reading. This actually doesn't matter, but you must also grasp the reference. For example, in Chapter 49, all the protagonists in the entire chapter are replaced by her, but in the middle of the article, the character referred to by "she" obviously changes. Original text: "Listening to Ai Qing's words, Qiu Ying thought about the same truth, and simply patted her face gently to make herself more awake. After that, she ran to get some milk, fruits and the like, and placed them on the table. After a simple breakfast, they started studying again. " There is a problem with the connection between reading here and the above, although the perspective here has changed, from Mu Yuan and Youyou's "flirting" to Ai Qing and Qiu Ying's review. Her two referents were transferred from Mu Yuan to Qiu Ying, and later to Mu Yuan (posting cos video). Although the perspective changes later, the image of the subject is still empty. Pronouns are originally just a more convenient reference, but excessive use may lead to overshadowing the subject. These are just my personal opinions. I don't often read paragraph reviews when I read books, so it may be just my reading experience. I was actually a new author before. After writing a chapter, I usually read the entire content of the chapter aloud or silently to ensure smooth flow. If the author has any ideas, you might as well try my method~

Come on! Beautifully written.

Very well written, keep it up

There is a character who seriously affects the progress of the plot, he is the author

Generally speaking, it's okay. There may be a little problem with the character description. Many times I feel that (well... Personally) she can be replaced with the protagonist's name, or another way of expression.

Hey, Lily is infinitely good [learned] [laughing evilly]

Very well written, keep it up 😊

One-to-many harmony 👴🏻 meaning, invincible and beautiful. 👴🏻❤️, And then I hope you won't be banned. So you're back?

Why does such a beautiful book only have a score of 7.9? Let me add some points to the author [top post]

Chasing books in the middle of the night... I've finished reading them [crying][crying]

Finished reading, it's okay

I feel that this kind of healing article is the best for being single. You can be beautiful alone and then heal others [laughter]

It's very good. Don't criticize me. I was fooled by those novels in the past. I hope the author won't be like them and label them as a cure.

Good looking, come on author

There must be a lot of people talking about Our Lady when writing about this kind of subject matter, but the author won't run away [sending my heart]

It's really beautiful and warm. I hope to see more pictures of Tie Tie in the future, I like this kind of daily life

The author did a great job. It is a healing style. Maybe people don't like this style. Few people read it, but I think it is very well done.

It's easy to tie very well.

Not bad, worth a look

Come on, great author.

Yes, come on, the healing system will work too

It's really good to read, the author's writing style and plot are so healing, it just breaks people's hearts, okay. Then the author is still a code word girl!

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Very nice, will update soon

Relaxing, fun and super nice [top post]

Not bad, very depressing