A Mortal's Path to Immortality: Even an Ant Can Shake Heaven and Earth

The story frame is good, but the writing is okay with a few mistakes and omissions of words! As a time traveler, the protagonist sometimes feels a bit childish and immature [eat melon]. You can chase it so far. The writing logic needs to be improved! The plot is confusing in many places [rolls eyes]

More inspirational articles on cultivating immortals. Only when the sect is harmonious can one practice well. Although there were disasters, they were all narrowly avoided. In the end, he ascended successfully and had a happy ending.

The protagonist comes from time to time, without so many golden fingers and protagonist halo. He is down-to-earth, goes through hardships, and practices to become an immortal step by step. The ending was a bit rushed and I hope there will be a sequel to read.

It's superfluous to have a Peiyuan [pinch] Needless to say, after seeing the secret realm and the mouse, I was sure that the author was a woman [you taste it carefully] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] Personally, I feel it is rather bland and a bit pretentious, which makes it a bit boring [face covering]

It's very interesting, the content is rich and colorful, and there aren't that many ups and downs, but the male protagonist's life is very meaningful.

It's okay, the egg 🥚 is of little use, it's of no use.

Very nice, I like it

A mortal cultivates immortality and finds his biological grandfather at the beginning Chapter 127 Big loss

Not bad, at least it's not too bad, at least it's better than fighting for several chapters.

The overall storyline is pretty good, a male version of time travel and immortality.