A Mere Mortal's Wonderland Can Shake the Heaven and the Earth

The story frame is good, but the writing is okay with a few mistakes and omissions of words! As a time traveler, the protagonist sometimes feels a bit childish and immature [eat melon]. You can chase it so far. The writing logic needs to be improved! The plot is confusing in many places [rolls eyes]

More inspirational articles on cultivating immortals. Only when the sect is harmonious can one practice well. Although there were disasters, they were all narrowly avoided. In the end, he ascended successfully and had a happy ending.

It's superfluous to have a Peiyuan [pinch] Needless to say, after seeing the secret realm and the mouse, I was sure that the author was a woman [you taste it carefully] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] Personally, I feel it is rather bland and a bit pretentious, which makes it a bit boring [face covering]

The protagonist comes from time to time, without so many golden fingers and protagonist halo. He is down-to-earth, goes through hardships, and practices to become an immortal step by step. The ending was a bit rushed and I hope there will be a sequel to read.

Very nice, I like it

A mortal cultivates immortality and finds his biological grandfather at the beginning Chapter 127 Big loss

Not bad, at least it's not too bad, at least it's better than fighting for several chapters.

It's okay, the egg 🥚 is of little use, it's of no use.

It's very interesting, the content is rich and colorful, and there aren't that many ups and downs, but the male protagonist's life is very meaningful.

A nice book

It's just that the ending is too hasty

The overall storyline is pretty good, a male version of time travel and immortality.

The plot is good and worth reading carefully!

The most common article on cultivating immortals, five stars for encouragement.

The protagonist walks step by step without being arrogant or impatient. Friends who are book-hungry, I recommend this book to you.

It's exciting, and the emotionless male protagonist is really good-looking!

It's very well written. Come on.

Not bad, come on, author

The plot is exciting and interesting, and it's great to watch! ! !

This book is good and considered a masterpiece.

This book is not bad

Pretty good, keep up the good work

I was in a hurry later.

Not bad, worth a look.

Nice! Love watching! Come more!

Not bad, keep up the good work

It's good, but after building the foundation, the author ended the novel in a hurry. It's a pity

Look good. Thank you to the author for your hard work.

I don't know why the score is so low, but I think it's okay.

It's okay, come on, give it five stars first.