Legend of Dawn in Ghost Valley

Super exciting, let me see

Well written, with detailed details, the battles, and the character coordination are classical and every detail is perfect. It is a very good ancient martial arts novel.

The plot is compact and the writing is smooth. Have everyone's style

More exciting than those so-called masters

Eggplant asked to write a book review of his own. As a novice, this is the author's first novel. Since I still have my own job, my writing time is limited and my updates are slow, but I never stop updating. The author himself is very satisfied with this point. After all, writing for more than two years requires perseverance. When he started the book, the author only had a vague general framework in his mind and no specific outline before he started writing. Therefore, the early stage was a bit unsatisfactory. He originally planned to write a regular martial arts novel, but it became more and more fantasy as it went on. However, I feel that the later writing was smoother. Maybe it is because practice makes perfect. However, the author of this book can only give himself a passing grade for the time being, because there are still many thoughts and principles that he wants to express that have not been expressed. I hope that it can be better expressed in the later period or the next book! As for book reviews, all book friends have different opinions, so please make your own evaluation!

Not bad, it has the feel of old-school martial arts and a fairy tale for adults.

The plot is concise and complex, the characters are described in various ways, and the language is humorous and interesting. It makes you laugh while reading it.

The concept is clever, the characters are described delicately, and the fighting scenes are thrilling! Although the moves are mediocre, they are devastating!

Beautiful, this book is worth reading!

It is exciting, comfortable, has a grand framework, the text is precise but not flat, and the overall narrative rhythm is a bit like the novels of the three great masters. The whole book reads very much like the biographies of heroes of the Sui and Tang Dynasties. Times make heroes, everyone has feelings, justice, flesh and blood, and the stories are all lifelike!

It's so beautiful, why are there so few people?

Not bad, when will we continue? It seems weird! How come?

Not bad very good

The writing and plot are both good, keep up the good work!

It's very exciting, the concept is very good, and the meticulous writing is neat. It's worth reading. [Like][Like]

It is a very beautiful martial arts novel with tenderness and iron heart. I hope there will be more exciting content in the future.

The protagonist seems to be Lu Fei, who has a rich background, but in fact he is Gao Xiaoshan

Like, like, like [like] [like] [like] [like] [like] Very good, well done,

This book is truly wonderful! Worth reading for book lovers. So recommended!

The plot is ups and downs, fascinating, good

The writing is good, every step is startling, fascinating, and you will never leave. However, there are too few updates, a bit too slow, and cannot keep up with the rhythm of reading. It is a bit slow to the scenery, which makes people depressed and regretful!

The writing is good, with flesh and blood, and the aura of the pig's feet is not that obvious. Watchable.

The writing of this book is still very good, but its lack of popularity in FQ is predictable. The early stage depicts a world of martial arts. No matter how powerful the martial arts people are, they can be defeated by 20,000 to 30,000 cavalry. This means that this novel (at least in the early stage) is not like a traditional fantasy novel, which is about gratification and revenge, and the feeling of killing whoever is unhappy. Therefore, in the early stage, it still favors the supremacy of royal power and uses some political skills. I personally like this very much. Then there is the fact that the protagonist takes very few shots, but I feel that the priorities are a bit inconsistent. At first, I thought it was a double protagonist with Gao Xiaoshan, but it was not until later that the protagonist was portrayed much more (I would venture to speculate on this, maybe it was influenced by "The Deer and the Cauldron"? After all, the starting point of the protagonist is also a prison) Let's talk about the characters again, Uncle Qin and Shen Congwen. I feel that these two ended a little hastily, including Mao Meng, who is even more important and should be the ancestor of the ancestor who founded the Maoshan sect. The ending was a bit too plain (of course it is not ruled out that it is a coincidence, the names are the same) and Liu Hongchen, who was a bit unclear and did not say all his last words. . I feel like I can still work harder to control the endings of the characters. Let me talk about some of my favorite characters. The two Xiahou brothers. Wow, they are both tough and strong men who value love, righteousness and oaths. They both died very valuable (the endings of these two are much better than those of Uncle Qin and Shen Congwen). I also like Lao Kun. The ending is a pity, but not bad (this one is also more logical than the endings of Qin and Shen). There is also Mr. Xu (damn, why do I really like these people) who dedicated his life to the Nine Formations of Qian and Kun. When the two formations of Qian and Kun were lost, he just figured out half of the formations. He is also a wizard. (His ending is also brighter than that of Qin and Shen). In fact, I repeatedly mentioned Qin and Shen. I also like these two people. If it can be changed, please ask the author to give them a decent exit. It is really a bit hasty [crying] [crying] Finally, let's look forward to a series of sequels. I hope the author can bring us more surprises.

Very interesting, a very good book What the hell is Gao Xiaoshan? Is he the chosen one? Isn't the protagonist Lu Fei? There are so many adventures in Gao Xiaoshan. It's unreasonable. There are still two protagonists, so Gao Xiaoshan doesn't look like him either.

A very good novel

Rich content, worth watching

Wonderful, well written. Should be added Wonderful, well written article! Should be given extra points. Brilliant and well written! Should be given extra points.

Good looking content

I just like Chuan Wu, and I have no feeling at all about things like time travel and rebirth.

Well written and very readable