Daily Life After Traveling to Arknights

The setting of the novel is quite novel, and it is considered relatively good among Tomato's boat tour fans, but I personally think it is difficult to write a novel well from the perspective of a grassroots operator. For now, I feel that the protagonist has a strong sense of supporting role. Although the original plot and description are indispensable, it should not be too much. Currently, the protagonist is basically assigned the same number of scenes as Amiya and others, but I feel that the protagonist should account for at least 70%. Also, I personally feel that the control of details is not very good, the places that should be ignited cannot be ignited, and some parts are a bit awkward (maybe it is my personal reason) [awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh], if possible, it will be better to arrange a little knife for the protagonist (really just a little) [eat melon] [evil laugh][eat melon], overall it is very good, the author, please give it a try, I believe it will be popular [like] (personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it, civilized buildings [evil laugh][eerent laugh][eer laugh]) It's too short and weak. The author will update it quickly and give you five stars to give you motivation [Chigua][Chigua][Chigua]

This book is very good. It goes straight to the subject without any delay, giving the viewer a clean and neat feeling. However, because it goes straight to the subject, some details are less described, which results in a vague and stiff feeling when reading. However, it has no impact if you don't feel it carefully. I hope the author can find a good balance between details and the whole. In terms of character creation, I haven't seen many chapters (the author will update it soon [laughing]), so I dare not make any comments. However, the characters basically match the performance in the game, and there is no deviation from the character design at present. To sum up: it is an eye-catching book in the same series, with a few minor problems that are not a problem. It is a very good book and a good start. I hope the author can stick to it. (I really don't want to see a good book suddenly eunuch anymore [crying])

It's good to read. I hope the author can write an Ark novel where the heroine is Kelsey [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration] I hope the author will stop sending it

You can see its beauty from the high score of 9.3. Let me tell you my opinion. The writing is very good, the emotions are delicate, and the characters are not broken. The protagonist is really a model worker [covering his face], trying his best to save people, and recruiting talents everywhere The plot is smooth and compact, and the number of words is endless (but isn't this daily life?) Not invincible, but barely enough. It can be strengthened appropriately. Moreover, the protagonist's physique is suitable for krypton life. He won't die later, right? There are many words and very interesting to read. Summary: Warri Valley's

Among the fanfics of Arknights that I have read, this one feels pretty good. Let's talk about the shortcomings first. I gave it four stars and deducted one star in terms of the use of some basic settings and early plots. Especially in the early plots, some logic is lacking. Also, not obeying orders is a taboo on the battlefield. Especially when the protagonist just arrived and doesn't know how to use weapons or Origin Stone skills, it's a bit too reckless to go ahead with a lonesome bravery and tactical planning. Then there are the advantages. From a dialectical point of view, the aggressiveness can also be regarded as an advantage. The protagonist wanted to save Yi Nanping, and at least he did a good job. Misha survived with broken bones, Faust and Mephistopheles were captured alive, the Frost Star Patriots and the Snow Monster team also obtained the inhibitor of ore disease, and the protagonist did not hesitate to persuade the patriots to resist fate. Fighting with them also allowed Rhode Island to gain their trust and help. Overall, the plot direction is very good, and as the protagonist's strength increases and his teammates' trust in him increases, the logic of many places can withstand scrutiny. The method the protagonist uses to save these people is also unexpected, at least I have not thought of it. I don't know how the subsequent plot will develop, but I am still looking forward to it. I also hope that the difficulties in other event plots can also be saved (is the requirement a bit too high?)

It's good! It's pretty good among Ark fan fictions. Even in the category of two-dimensional, it's okay, but the quantity is too small. So beautiful The group portrait is also well written. It's also good if it's written personally Well shaped

Very good! [Like] [Love] [Like] The battle process and psychological description are very good. The only thing I'm curious about is whether the protagonist will become a villain in the later stages (a very dangerous kind)? I hope the author can say something. [Laughing]

That's the style! ! I've had enough of knives and stuff in the game! ! This type of book is so appealing to me! ! Come on, author, I will keep chasing this book. I hope you won't send it away [Like]

I like it very much, and I will always support it as long as it ends [sending my heart]

I finished reading it in one go. It's not bad. Come on, author [laughter][laughter]

"I've been reading the book since it first opened, and then I added a readership, and now I think of grading" [Cool]

My suggestion is to update more slowly. Although I personally don't like happy endings without any tragedy, it is undeniable that the quality is very high. Because the plot has only progressed to the fifth chapter, the setting can be said to be the most suitable for the game among Tomato Ark fans. I hope the quality can be as high in the future.

The writing is really good. I have read more than a dozen Ark fan novels and this one fits the plot the best (so far). The characters in the plot are not broken. I hope the protagonist is stronger.

The plot feels good, but the author's writing in the early stage is a bit hasty. Lu Chen is too persistent, as if he is a tool to achieve these things, but it is not important. The plot is relaxed and joyful until Casimir, but the pace of Casimir is too fast. The plot itself is long, but the characters are not so three-dimensional. The author can fill in a little more details. After all, I am still looking forward to the author's follow-up. Is it true that writing the emotional line like this in the end won't collapse? Shuangxing directly hit someone with the ball to get a boyfriend who owed millions of dragon gate coins. The Ursas around him said "the harem group is not" and their eyes were dull. Officer Chen on the side took out a three-year starting small package. It seems quite interesting, I hope the author doesn't write it like a stallion novel. I wish this book will get better and better I look forward to your growth

It feels very good. I feel that this one is the best among the Ark novels I have read. I take away other people's knives and insert them into myself. I really like this kind of subject. I hope the author can write better and better [please update] [like] [laughing]

After all, there are really not many Ark stories that I can calm down and read, but I always feel a bit strange and unpleasant, but the writing is really good, maybe the pace is a bit slow... Emmm, I don't know what else is wrong with Yazi...

The first 10 or 20 pictures may be a little awkward, but the later ones are worth reading. The author of this book also said that there will be either a single heroine or no heroine. I hope that the harem can be read as a redemption story. Anyway, I am satisfied [eating melon]

Congratulations to Laoyan for winning the Easter match! This is the first Ark fanfic I have read. Even if you are new to the Ark worldview, you can still see in the article the author's popular science about some worldview contents and the introduction of each operator. The high score is undoubtedly

Yeah, it was okay. The early stage was a bit boring. The main character was saved one by one and just wanted to reverse the tragedy. In the middle stage, he had nothing to do and ran around to collect powerful operators. He solved a lot of things on the way. As for the heroine, she must be Shuangxin. In the later stage, when Kamisia confessed her love, she started to collect Suijia. It's a pity that it was banned. Otherwise, this book has great potential [I almost cried]

I have read more than two hundred chapters, and some of the descriptions really affect the viewing experience. Some operators do things "silently" at all times. I have not seen the word "two hundred chapters" less in more than two hundred chapters. Other than that, it is great!

First of all, I have to say it, I really have to say it, damn it! Lu Chen is awesome, okay [laughing evilly], I have to say, he did a great job today, I'm so happy~, for a new doctor, it's very good [laughing evilly], Lu Men! ! !

Good review, the single heroine Frost Star Snow Rabbit yyds, the suffering of this land is written according to the game, the fan fiction is of a good standard, but the male protagonist still doesn't know the background. By the way, the crossover chapter is a bit confusing.

The previous chapters about the "Rescue Integration Movement" and the author's original work seemed good, but the latter chapters about "Xiahuo" and "Casimir" were almost uninteresting [thinking][thinking][thinking]. Also, although I know that this will make the author more tired, I still hope to write about the activities in detail one by one, instead of putting several together or even not writing at all. But all in all, it's an excellent Ark fan fiction [Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]

Overall, it's pretty good. The characters didn't collapse and the plot didn't drag out too much. However, the protagonist's sense of involvement was a bit low, giving people the feeling that the protagonist is not the protagonist... Overall, it's okay. There are very few fan fictions that don't use different characters, and they're about Ark. Please support them with five stars [full]

Come on, author, although I don't understand the plot thoroughly enough, the general outline is slightly off, the concept of Rhode Island is slightly different, the character description lacks soul and other minor issues, it's pretty good [laughter] Zhou scientists would probably scold that level of deviation after seeing it (forced truth) But as a second creation, it's already very good [laughter]

Fortunately, as a reminder, the relationship between the protagonist of this book and Frost Star is very, very ambiguous. If you mind about frost star mysophobia and single recommendation, you can escape. You can also escape if you are ambiguous about Lei men and women and those who only like single male protagonists. Yes, there is a lot of interaction with girls. It didn't work in the early stage, but it got a lot better after understanding the settings in the later stage. There is OOC, but I think it's okay. Mainly to make up for the regrets... And what the protagonist's life experience is. I'll give it four stars and let me check it out first.

It's quite rare for a book to follow a main plot. Can you post the author's group number (or mark it in the table of contents?) I forgot which chapter.

This novel is quite exciting.

The best Ark novel I have read so far.

As long as you don't have a harem and focus more on the heroine, etc., It's still perfectly fine.