Contending for Supremacy, Starting With Water Margin

Not bad, the writing is reasonable and there are no logical flaws. The three views are in line with my taste. I am not a bad person, but I have to have the bottom line to do great things. Let's take under your wing all the heroes in the Water Margin who have never done anything harmful to nature. Please give me more!

A very good book 🤭

It is well written and carefully written. I have only read 10 of them. There are also problems. There are many explanations that are confusing and lead to incoherence in the plot. Secondly, there is the problem of plug-ins. It is better to insert them directly into the system. This is not foreshadowing. I read another 50 pictures. First, the time traveler's ambition is to go to sea. You should be the Pirate King. Second, cutting the weeds without removing the roots is a sign of mercy. Third, I am almost 50 years old in two lifetimes. I am mentally immature. The protagonist is too idealistic and is portrayed as a saint. A saint cannot be a king and cannot be kind enough to lead an army.

The writing style is very good, but it is too stable and makes it easy to keep reading and follow the images.

The writing is good, it's rare in Tomato 😂 but I don't know how many girls there are. At present, the protagonist seems to have a bit of modern thinking. It would be pointless to be monogamous. In ancient times, there was only one girl who had status. People would only think that you are not good. I hope I can accept Hu Sanniang and Qiu Qiongying 🍉

What I like to read the most is this kind of rebellion novel.

Very good. After reading many other Water Margin fics, this one is unique. Except for the system panel on Liangshan in the early stage, which was a little awkward, the rest of the writing was very detailed and slow, and it was not slow in pace. There was no running account. I feel that the author has a strong background knowledge, which can be felt after reading a certain length of text. Advantages: No ink, and some points are unexpected. The fight in Zengtou City was over in two or three chapters, and it was over in one battle. Zhang Shuye and his son were gone without much fuss. There are a lot of new characters. In other novels, there are just a few people coming and going, especially internal affairs talents, so there are a lot of additions. Traveling, the process of the protagonist traveling and making heroes is omitted. Most other novels are about traveling, making friends with heroes, committing crimes, going to Liangshan, and then traveling to find heroes... It's not that it's not good, it's just that I've read too much. Disadvantages: I felt like I didn't get off to a good start. I stopped reading the first few chapters, but I couldn't bear it and ran out of novels, so I just read it and got into it. It's getting better.

A simple history book must be boring, because the unsatisfactory life makes there must be a power in the novel that can break the shackles. However, too many people do whatever they want in the novel, but lose themselves, which will be a very ugly state. Therefore, while retaining the ability to break the situation and always sticking to the faith and not following the crowd, it will be a feast for you and me.

Watched 25 times, the writing is good, but the space has never been used, and doomsday supplies are not stored in it, and there are no various naughty operations. It is very funny that I am afraid of wearing armor and falling into the water and drowning.

The book should be written in a more enjoyable way, because readers are all suffering in real life, just to read it quickly in your book, don't be too pedantic.