Passerby************

The first five-star review must be yours🌝🌝

Such a good book, five stars, must be five stars First there are saints and then there is heaven. I am as beautiful as a fairy in a painting. Others are competing for beauty, but I am free, and passers-by are making waves in the world. The saintly and virtuous heart collects my benefits, and my heart is soft and thoughtful. It doesn't matter if you are obsessed with saints, just because of Kato's single character Hui. The white hat of Yingpo touches the heartstrings, and I fall in love with Hui all his life! A saint is like an immortal who benefits from the heavens, and it is hard to break his heart when he sees him in this mortal world.

This book is good for fans of the passerby heroine. The disadvantage is that some of the plots are borrowed from the original work [Face Covering], but the new author can also understand it. The characters in it are also consistent, and it is also paving the way for the senior sister and the golden retriever loser to leave Lunya, unlike other books. He is like a fan who directly disregards the previous friendship and breaks up with Lunya. The plot is quite reasonable. It depends on how to deal with the problem of the emotional line and the problem of Lunya breaking up with the protagonist group. Come on, author, take your time. I believe you will write the passerby heroine in your mind! [Please update] A few final suggestions: 1. With Kato Megumi, the relationship may not be confirmed so quickly, but if we should send candy or something, I like to watch it [laughing] 2. An Yilun also tried his best to get him out of the protagonist group as soon as possible. After all, it affects the mood of reading. Let the protagonist group be formed as soon as possible, and deal with An Yilun well. Don't let him come back later to disgust the protagonist. It is best not to have that kind of plot, it is very poisonous. The rest of the plot can only be written about Kato Eboshi and career development. 3. The first time a new author writes a novel, it should not be long, so the length should be considered. The current pace is actually okay, but it may become more and more sloppy as the writing progresses, so the plot should be refined. 4. The emotional line between the senior sister and Ying Lili needs to be very careful. Nowadays, readers are always talking about it. Whenever the protagonist does something wrong, they will madly complain. If you keep dragging the emotional line between the protagonist and them, they will be called a scumbag or something. People No, it's okay, but now I feel that I'm still far away from senior sister and Eirili falling in love with the protagonist. Don't worry about this. Just think about how to deal with it in advance. By the way, don't make it too abrupt for senior sister and Eirili to like the protagonist. There must be some key plot foreshadowing. Ps: Author, please go to bed early. Don't go to bed early every morning. Staying up late is not good. If you are stuck, just take care of your mental state first. Don't worry, I will wait for your update. Come on＾0＾~

The fanfic of Megumi Kato, the single female protagonist, is worth recommending! Most of the fanfics I have read before gradually turned into a harem. As Megumi is a very possessive heroine, I think Kato Megumi changed after she opened a harem. Strongly recommend the author~~[Love]

A rare fan of a passerby heroine, come on, the author

To be honest, I am extremely happy to find another book with Hui featuring many villains and a single heroine. I have already decided on this book. Even the author An Yilun and Yinglili were together when they were young. Didn't Yinglili abandon An Yilun? Alas, never mind, in short, your book is for Hui and I support you. I recommend it, after all, the author also needs motivation. If you want the horse to run, you have to give the horse grass. Come on, author, ten updates a day! !

Not bad, but the system certification is a bit sloppy. In addition, the plot of the defeated dog can be ended quickly, so I will talk about it this morning. Senior sister is fine now. Hui and the protagonist can write more about daily life. See you later

The study time is increasing, and the aggression is also increasing. How should I put it, it's a mixed bag of good and bad, a bit toxic (I can read it), and there are also some things that make me shine. For example, when the protagonist is planning to level up to level 2 to 3 games, he behaves irrationally due to jealousy and emotional influence. It's good to realize his mistakes later (although in the end) Continued: (Although the inspiration on the Sakura Ramp at the end made me feel a little uncomfortable, it was a double standard, but not a complete double standard) Overall, that part is still okay, come on, author

Hey, I saw it today, finished it today, ah, damn it! Come on, author, come on, author, update! Uh-huh, come on! [Laughs][laughs]

As someone who has read the original work three times, I make the following comments: First of all, this book is a good choice for those who like passerby heroines. As one of the rare novels with a passerby heroine as the main plot and with many scenes, I recommend that those who like it read it. Secondly, the image of An Yilunye in this book has been changed to some extent. He is more possessive (in a derogatory sense), neurotic (although he is still the same originally), and self-centered (the same as in the original work). In short, his character is worse, so he is easy to poach. Then, Megumi is really cute [pouts] Finally, I would like to make some suggestions: 1. The plot connection should be smoother. For example, the collapse of the protagonist Hokkaido is quite abrupt and feels like there is no foreshadowing. 2. The author can try to get rid of the constraints of the original plot. It is best not to let Midoriya's experience become the protagonist's experience and create memories that are unique to the protagonist and Megumi. Overall, this book is pretty good. I give it five stars to support it. I hope the author will work harder [please give me more updates]

It's already great for a new author to write to this level. Come on, great author!

As long as it's not a single heroine, Yinglili is also very fragrant, so I can't let her go, right?

The author's writing is very beautiful, come on

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Is An Yilun also the protagonist or is the protagonist the protagonist? All the heroines have a better relationship with An Yilun than the main character.

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How to put it this way, sometimes when watching it, I feel that the male protagonist is another Tonya, and at some point he surpasses Tonya, which makes it a bit uncomfortable and disgusting to watch sometimes. When watching it, I feel that it may be a little weak, but when I think about the plot later, it becomes a little stronger. Come on

What you, the author, said about slow heat is indeed true. The writing in the first forty or so chapters was really average, and I felt a little aggrieved when I read it. But after fifty or so, it becomes very good. When looking at the front, everyone can look forward to seeing the reversal later.

The writing is very good, better than many comics I have read. But the heroine should accept all three, otherwise she would feel like Tang San. Of course, if the author has his own way of writing, pretend I didn't say it. After all, I have also coded the words. If you always consider other people's opinions, it will easily disturb your own thinking. Sometimes your own is the best, come on author(ง •̀_•́)ง

Very good (*๓´╰╯`๓)♡, come on the author (ง •̀_•́)ง! Although it feels like the ramp is a bit like a charity, it is generally good. In addition, the saint's benefit is mine, so the author should not steal it from me [laughter] I have a question! That is, Dream Studio, does it have anything to do with shrimp dumplings? After all, the label is a variety comic. I want to watch Purple Dandruff Warrior [laughing]

It's a very nice book. The protagonist doesn't directly rely on the system to instill knowledge like the protagonists in other novels. He makes progress step by step and learns bit by bit. I personally like it very much. Good luck to the author! (Quietly: An Yilun is so annoying, and the author should update soon!!!)

Come on, author. There are many fanfics like this. There are less than 40 pieces of super monsters and very few monsters. This week, it's purely daily. Come on.

Well, this book is well written, but what's so good about it? Fortunately, I always feel that the writing in those places is particularly good. Although some places are not so well written, in short, those places are better than others [laughter]

Come on author, your writing is really good [laughing evilly]

I feel that if this plot continues, it will be impossible to have a single female protagonist.

At that time, I was young and had a horse's hooves. I didn't believe there was separation in the world.

There is no hodgepodge, just writing a single world will not make people feel that the plot is too big.

It's so beautiful, I hope the author can update it to the end! I will always support you! !

It's quite interesting to read, good luck to the author! Is this the end (tj)?

Very exciting fanfic, I hope the author will work hard to update it! ! ! [Smile]