1) It doesn't matter if you have no powerful backer, no connections, or a humble background. What matters is having a [Universe in Your Sleeve]!
2) No cultivation method? Look to the Universe in Your Sleeve! Martial arts, alchemy, crafting, formations, magic, spells, mechs, soul beasts, puppets: there's bound to be something for you!
3) No resources? Look to the Universe in Your Sleeve! True dragon spirit veins, blue crystal mines, lightning from a clear sky, and raging wind tunnels: it's got everything you need!
4) Can't beat your opponent? Toss him into the Universe in Your Sleeve. In my world, I make the rules. I can take his head whenever I want and kill as I please!
5) Worried about your family? Then have them live in the Universe in Your Sleeve. The City of Flowing Flames and ten miles of medicinal gardens are better than a paradise hidden from the world!
6) Can't get past the Heavenly Road? No need to ask anyone for help. Just turn to your own Universe in Your Sleeve!
Don't express much, everyone understands (except the stupid ones, that's a congenital deficiency), one word - good!!!
A good start. The protagonist seems to be a dick. The author's language is still okay!