HP: Dawn Youyao

Nice! The story of the heroine and Sirius. "You kill someone, and I'll hand you a knife." I love this line! ! !

Oh my gosh, this is such a good article, the plot is touching, and it's so enjoyable! Once you get into it, you can see that the characters have distinct personalities and the collision between them is important. They are cautious and care without knowing it. And I just love the romance between young boys and girls~ Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, the arrogant and heart-warming gentleman Sirius vs. The lively, elegant, witty and unconvinced Fini (˵¯͒¯͒˵), come on! Must be five stars~ớ ₃ờ~

Madam, at a young age, you have the talent to know the world and the wisdom to stabilize the country. The ancients said that a crouching dragon and a phoenix can bring peace to the world. Now, God bless us in Greater China. For 5,000 years of vicissitudes of life, the land of China has thunder, flying sand and stones, dancing in the sky. In the haze, I can only see a golden-armored god standing tall between heaven and earth. This man is a hero. Holding two axes, his eyes are like lightning. When one ax goes down, chaos begins to bloom. When he goes down with two axes, Nuwa creates human beings. When he goes down three axes, Xiaosheng falls over. It is a blessing to have such a great hero, and a blessing to the people. How can it not make people cry with joy... So when will you update?

I have finished reading the second volume so far, and there are only a few chapters in the third volume. I am confused whether to read it again. I feel that the situation behind it will be depressing and heart-wrenching. I don't resist pressure. However, after the two expressed their feelings in the middle of the second volume, two years passed very suddenly. I didn't see any sweet relationship. It was so sad, and there were memories and the present in the middle. In short, I feel Sirius is too pitiful, but I feel that I am quite insecure in dating such a handsome boy, so I think the early pull is reasonable, hahaha, but I agree with it the most. It's the sentence written in the author's introduction. It's OOC to let Sirius fall in love. It's really right. So I don't see many fans writing about him, and some of them have a feeling of budding feelings that is somewhat inexplicable. Some even give it to me. Love at first sight, come on, the eldest young master of the Black family has never seen any beauties. Not to mention himself, his three cousins are all beauties, not to mention how many of them have thrown themselves into his arms. It's really hard to imagine what kind of girl he would like with his personality. I'm really curious.

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The author writes very delicately! I just feel that the heroine and Sirius are too tired. And that's it! More updates! Love watching! Good luck! Come and see! [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]

The author writes very well. I have been looking for a book about Sirius. Why didn't I come across this book earlier? [Crying]

It's pretty good, but I'm a little confused, who is the male protagonist? It feels like Sirius, and it feels like Rael. Personally, I hope it will be Sirius, 1V1 [sending my heart]

1. The heroine is independent and self-reliant, taking control of the family step by step. She is a proper eldest heroine, but she also has the delicacy and cuteness of a young girl. 2. The male protagonist is more like the original work and won't break down too seriously (Sirius' relationship is inherently more broken) 3. The ups and downs of the plot are still very interesting, so it's not a loss to invest in it.

As I read it, I felt that the heroine was miserable (maybe it was because I felt that everything was not going well [palms face], life is full of contradictions, so... It felt a bit devoid of warmth) and then I thought about the original Harry, who is actually a bit like this. And because I'm a girl, I feel lonely very uncomfortable ([facepalm] Maybe it's more representative of a girl). I don't know why I felt a little depressed while reading it (maybe I'm lonely myself [facepalm] and a little depressed), but I did feel the pressure that I didn't feel personally in the original work [facepalm] [Laughing] I feel that the story is more realistic (emotional) because I have fantasized about going to the magical world countless times, but this book made me feel the real difficulties (I dropped out of school due to depression, was addicted to reading HP fanfiction, and wanted to die [face covering]). Everyone in every world lives in pain. Of course, there are my own emotions and thoughts in it [love]

The author has a great conscience [Blows a kiss] There are very few articles that fit the original work [Cries] Please give the author more updates [Please give me more updates] I hope Nigel can fall in love with our dear little heroine~ and stimulate that straight guy Sirius [laughing]

This book is very interesting, thank you to the author! (I hope the author will update it soon)

This is the best book on my bookshelf. I hope the ending is he.

Very beautiful, I hope the heroine will kill Sirius

So pretty! ! ! I suddenly found that the novel in which Sirius is the male protagonist is so good, but the main reason is that the author's writing style is so good! [Adoration][Adoration]

I think it's very beautiful, but not many people see it [crying]

To be honest, the relationship between these two people is completely sadistic. I have read a lot of Sirius fanfics, but most of them are about letting go of one's pride in order to pursue a wife. Only this one describes Sirius' true character. It is easy for two people with the same personality to get into a verbal argument. Although both people have said harsh words, neither of them has stated that they want to leave. I beg the author to he! !

So is it he or be? If it were be, I would run away immediately (the author's writing is very good) [eating melon]

I think it's very beautiful. Every character is written in a rich and full way, and the writing style is also good [Blowing Kiss]

It's so good. I've been looking for fanfics about Sirius. My friend recommended this to me. It's so good. The author's writing is so good.

It's very, very good to watch. It's totally different from other bloody plots. The characters all have their own personalities. I love this book.

Good writing so far, keep it up

The characters are full-bodied, the tension between the male and female protagonists is very extreme, and the emotional line is winding. I think the only shortcoming is that the heroine's personality is a bit extreme [shy], but overall it is very good [I learned it]

Good-looking (○｀ε´○) I hope the male and female protagonists will stop fighting and get together soon

I really like the clear characters and the ups and downs of the plot. I fell in love at first sight. If the update is discontinued, I will really cry to death [sending my heart]

It's so good, don't miss it if you like to watch torture, it's so seductive, I really like Blake, but after seeing so many words, when they meet, they either have a quarrel or misunderstanding, or they are constantly tugging at each other. It's really tiring. To be honest, the writing and plot are both useless. Please give me more candy [crying] Be nice to Sirius [crying] [crying] [crying]

I want to give this book full stars! ! !

It's really super, super pretty! ! ! I hope the author can help me! ! !

Awesome! ! ! But Sirius pissed me off! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Very nice! It's super to my liking, but I don't know why the rating is so low.