After Passing Through the Book, I Became the Hero's Salty Fish Master

My evaluation is relatively fair. The darkening in the later period is not depicted at all. The ending is a bit unfinished to be honest. The darkening part is too hasty, resulting in a bit top-heavy. The essence and novelty of the entire article should actually be in the darkening part. In the early stage, it fell into a cliché, a very common master's article routine. The whole article has become dull and dull. If you like this kind of dull, slow and sweet love, you can give it a try. If you are interested in the later darkening like me, you should consider it carefully. Overall, the writing is good, but it needs to be refined. (I also warmly remind the author again: excessive use of routines will also lead to the entire article being uninteresting) [Love] [Love] [Love]

It ended in such a hurry [Crying] [Crying] Now that everything has been said, I hope that in the days to come without us readers, you two will be together well [Crying] No one can separate you anymore.

This book is beautiful and sweet [sending my heart] [sending my heart] [sending my heart] (you can read it in a limited time, and you can enjoy it slowly when you have time) [stunned] Song Yu✘Han Chenye Master and Disciple Essay I really like the author's writing style. The ideas are clear and easy to understand at a glance [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

This book is really great! There is not a single scene in the book where the male protagonists are having sex, but they talk about their feelings for each other every time they hold hands, hug each other, or kiss each other. Every time I see it, I blush and my heart beats. The author's writing style is very good and the writing is beautiful. The biggest regret is that there is no extra story [crying] (author, do you understand me? [Blowing kiss]) Anyway, it is highly recommended! ! It's been a long time since I've seen an author with such good writing skills [KISS][KISS][KISS]

It's a nice read [Blowing Kiss]. It's a sweet article, and it can be considered as not cruel at all. However, I feel that the ending is a bit perfunctory and hasty [Thinking] However, the whole text is still very interesting [Sending Hearts] I haven't read enough [Crying]

Everything else is great, highly recommended! ! ! ! ! ! ! I just feel that the ending is not very good, it seems a little bit unfinished, but the overall content is very good, I recommend it [shy]

Shou traveled from the real world to the book, and the system prompted him to treat Gong well. Since then, Shou has been treating Gong well, protecting him, giving him medicine, and staying with him every day. Because Gong knew that Shou was not the same person as before, he started to treat Shou well and protected him for him. Blocking the knife, Shou detoxified him mouth-to-mouth, Shou took the initiative to kiss Gong, and Gong returned the kiss. Shou completed the task and returned to the real world, but Gong became the Demon Lord. Shou went to the book to meet Gong again. The two were very happy together, they looked good, they fell in love with each other! ! !

It's okay. . . I think the author still has a lot of holes to fill, and I think the ending could be extended a little further. . . Overall it's ok! I wanted to give it three stars, but it's not easy to give it four stars when you think about writing an article! ! ! Okay, let's not talk about it anymore, bye bye bye [I'm full]

The book is good. The author must be the male protagonist. He was dragged to the small world. The system helped to end it. Because there were not enough points, I could only end it hastily.

It can be seen that although the ending is hasty, it is reasonable and unexpected. It's still very sweet 🌝🌝 (There are still a lot of holes left unfilled, alas) I hope they live well in their world... And fill in the holes every day automatically. [Sending Hearts]

It looks so good ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.，，，

It's very, very, very beautiful. This is simply the best pairing between master and disciple that I have ever seen. Even the kiss made people blush and their hearts beat. However, it was a pity that Han Chenye didn't get the master in the end. It was so pitiful. Look at the guy next door. He got the master in just a few chapters.

The ending of this book about Song and Han is very good, but it ends too quickly. There is not much meat, only a little bit. The author has left many holes unfilled, such as what did Yin Lan and Zhao Wen conspire? What's the ending of Song's senior brother? Although it didn't fill the hole, it still looks good!

It's so pretty, all sweet and no cruelty, I really love it to death

I watched it a long time ago and I forgot to leave a comment. [Embarrassing] Hahahahahahahahahahaha, overall it is very good. I like it very much. [No culture, let's just say this] [Blowing kiss] [Blowing kiss]

Personally, it looks good, very sweet, and doesn't have too much intrigue, maybe because of the length. However, when Gong turns black, when the male protagonist goes through the book again, he should write a little longer. You can also write about Gong's black transformation process after the male protagonist returns to reality.

As long as the ending is better, I will give it five stars, ugh

Goodbye, meet in another world

I won't go into too much nonsense, my backhand is a five-star [note] [you taste it carefully]

Can you understand the reader's feelings? Is there a side story?

Finished reading on 2023.9.21 Overall, very novel It's just that the ending is too sloppy [face covering]

It's really beautiful! I read it all in one breath hahahahahaha! [Full] [full] [learned] Woohoo... It's really good! This is the first book I've reviewed. [Lick screen]

Song Yu x Han Chenye, the arrogant and tough-tongued little crybaby x the black-bellied one is very good at flirting, Help🆘Li Qinan and 5438 are so contrasting and cute. I really like it, the only bad thing is that the ending is too hasty.

It's pretty good, but the ending is a little rushed.

It looks good, but I can't accept this ending!

The most impressive thing is: "Song Yu is my own rose."

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!

I can't say more, I can only say it's okay.

Wow wow wow, author, can you write more extras? The ending is too sudden. Cry loudly😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

Why is it so short? [Crying] No extras? [Crying]