My Dignified Rich Young Man Turned into a Lolita Daughter?

It is well written and contains many funny elements. Although the writing style is still unfamiliar in some places and the description is not detailed enough, overall this book is acceptable and worth recommending. It's just that the author is slow to update. I hope he can update it soon.

I really like the interaction between Su Bingbing and Qing Moxuan [adoration][adoration][adoration] Cars also go fast [laughing evilly]

@Moyun Author, please listen to me. Your article is not decorated with gorgeous language, but with plain and true feelings, it touches the readers and goes straight to the heart. The language is smooth and coherent, without any sloppiness or complicated and heavy sentences. The characterization and detailed description of the article are very successful, giving people a sense of endless aftertaste. From a literary point of view, the subject matter is very novel and eye-catching. The angle clearly shows that the language is plain yet elegant. Simple yet meaningful. Moreover, the article uses many rhetorical techniques such as metaphor, personification, antithesis, parallelism, etc. It can be called a model article! This article. It shows extraordinary literary skills in the ordinary. It can be said that every word is precious, every sentence is classic, and every paragraph has connotation. It has reached a height that is beyond our reach. From an artistic point of view. This article could be improved. But its meaning is far greater than success itself and the use of punctuation marks is just right. After reading your article word for word, my heart cannot calm down for a long time. How could there be such insightful articles in this world? I couldn't believe my eyes. You gave me a deep understanding of the saying "There are people outside the world, and there is a sky outside the world." After reading the article, I did not dare to reply easily. I was worried that my vulgar language would pollute this rare article in the world, but I still replied because I felt that if I could not leave my own footprints behind such a wonderful article, it would be a legacy of my life. No matter how gorgeous the rhetoric and beautiful sentences were, it would not change the brilliance of this article in the slightest. It, this unique article in the world would be so beautiful! This article also echoes the saying "This thing only exists in the sky, and humans don't have it"! So I just want to say, your novel is so beautiful! How about... One more chapter? ㅇㅅㅇ

Come on, update (ง•̀_•́)ง, code like crazy, and look forward to the next plot.

I read this book in five days, and another book with the same 400,000 words, "The Wolf King Reborn, Go to the Road to Order Egg Yolk Pie" at the beginning, took a full two and a half weeks. Of course, whether it is five days or two and a half weeks, it naturally does not mean day and night, but refers to the leisure time during this period. What I am trying to illustrate through this comparison is not how much I couldn't put it down, but that the book is too watery. Water is reflected in two aspects - language and plot. In terms of language, the language style of this book is extremely funny and informal. It often makes dramas or adds irrelevant sentences to reduce the density of information. It feels like a cross talk to me. It's a "style," so I wouldn't say it's "bad," but I'd still say it's water. Some readers also expressed the same opinion in the comments section. This is not unique to this book, but it is the only one where I highly agree with other readers' "water" reviews. As one reader said, linguistic water is the lowest and most annoying. The plot is watery, especially in the first half. On the one hand, the scarcity or even absence of exciting exciting plots and the abundance or even repetition of daily mediocre plots lead to a loss of plot tension and a lack of interest for the recipients; on the other hand, the loose connection of the plots and the disconnection of logic dissolve the coherence, and excessive jumps make it difficult for readers to have coherent ideas, but instead become fragmented and the main line is unclear. Most plots with slight twists and turns are not very exciting. For example, in the first two kidnappings, the process and results were relatively similar, and the already low tension was reduced again. I don't know whether the author's physical and mental condition affected his writing mentality and motivation. In the latter part, the plot purpose and the emotions of the characters have improved significantly. In terms of plot, influencing Xiao Muxin and defeating the Gu family are long and clear-cut parts, and some of the plots are intertwined with each other, increasing the tension; in terms of characters and emotions, from the exposure and confession of being kidnapped for the third time to the two of them working together to convince Su's father, the core concept of the entire story is finally fully analyzed and expressed, and the atmosphere reaches a climax. When reading this part, my speed slowed down significantly, and my mind finally felt a little affected. Although there are still a lot of trivial daily plots in the back, it is overall good. Even though the first part has exciting and tense plots, the tone is still heartless and disrespectful, but in the second part - at least on important plots - the language style becomes solemn and serious, which is a good change. As for the ending (the "extra" part), some people talk about the knife, but I don't think it counts. Birth, old age, illness and death are human nature, and being able to grow old together with the one you love is the best ending. Another factor that improves reading speed is the setting of this book - it cannot be called water. The style of the novel is multifaceted, and language is naturally important, but what is not inferior to this is the setting, in other words, the worldview. The world setting of this book can be regarded as a kind of "cool writing", and it is more of a mindless type. Whether it is the conditions and behaviors of the protagonists, it is considered a mindless and cool story, and the same is true for the characteristics and relationships of other characters. It's good as a casual read when you have nothing to do, but as a fascinating and exciting novel, it's too demanding. What is a little strange is that many of the settings in this book are already brainless, but the author tries to make them reasonable in some aspects, which seems a bit nondescript. Maybe it was revised after being criticized, but I personally think that if you want to be brainless, you will have no brains to the end, and too much explanation will be superfluous. The strange thing that surprises me is that the ratings of this book are quite high, and few readers show strong malice in the reviews. Although the above-mentioned readers commented on "Water", I did not read from their tone of voice the maliciousness similar to other book reviews. I don't know whether the subject matter or the style of this book met their needs, but what is certain is that their evaluation standards are different from mine, and our hopes are different. I don't read many daily life themes in online novels, but I'm not very interested in the parts that focus on this theme. Therefore, it is easy to be subjective first, so I will not make too many comments, so as not to affect the judgment of other people whose standards are fundamentally different from mine. Perhaps the greatest value of this book to me is that it makes me no longer want to read online novels for a while, so I have more time to do business. In addition, the author of this book spends a chapter discussing some political and social issues. I think this is very good. The author has both correct values ​​and the courage to put them on the table. Although doing so would cut off the plot of the novel, it is understandable and even justifiable. However, the above certainly does not mean that this will be a plus point for this book. An evaluation of the author's character is one thing, but an evaluation of the book—or even an evaluation of the author's writing quality during a certain period of time—is another. Note: The previous article mentioned "not to make too many comments", and I mean it seriously. 1,400 Words is not a lot: I rarely write book reviews that are less than 1,500 words, and the most are 25,000 words.

I'm really addicted to this book. I can't stop reading it. There are only two chapters updated every day. How can I read it? Not enough, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This is the first novel I have finished. Although the number of words is relatively small, the whole story is humorous and lively without being boring. The system also has personality. The whole story is well organized and allows readers to figure out the next story. The character development of the protagonist is also OK. There is also the nostalgic transition brother. Due to the number of words, many CPs are passed in one stroke. I think I can publish a separate book to tell their story (middle-aged chapter). Finally, thank the author for dedicating this wonderful novel.

I have to say, he is indeed the author! This car is very skillful to drive, okay! Very beautiful, highly recommended

Daily easy and funny route, [driving, not fast, just describe it casually] There are no chapters that cannot be reviewed, no unnecessary nonsense, and no rambling. It is a masterpiece in my mind. The fragrance of wine is not afraid of deep alleys. The only shortcoming is that the author does not update very quickly. I am a student and don't have much money to reward, but I still support it.

I like the transformation essay the most. Transforming into a loli is awesome [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] Waiting for Xiaoxuan to turn into a cat lady [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

This book is very well written, and I like it very well. The funny elements are very good, but there is a knife in the last paragraph. On purpose, right? It was obviously very uncomfortable to end it, but it ended up with a knife. Although it is perfect, it will be somewhat uncomfortable.

I like the final ending very much, very touching and complete. The last sentence (Sister Bingbing, you came to pick me up) directly broke my guard [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying]

Big cheers for the author [eat melon] [smile] [like] [like] Especially Chapter 40, it's very well written. I didn't know that there was such a person, he is really a life-saving medicine [angry] So do I watch male videos or female videos [what]

To be honest, it's been a long time since I've finished reading a novel, and I almost skipped through this one, but now that I've finished it, I'll give you a review. Let me talk about what I like first. The emotional scenes between Qing Moxuan and Su Bingbing are two-way from beginning to end, without too many unexpected problems. Secondly, Xuan confesses that he used to be a boy. This is a plus point for me. I can't hide it for a lifetime. It's just a little late. He confessed only when they were talking about marriage. (In addition, I thought Su Bingbing knew about it at first because how could the largest family not know that the second largest family had a third son) As for the supporting roles, they are quite satisfactory. Finally, I will complain about the shortcomings that I think. First, there is too much system intervention. Second, Xuan is too easy to be kidnapped. Even if she is kidnapped by those gangster families with premeditation, why are there still supporting characters who are picked up by gangsters and go drinking with her when they get into trouble? There is also a supporting character named Xiao. What I hate most is that the villain is whitewashed, and the inexplicable character and story are created. Finally, because I read quickly and skipped through the book, my evaluation is definitely not objective. If you want to know how this book is, I recommend you to read it yourself and discard it if you don't like it. One more thing, I have read few books, but I feel that this world view is very typical, so I don't mention it in particular. It is just the story of a few big families ranked first and last. There must be people who feel uncomfortable with it (I am, but it does not affect reading), so I will mention it in detail.

Great, I haven't read such a good-looking book in a long time. I started reading it in the morning and now, the author's writing style is great, but there are a few typos.

I have to say, this book is really good. I like the Loli protagonist who is weak but hopes to be able to turn over, but never can. Wonderful Lily (for free) article [laughing evilly] [laughing]

It's beautiful, I love reading it, Xuan Xuan, how can I live without you [crying] It's probably the best and sweetest book I've ever read! But the damn author, if you eat the razor blade for me in the extra chapter, you must be dragged to Thailand! ! ! [Laughing]

This book is highly recommended, brothers, a big post

Check the reading time! It's simply perfect. The whole book is filled with sweet lily prose, but I still burst into tears when I read "The Knife", especially the early summer part. In addition, I wish the author a speedy recovery, keep up the good work! !

The book is good, the author's views are more correct, so I will go to Chapter 40, it must be five stars

Sister Bingbing and Mo Xuan's wife are super pretty freeze frame memories Lily lasts forever

There is nothing to say about the content, the plot is well laid out, and the characters are drawn in detail. I feel that Xuan Xuan is a real little lolita. However, the ending is a bit too sharp and I couldn't bear to read it. I wrote a novel with the same name.

The author wrote this book 📖It's very interesting. Can you read more soon? [Ask for more updates][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post] The author seems to be really lost

The subject matter and writing style are already very good, and the identity transition is very good! The psychological description is very interesting, and the author has a correct outlook on things! Just send this five-star review of sincerity and love directly to Chapter 40! I wish the author can maintain this enthusiasm!

How can I put it this way? I have read a lot of novels, and I really like Lily's storyline. The content is quite good, but the overall character relationship progresses too fast, and it feels a little uncomfortable. But the book received five-star reviews, and the author needs to work harder.

Update soon Express your feelings directly and heartily Don't want to update? There is a huge furnace in the sky, hardware is produced on the earth, and the cold and cold light shines on the clear clouds. Large size with two kicks, eight feet in length and three feet in width. Detonated using technology never seen before in Terra.

It's better to read this book without thinking. The main character is silly and sweet, and there are no shortage of quirks to make people laugh. The heroine is a bit domineering, and she also likes to pamper her wife. However, the boss's quotes are sometimes a little awkward, but the later part is quite sweet, and even gave me a knife. The author is really good [smile]

Good reviews. This is the second Lily novel I have read (the first one was for a three-year-old). It came from a three-year-old and started the story of the little lolita Xuan Xuan and the royal sister Bing Bing. Bingbing is really doting on Xuanxuan in every possible way. No matter what she does, she will always do it for her. That's it.

The heroine is very cute, super cute. The whole story is light-hearted and has a bit of a silly character, which is quite interesting. Author, please tell the truth. Did you write PO articles before? And did the author of this book use some secret method to prevent it from being removed from the shelves?

OK, great! Nine out of ten is good!