When a Peerless Beauty Appears Before My Eyes

I can't say anything... I feel that the author's writing style is good, but I personally think there are still problems with the logic of the outline. This type of novel is not a brainless novel, it is a bit awkward and lacks a sense of involvement, especially the male protagonist's thinking. I know that the author wants to write a grown-up male protagonist. It is understandable to be affectionate and affectionate at the same time. Young and incompetent It's understandable to be furious, but it's really hard for me to understand how you can be so worried for a while and see money in your eyes at the same time. Author, please consider bringing the readers in. Just now, I was worried about my ex-girlfriend, and then I have to retain customers and make money... I suggest you simplify the main plot of the male protagonist who has not grown up, it is too confusing.

I have opened a new book on the city and am updating the book on the city. Thank you all for your continued support. Thank you again.

Come on! Keep writing

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Who is the heroine?

Destined people meet each other