Genshin Impact: I'm the Poetry Sword Immortal, Blocking Musou No Hitotachi from the Start

I'm not a professional book reviewer, I just dare to give some pointers. This book is well written by the author, but I feel that the plot may be a bit too tight. If things go on like this, it will easily lead to reading fatigue. You can write some relaxed and daily chapters to add some interest. In addition, the main line seems to be a bit single. There are hidden lines or branch lines that can be buried. That's it for the time being. I am also an old reader. I have been reading Tomato for several years and only recently registered. The above suggestions are my personal opinion, and I still have to put reality first (￣▽￣), so what I said may not be entirely correct. That's it for now, since I don't know the outline and expected word count, I can only come up with these, otherwise it should be more comprehensive. In addition, the author likes poetry, so I will share one as well. Although the author may know it: the light of the sword is as white as the rainbow around the lamp, and the rainbow light is as bright as the tree. ——"The Acting Skills of Mr. And Mrs. Guan Shi" If you are interested, you can watch the whole song OK! I want to keep diving! Bye-Bye! [Full][Full][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Blowing kisses][Blowing kisses](○ﾟεﾟ○) (I'll give it five stars. Although there are some shortcomings, it's already very good. I don't know when my novel will be ready)

Please come and capture the author

Come on, author, but I really don't understand that there are so few people.

It's pretty good, why isn't it popular? Are there too few authors? In short, there are very few poisonous points. Come on, author!

The combat power is strange. The protagonist can fight with the God of Thunder, but after improving so much, he still can't beat the Doctor, and he can't even fight with the Young Master. According to the way you write it, does that mean that the young master is equal to the devil?

To be honest, why is the protagonist so fierce in Daozhu? It feels like anyone can hit him, even General Thunder and Lightning. Why does he wilt as soon as he returns to Liyue? He can't even hit Hutao.

6 (This is not a number six, but a less standardized circle. He has circled the key points for you. Quickly say: Thank you 6)

It's very to my liking, and the subject matter is very novel. Take your time, and you'll get better! Come on.

Why is there no one 🤔

Why are there so few people here? From your general rational point of view, this is unscientific.