Genshin Impact************

I'm not a professional book reviewer, I just dare to give some pointers. This book is well written by the author, but I feel that the plot may be a bit too tight. If things go on like this, it will easily lead to reading fatigue. You can write some relaxed and daily chapters to add some interest. In addition, the main line seems to be a bit single. There are hidden lines or branch lines that can be buried. That's it for the time being. I am also an old reader. I have been reading Tomato for several years and only recently registered. The above suggestions are my personal opinion, and I still have to put reality first (￣▽￣), so what I said may not be entirely correct. That's it for now, since I don't know the outline and expected word count, I can only come up with these, otherwise it should be more comprehensive. In addition, the author likes poetry, so I will share one as well. Although the author may know it: the light of the sword is as white as the rainbow around the lamp, and the rainbow light is as bright as the tree. ——"The Acting Skills of Mr. And Mrs. Guan Shi" If you are interested, you can watch the whole song OK! I want to keep diving! Bye-Bye! [Full][Full][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Blowing kisses][Blowing kisses](○ﾟεﾟ○) (I'll give it five stars. Although there are some shortcomings, it's already very good. I don't know when my novel will be ready)

It's pretty good, why isn't it popular? Are there too few authors? In short, there are very few poisonous points. Come on, author!

Come on, author, but I really don't understand that there are so few people.

Please come and capture the author

Why is there no one 🤔

6 (This is not a number six, but a less standardized circle. He has circled the key points for you. Quickly say: Thank you 6)

It's very to my liking, and the subject matter is very novel. Take your time, and you'll get better! Come on.

Good luck in the future

Why are there so few people here? From your general rational point of view, this is unscientific.

Is there a possibility that the traveler is called Ying?

Not bad indeed. You can also experience different poems

So, why is no one reading such a beautiful book? It looks good, but I don't know why no one

Very well written please continue

It's okay, I like it anyway [thinking]

It looks good, why is there no one?

Novel and unique like

Not bad, good, good-looking, good

Why are there so few people?

I am not talented with this sword, but I have defeated thousands of armies with this sword.

You are my hidden treasure

Keep up the good work. Happy New Year to everyone.

The writing is very good, but based on the few chapters I have read, I feel that you, the author, are more suitable for writing daily stories, rather than semi-daily stories with combat.

It's pretty well written, much better than some others I've read.