A Cultivating Male Partner Becomes a God by Signing In

I've read Chapter 16 so far, and it's pretty good. It's a bit slow. If you like to watch decisive killings, don't read it. It's not a fun read either. Disadvantages: ①The number of words per line is too many, ② There is too much nonsense and you can skip it directly, but I didn't skip it. ③Identity introduction, exposed too early, they are all descended to earth and experienced tribulations, there is no need to have memories and dreams, it is better to be exposed in the mid-term ④There are too many secret realms written about, and there are a lot of irrelevant people. ⑤ If the realm has not been written out and underlined, it should be regarded as the default realm of most novels. Ok, there are only so many shortcomings, everything else is fine Advantages: ① Slowly warm, not cold-blooded, not ruthless, ② It's good to take revenge when the male protagonist's sister is reborn. ③The family is harmonious, and there are no best family members for the time being. So many advantages, my opinion (Mind if you don't scold me, don't rise to the level of parents)

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Well, it's very good-looking. Overall, I quite like reading this book [shy]

There is no process of living, the process is too fast, basically it's all done in one go, but overall it's okay Life experience will disappear after a while, can you add some life to it? You can see it, but not much.