Beast Control: the Beautiful Beast at the Beginning Wants to Be My Spiritual Pet

It's okay, but there is a loophole. The talent can be upgraded, but the result is still F level. It is upgraded to B level at the beginning, and then it is still F level later.

It's not bad, it's quite exciting. Good luck to the author.

When will the author release the second part? Please let me know when it does.

Very good, but there is one small flaw. Didn't the protagonist use a qualification card? Why hasn't it improved? But because this book is really wonderful(›´ω`‹)

Overall it's still very good! In my opinion, it can be rated as nine points. The reason for the low score is because there are two big loopholes. One is that the qualification was said to be B by the system at the beginning, but it was still F afterward! The second is, as mentioned earlier, the mother of the girl from the Long family is a member of the Long family, and her father killed her mother and took away her mother's qualifications and astrolabe. She is a high-level member of some anti-human organization. How come her father later became a member of the Long family! I also found that many authors can't tell the difference between titles, cousin and cousin, nephew and nephew!

You can refer to my comments. My comments are relatively objective. I gave this one four stars. Personally, I think it's okay. The protagonist is decisive in killing and will do it if you don't accept it. I like it very much, but it's a bit unfinished in the end. I'm not the author. You are a 12-level beast master. You can finish writing to 5 levels for me. You are really good at it. What the hell are you kid? The protagonist hasn't found his mother yet. It's good that you left the blank space. It's hard for everyone, right? The heroine is nowhere to be found. What's worth mentioning is that your bat directly evolved into a unicorn? Brothers who like beast-controlling stories can follow me. I personally like beast-controlling stories. You can recommend them to each other.

Please update more quickly. It's so good. I finished it in a few hours.

Very exciting, good luck to the author!

Please update soon. Isn't the interaction with the harem a bit lacking? . . .

Overall, it's pretty good, except that the talent took that elixir and was upgraded to B, but the result is still F.

I finished reading it at 10:46 on August 30, 2024. The subject matter of this book is very good and it is very interesting. Although there are a lot of typos at the end, it is still very good in the end [Please pay attention] [Like] [Send heartfelt wishes] Current rating 7.0

It's pretty good, good luck to the author

In fact, you can write a lot more, why is it that just this little is not enough?

Please author keep writing books like this

It looks good, but it's a bit too short.

It just ended before I finished writing.

The first part is mediocre, but the second part is very good. I hope the author can work harder.

Super exciting, very beautiful There are just a lot of typos

Why did it end so quickly? [What]

Why is it gone? What's next?

Fortunately, I just keep forgetting what I wrote.

It's very well written, but I won't correct the typos.

It's very interesting, but it's a pity that many follow-ups were not written and shouldn't have been hastily ended.

Well written and quite attractive! Come on!

This book is very well written. It would be better if it could be updated more every day.

Very good, full of adventure and challenge? Grow and become stronger in adversity

Not bad, not bad, haha, okay, okay, okay

Personally I feel pretty good

Very good, good luck to the author.

Super exciting and beautiful