[Two male protagonists + no female protagonist + sweet text + both career and relationship are launched]
If you are new to writing, don't mind.
After Xiao Yunzhu passed through the book, he devoted himself to saving the miserable family of the original owner. But why does the deputy general in the original book always follow him?
"General Xie, I have to go to the toilet, do you want to follow me?" Xiao Yunzhu said with a good-tempered smile to Xie Shiye who was following him.
"Azhu, we are all men, what are you afraid of?" Xie Shiye smiled and narrowed his eyes, then came close to Xiao Yunzhu and stared into his eyes.
"Xie Shiye!" Xiao Yunzhu gritted his teeth. Seeing that the other party did not feel his anger, he swung his sleeves and walked away quickly.
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As time passed, Xiao Yunzhu found that he seemed to have liked Xie Shiye for a long time, but he hesitated. It was not until later that Xiao Yunzhu understood his feelings, worried about the other person, disliked him because he was close to others, felt happy because of him, and felt sad because of him...
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Reader comments
Let yourself do this first book review and encourage yourself. I'm not very good at writing, but I will continue to learn and improve my abilities. Come on!
I read this novel on a whim, and I actually thought it was pretty good [Thinking][Thinking] When I first wrote it, I wanted to make Qiu Zhi and Lianxiang the bad guys, but in the end I still couldn't bear it. And for the character Xiao Yunzhu, I was very afraid that I would ruin the character during the writing process, but after reading it for a few months, I felt that it was actually not bad [laughing] [laughing]
Then, Lianxiang and Huang Wu had a side story. They had written a small outline at that time, but during the final exam, they didn't write it. Anyway, they met when they were young, Lianxiang saved Huang Wu, and Huang Wu promised to repay Lianxiang.
Finally, there is the extra story about the two protagonists. I also wrote an outline, but I didn't write it. As this is the first novel that I have completely written, I still like Xie Shiye and Xiao Yunzhu very much. As for their relationship, I may not have grasped the rhythm well, because I have always insisted on taking my time in emotional matters, both before and now. The character Xiao was a little sensitive in the early stage, so he would avoid it when faced with his own feelings, but in the end, with the healing of relatives, friends, and Xie, he opened his heart and was willing to accept Xie.
Alas, I can't bear to see them again. I don't know when I will see them again. They will live well in the world I created. There may be small conflicts, small touches, partings, acquaintances, reunions, and the beauty of the world. Until the end, the two of them are old, leaning together, watching the sunset, and they share a white head and sleep in the same cave...
Okay, bye! Xiao Yunzhu, Xie Shiye.
Let yourself do this first book review and encourage yourself. I'm not very good at writing, but I will continue to learn and improve my abilities. Come on! I read this novel on a whim, and I actually thought it was pretty good [Thinking][Thinking] When I first wrote it, I wanted to make Qiu Zhi and Lianxiang the bad guys, but in the end I still couldn't bear it. And for the character Xiao Yunzhu, I was very afraid that I would ruin the character during the writing process, but after reading it for a few months, I felt that it was actually not bad [laughing] [laughing] Then, Lianxiang and Huang Wu had a side story. They had written a small outline at that time, but during the final exam, they didn't write it. Anyway, they met when they were young, Lianxiang saved Huang Wu, and Huang Wu promised to repay Lianxiang. Finally, there is the extra story about the two protagonists. I also wrote an outline, but I didn't write it. As this is the first novel that I have completely written, I still like Xie Shiye and Xiao Yunzhu very much. As for their relationship, I may not have grasped the rhythm well, because I have always insisted on taking my time in emotional matters, both before and now. The character Xiao was a little sensitive in the early stage, so he would avoid it when faced with his own feelings, but in the end, with the healing of relatives, friends, and Xie, he opened his heart and was willing to accept Xie. Alas, I can't bear to see them again. I don't know when I will see them again. They will live well in the world I created. There may be small conflicts, small touches, partings, acquaintances, reunions, and the beauty of the world. Until the end, the two of them are old, leaning together, watching the sunset, and they share a white head and sleep in the same cave... Okay, bye! Xiao Yunzhu, Xie Shiye.