Naruto: I Trained to Become an Immortal in the Ninja World!

This book is not about gay men, so book friends, please don't get me wrong.

There are a lot of people, so I'll give it a good review. Don't let it suck. The creativity is very good. Keep it up.

The protagonist finally begins to rise.

Okay, it looks good. Just three little demons dare to call themselves immortals. I have long disliked them. The same goes for that kid from Liudao. He can be regarded as a golden elixir at most. Every time they call themselves immortals, I want to give them a slap in the face.

Nice! The writing is very good. The protagonist quietly cultivates immortality and acts like a transparent person. It is recommended that the protagonist use his avatar to collect resources in the ninja world to blur the sense of existence and confuse the sight and hearing of the three holy places. He slowly repairs his eyes and opens the reincarnation eye. After the night of the Kyuubi, he kills Danzo. The protagonist is invincible without the six paths. The main body quietly retreats until the later four battles and then goes out to punch the six paths and kick the big wooden tube!

Gay! Gay! Gay! Hold the gay flag high!

Very interesting, thank you to the author!

This book is good only if you read it without using your brain. People who read with their brains will not be able to read it. There are many books on the market now that you can't read if you read them with your brain. [Shame face] As a bookworm for more than ten years, I basically don't use my brain when I read books now. It's just so satisfying [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] So come on, the author [please update]

The setting is very good, but it's too slow. I didn't get excited until I got to the 200th chapter. I'd like to update it as soon as possible.

I finished reading it in one day. The overall plot is not broken, especially the character of the people is well written, but there are six ways. Is it too hasty to die? Although it is very consistent with cultivating immortals, okay

The theme of this Naruto book is very novel, the plot is good, and the ending is not procrastinating. It is worth reading. I just don't understand why the rating is less than 8. In my opinion, this book can at least be rated between 9.2 And 9.5. Very good, definitely worth watching if you are a Naruto fan

The writing is somewhat realistic and may be resisted by some people who like Naruto.

The book is a pretty good one, but it is a bit too slow. Many people cannot accept this kind of book. It may also be that popular books nowadays are very fast-paced, so many people read popular books and cannot accept this slow-burning book after reading too much. In short, come on, author, it is still a book with great potential.

Since the author said that it is based on the biography of mortals cultivating immortality, the biography of mortals cultivating immortality: refining Qi, building foundation, forming elixir, Nascent Soul, transforming into gods, refining void, combining body, Mahayana, overcoming tribulation. Immortal inverse: Qi refining, foundation building, golden elixir, Yuanying, transformation into gods, infant transformation, aspiration, Yin deficiency, Yang deficiency. Tradition: rotating illumination, consecration, fusion, heartbeat, spiritual silence, Yuanying, out-of-body, distraction, transcending tribulations, Mahayana, when to reach the final state

There was a lot of verbosity in the early stage, but it was wonderful in the later stage. It's worth it that I persisted. I hope the author can do more work and don't end it badly. Come on, author.

The writing is quite interesting and fits the character of Xiaoli. Xiaoli is inherently perverted and extreme. It is normal for Xiaoli to do strange and incomprehensible things. Chapter 155 completes the foundation building, Chapter 505 reveals the golden elixir, and then it ends in less than 600 chapters... The beginning is quite interesting, and it fits the perverted character of the childhood. But in the middle, it starts to get a little boring. I write many chapters for one fight, and the excitement becomes less and less. It would be better if the next book can neutralize it, and the rating will be much higher.

Okay, okay, Naruto fandom, I want you to be the strongest, hold on, don't make it unfinished, keep writing it like this, it will definitely become a hit Come on, author, I'm going to read this book and wait until there are more updates. I'll watch it directly. One or two episodes today are not enough.

The latter part is indeed okay, the first part is a bit long-winded, and the plot changes are also good. The key is that the heroine is more interesting, thumbs up 👍!

Hold on! Don't screw up

The writing is not bad. I read 70 chapters in one go. Except for the protagonist, I feel that everyone else is a little gay [laughing and crying]. In order to respect the author's personal work setting, I can still read it. However, more impatient readers will find it boring [laughing and crying]

Except for being bullied by fellow Uchihas at the beginning and the dragon vein traveling through time and space in the middle is a bit verbose, the rest is pretty good. The two sage modes of toad and snake seem abnormal. The Six Paths can interfere with the human world. They haven't figured out a way to completely seal the mother for a thousand years. They don't care about Black Zetsu. They must have their own plans!

I also hope that I can hold on until the male protagonist rises (good-looking and good-looking)

Super beautiful, the pinnacle of Naruto novels

The time traveling part almost confused me. Happy ending. Worth full marks

When does the protagonist build his foundation?

Pig's foot pawn, book pill [note]

Too short, too short, too short

Hidden Nannan plot [sneaky laugh]

It's okay, but the speed is not fast enough

It's a good book, but the gay romance is a bit eye-catching. It would be better without it.