Madara's Pirate Journey

Overall, it's okay. Madara isn't very OOC, and the plot is quite interesting. There are two poisonous points for me: 1. I thought Madara should walk sideways except for t0, but in the end he couldn't kill the golden lion? 2. There are a group of women around Madara. When the author wrote this part, it seems that the small head tends to dominate the big head. Although this is probably not a shortcoming in male videos, I came to see Madara, not to watch the story of small heads [face covering] Overall four stars, no flaws at all

Come on, the subject matter is good, but don't say that Madara's lover is the girl who was rescued. By the way, I would like to ask the author if he can update more [please update]

I think this book should be rated 8.5 Or above. Nicole's plot about Madara is not considered OOC. It can only be said that the author added drama. I started watching Naruto in the first year of junior high school, and have been working for a year or two after graduation. I have also read novels and various fan fictions for more than eight years. Although I can't give a rigorous summary, I can still see the good and bad. Even if you look at a few highlight clips, you will notice that Banye is so handsome, he is domineering and he doesn't understand anything. This is the image in my mind of Madara's sudden arrival in another world after the Fourth World War. I think every arrangement is very reasonable. You can criticize the author for the Nicole part, but Madara is very reasonable.

Ahhhhhh, this is really a masterpiece among Tomato fans! ! ! It's really good-looking, and it fits the image of Madara in my heart very well. It doesn't have a bad character! ! The author's writing style is very good! Let me see the spot in my mind again. He has a new family, new bonds, and new travels here. Although it is over, his road is still not over. He is a gentle Ban, a proud Ban, and a Ban who has expectations for his children. Madara's journey on the new road was particularly perfect. The process was filled with laughter and laughter. There are many contrasts between Madara's characters. The image of Madara is also enriched and is special. Is what is expected. Let me once again see the traces Madara left behind in the world of pirates. I don't have much influence on the ending. It just means that we haven't seen his future path. The dialogue and guest appearances between Hashirama and Izuna (or should not be guest appearances) are more enriched. Later in the extra chapter, Banxin's family saw him again, and it was full of laughter and laughter.

The writing is good, but the battle plot feels a bit boring. I can't say that Ben's character is 100% restored. I can only say that it is about the same, but it also has a unique flavor. I remember Peach Rabbit only appeared in a few scenes in the anime, as if he didn't exist at all. But to write this book with a completely new identity and character, I think there is no more suitable original character than her. I think Nicole's role is okay. It's really difficult for an ordinary woman to participate in a dispute that is almost entirely filled with monsters. The only dissatisfaction is that the offline method is a bit unacceptable. Gouzi has nothing to say, he can stand up to any situation, and can scold anyone. The scenes where he and Taotu scold others are my favorite, it's so interesting. Originally, I wanted to give it four stars, but when I saw Taotu kneeling on the ground and hysterically shouting "Dad" at the end, I cried, and the tears were a little strange, but it really touched me. After thinking about it, I think about this scene, so I will give it five stars. I read it again after a year and a half. Alas, I feel more stamina when I devote myself to reading.

It's really good-looking, but Madara's current setting is too invincible. When will there be a concept fruit for Madara to fight hard? Madara is just a Hashirama, and I don't agree with the lack of a 1v1 battle between real men and Hashirama in the pirate world.

Come on, Uchiha Madara in Naruto is so handsome in his five battles against the entire ninja world. Since then, he has been his favorite character in Naruto [laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh]

It's good-looking, and Madara in it is both hot and cute.

It's great, there are a lot of funny plots in the early stages. What impressed me the most was Mom's Rush, and Garp was even more anxious hahaha, but once the novelty wore off and started to dull, I didn't have much desire to read it anymore, probably after 60%, but that doesn't stop it from being a pretty good book [I understand]

A very good story, especially in the portrayal of family affection, is very rare in online literature, and it is not just online literature. In recent years, there seems to be no other family-centered work except Spy Playing House. Diary of a Foreign Country is also one of them, but this is not so much about family, but more about the estrangement and communication between people. The character creation is very good. Needless to say, Ban Ye, who is the protagonist, his emotional changes are the core of this book. The supporting characters are also well portrayed, and you can feel their will and spirit. Even if there is the shaping of the original work itself, this shaping is still excellent. The villains are also first-rate, especially the Golden Lion and Yimu. The image of a hero heading towards the top and the king of the world who is restrained and living a little crazy are all very well portrayed. The design of the plot is actually quite good. The character changes at several important points are also well done, and the daily parts are well written, so when the points are reached, you can empathize with the characters. The writing style is overall excellent. Although the visuals and fighting parts are average, the daily parts are humorous, and the emotional parts can also show emotions. Also, even though it is labeled as an invincible style, this book is not really a good read. It's not that it's too weak, but it's just that the focus of the work is not there. There are a lot of daily parts in this book, and it's also a comedy. Moreover, the ending is somewhat regrettable, but it cannot be considered a pure and enjoyable work. So although I think it is a very good work, it is best read by readers who can accept regrets.

The combat setting of this novel is good. Hashirama and Madara's attacks have reached the level of a Yonko general, but their physical defense and battery life are far behind. Otsutsuki Kaguya and her two sons have the ability to overwhelm the entire pirate world. The other six-level attacks are not much stronger than Hashirama and Madara. The battery life is indeed improved, but they are not necessarily better than the Yonko generals. The reason why Six Paths has such strong oppressive power is because the alignment of ninjutsu is ineffective. This is useless in the world of pirates. The Six Paths level is at most a little stronger than the Yonko General, but it may not necessarily win.

Although I have only read thirty or forty chapters, this book is much better than I thought. The writing is good, the characters are well created, Madara's character is well described, and the purpose of the article is good. It is not a mindless and refreshing article, and it is worth reading carefully.

A very good novel that perfectly restores Madara's character, making it a little more relaxed and funny. The heroine's character is also portrayed in a lovable and crazy way. The ending is a bit sad!

It's so good. You, the author, are the best book I've read in Tomato. It describes Madara's psychological state and true character in a detailed way. It's a pity that they can't let them know his background, identity, and experiences. Especially Madara's words made me excited. I really want to believe that this novel is true. Madara has really traveled to the world of pirates and is accompanied by his family. It's not like being betrayed and betrayed by everyone in the world of Naruto.

The writing is very good. Madara has no OOC, so it feels more reasonable. The original name is also good and much better than some unnamed ones, such as the three heads. The book is basically written around Madara's bond. It does not deliberately belittle certain characters. It has good control over the characters. I expect Gouzi to take action and use his mouth to brush the ninja sickle. This has made me curious.

See Chapter Seventeen. . This is the second book I gave five stars to so early. . It's not better than the first one. . It's because I just saw this one. . It's really beautiful! ! I don't understand why the rating is not higher than 9.5. . I won't write my thoughts after reading it. . 20 Years of Bookworm Wall Crack recommends giving it a look. .

I watched Violet's death twice, and it was pretty good. The first part just felt normal, with a little bit of comedy, and suddenly a knife popped out. Although she didn't have many roles, I just read the novel, but anyone who has a role doesn't want to die, except for the kind of person who is in heaven and earth. If you are bored, read it. Highly recommended.

Although I didn't see much of it, I give the sculpting of Madara a nine points. It was very successful. Nanny Madara, some of the later characters are also very annoying, there are too many daily routines

Your wonderful writing is beyond compare. Kan Jun's classical Chinese is better than ten years of writing [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] A good literary work should be like Concubine Yang's sister, who dares to meet the emperor even though she does not put on any makeup. Only if you can write touching articles with simple words and true temperament can you be considered the best. Your article is like flowing clouds and flowing water, written in one go. After reading it, I was enlightened and enlightened. [Smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] The author tells us in a relaxed and pleasant tone, which is endlessly memorable

Great, great, great! This is what I want. Sacrifice, affection, family affection, and friendship are so good. Madara's contrast depicts the contrast between the tenderness of a strong man in the dark. It's really strong. In addition, can the author write some works about other people in Naruto's time travel?

How can I put it? It's quite rare to find a novel with a well-written plot, a well-written character, and rich emotions, but there are a lot of typos. Although it's harmless, it still affects the experience a bit. I just brought the emotion into it, and suddenly a typo ruined the story. I hope the author will have fewer typos in the next book. I highly recommend it.

It's well written, but I don't really like it. Because in my heart Uchiha Madara is domineering. I'm so arrogant that I don't know how he resisted killing that woman, but the writing was really good. Five-star praise.

The writing is pretty good, and I personally feel quite comfortable. The plot has been a bit confusing lately, or is it rushed? I feel that the explanation is not very complete. Although I understand it clearly, I still feel that it needs to be improved. Look at the time

It's very good, the rhythm is well controlled, the plot is clear, the characters are clearly established, the integration of the world view is very smooth, it can be said that there are almost no poisonous points (at least I have not seen them so far), and there are also conflicts and positive side descriptions. Is an excellent novel

How come this book has so many good words? I have read so many of the best fan fiction novels about Madara. They are consistent with everything, and there are also [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] in the tears. I watched it again and it still looks good

Very nice but a little short. I hope the author will continue to work hard [please update]

I like it very much. The author's characters are delicate and three-dimensional. I like Nico very much. It's a pity not to be with Madara. I have read more than a hundred chapters so far. There are not many male authors who can portray female characters so well. Come on. After seeing the scene where Nicole died, I still really like the character of Nicole. It can be seen that the author has carefully portrayed Nicole as a person. I like the female characters who are appearing now. Each image is three-dimensional, rather than a stereotyped vase of sex. But Madara is like that steely gay man who was blinded by Hashirama. His reincarnation eyes are like decorations, but there is no spark of ambiguity at all (not in a derogatory sense). But when Nico is gone, he misses his ex-husband so much, Hashirama. It's so uncomfortable to not have Hashirama after Nico is gone.

It's a very good book, with a bit of a knife, and the character of the class is not broken. As for the people who give negative reviews, if you read it for a few hours, then I won't say it. Each one is 30 minutes and an hour. Do you dare to give a review based on this? I really don't know what I am [laughing awkwardly] [face covering], they are all fanfics. If you want to see what you have in mind, go watch the anime. At least I think it should be the best Madara fanfic.

A very good book, worthy of praise.

This book describes the pirates Naruto and Madara in a very realistic and realistic way. When reading this book, it is easy to empathize with the protagonists in the book. It is a great book. This book has stayed with me for a long time and is a perfect book in my heart (๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧