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Listening to the novel feels quite humorous, especially the last book It feels like the author is becoming more and more casual with his names. . . . Does Gu Qinghan have a rival named Ning Hongye and a mother named Gu Feixue [laughing evilly]

Can the author also include JJ's Mermaid and Jiangnan? Although I am a JJ fan, these two songs by JJ are really walnuts.

It's great. Keep up the good work, author! ! !

It's very exciting. The plot in the front is a foreshadowing, and it unfolds faintly in the middle. The whole story and foreshadowing are explained later - although the characters in the previous novel and the male protagonist in the first novel are both from Earth, they are exactly the same, because at the end of the previous novel, the male protagonist Qin Yang said, "I announce that I will quit the entertainment industry starting today ~ uh, for my wife and children!" But Qin Yang was mentioned in this one, and Xu Luo felt like he had traveled through time again. Yes, it just felt like it. , Because in the previous movie, the male protagonist had the help of the system, and there was a line in the opening few chapters that the system said when the male protagonist Qin Yang wanted to mess up - the system prompts: It is detected that the host has a tendency to withdraw from the circle, you can choose the following options, 1 choose to withdraw from the circle, all previous rewards will be cleared, 2 choose to continue. At that time, the male protagonist Qin Yang chose 2 and later had a child and chose to quit the entertainment industry, and then the system disappeared with the male protagonist's memories and achievements, and the male protagonist felt like he was traveling through a parallel world again.

Among the twenty or thirty novels I have read, this is the only one that I want to write a lengthy review of. As the author said, the more I write about it, the more I like the character of Gu Qinghan. In fact, as a reader, I feel the same as the author. The character of Gu Qinghan is created so well, with a hint of cuteness in her arrogance. Even the relationship between her and the protagonist progresses faster than that between the heroine and the protagonist. The emotional line is even richer, as long as the brothers and sisters who have read this novel can feel it, it finally develops in the direction of two heroines. From my thoughts and even from the chapter comments, it can be seen that most readers no longer mind the dual heroines, because they are not willing to see such a vivid character end up in unrequited love. Next, let's talk about Chen Shun's emotional line. The innocent rich second generation falls in love with a strange and powerful girl. Judging from this plot alone, it can be written into another novel. Even if it is described with the same pen and ink as the protagonist's emotional line, most readers can accept it and even like it. Therefore, it can be made into two lines at the same time, just like there can be two clues in a novel, which are complementary and independent of each other. Finally, let's talk about the main plot. It may be that I have read too many novels of this type and have become a little bit tired of the routine. On the contrary, I am not interested in the emotional development of the protagonist and the heroine. It does not mean that the author's writing is not good. After all, everyone can see whether the author's writing is good or not. They were childhood sweethearts but the male protagonist forgot about them (although they were time-traveled, their memories were fused). This kind of plot cannot be said to be novel, at least it is not very cliché, and the author's writing style is quite good, and the description of the sentences does not seem vulgar, and it still looks very relaxed. In fact, the main reason I want to write these words is to feel angry, regretful, and pity! I'm angry that the author ended such a good novel too hastily. I'm angry that such a likable character ended up silently missing her. I'm angry! So angry! Regret! It's a pity that the author didn't persist (although no matter how hard he persisted, he couldn't fill the hole), it's a pity that such a novel ended like this! ! ! There is so much to say, and I even feel a little aggrieved! Five-star praise! Finally, it can be regarded as a small personal wish. Can the author write a novel with two heroines based on this one, using the original characters of this book? Thank you very much (sorry)

Author, it's my turn to urge you, aha, more updates, do you understand?

The book is quite good, but the author should pay attention to copyright issues! [Grief] (not finding fault, just raising questions)

It's pretty good for now, but the author doesn't need to take a break. Please update as soon as possible. Thank you.

It's okay. It mentions the sea of ​​flowers at the beginning, but there's a lyric in that sea of ​​flowers that says, "I don't want you to leave, the distance can't separate you." And the male protagonist broke up with his ex-girlfriend. Everyone would think that it was written for his ex-girlfriend [awkward laugh] [awkward laugh]

The book is good, but it's a little short. The ending feels too rushed (short and weak). Also, I really like the character of the queen. Is this the end of it? 😭 So I thought there could be a side story or another female protagonist in the book🤤 (you know)

How should I put it? Qin Yang is also a time traveler. I skipped it when I read that chapter, but I feel that he is also a time traveler. Moreover, the protagonist did not remember what happened when he was a child and directly lost his memory. What is going on? (┯_┯)

Great author, this book is great! Looking for a song "Missing is a Disease" ----- Zhang Chenyue [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration] Come on, author! Please add more! Please update!

It's so beautiful. I just hope it doesn't end badly and can stay with me longer. I beg the author.

Can the author add "" in Ge Dongqi's suona version? The suona is an instrument inherited from China, and there are very few songs with the accompaniment of the suona.

Just for this picture... Just for this book, I must give it a five-star review.

It's not a favor. If you have money, everyone can earn this book together. I think it's well written, but I don't know if it's because of the subject matter or something else? The young author also writes like me. A book I read before is a bit similar. It seems to be the same author. Of course, other than these, I personally think this book is relatively good.

I feel like this book is good, but why is the rating so low? This author understands card writing. I don't know if the author can see it. If the author sees it, please leave your home address. I want to send you something.

I really want a side story about Gu Qinghan

Can the author update it soon? I love this book so much [crying]

Give it five stars, not afraid of the author being proud

I'm Song Shu. If the author doesn't want me to open a small account and give you more five-star installments, you know [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] "Looking at your words, I feel this way from afar" On December 15th, when I was very free, I happened to read this article and thought about your words. I was inspired to write this article, and I had only one reason in mind. The faint clouds are like illusory neon clothes. Rising and falling due to the wind, dotted with stars; The clouds and mists meet each other, just because they are hidden. Elegant center parting, black suspenders, Personal practice lasts for several years; I can also sing and dance, and I am good at rap. Dribbling the ball under your crotch creates your own aura; you are so beautiful, the electronic music echoes, The demons are dancing wildly, fighting for supremacy. Who is stronger? Ai Kun is the strongest when he debuts. A rooster crows, and a hundred stems are king! The rhymeless rhyme is the eternal song.

It's generally good, but there are some very strange logical errors in the whole text. For example, after the queen saw the title of the novel when the male protagonist wrote it, she would definitely find out that the male protagonist was the author when she went back to read the novel. The ending is also a bit rushed.

Above average, the author's previous book was better than this one, and there is also a connection. The heroine's parents are the male protagonist and female protagonist in the previous novel. The male protagonist participated in an idol trainee and a love show, and wrote songs and novels. Overall, it is good, but it is a bit regretful for the second-girl queen Gu Qinghan. In fact, it is not unacceptable to have two female protagonists.

It's pretty good to watch, but it's a pity that the ending is a bit too fast, which makes me sad [I almost cried]

It's pretty good. You can read three chapters a day [eating melon]

The writing is okay. As for the fact that I haven't found anything to read so far, I'm quite picky. I hope the author can write more emotionally in the future. Keep up the good work, author.

I hope it looks as good as the previous one, come on!

Come on, it looks good. I hope they can play more roles with Gu Qinghan.

Whether it is from the personality, appearance, strength of the male and female protagonists or from the description of each supporting role, they are all very good-looking and excellent [note] I don't like harems, and this is the first time I want the male protagonist to have two girlfriends, so I don't need to say more about character development.

After reading it, the article is relatively short and generally good. It can be seen that the author still likes the second female lead Gu Qinghan, but there are "certain" limitations of modern writing and the length of the article. The description of the second female lead will be enlarged (because of the short space, even if the description is not much, it takes up a large proportion of the entire article). I actually like the character of Gu Qinghan, but it is a pity that this is a single female protagonist. Gu Qinghan's ending under Qin Shiyu's mainstream female protagonist is destined to be sad. Maybe I'm not very sensitive to single and multiple female protagonists. When it comes to the choice of harem and single female protagonist, I'm more inclined to see whether her description and emotional experience have reached a certain point. If she doesn't achieve anything, she'll feel uneasy.