[Transformation] [Transformation] [Non-traditional dragon text] (Don't enter if you don't like it) + [Abyss Demonic Dragon] + [Continental Hegemony] + [Multiple Female Protagonists]
When an ancient contract binds each other, the damsel in distress with the blood of an angel and the dragon of destruction from the abyss can only make an appointment to go to the Silver Principality under the rule of the Silver Dragon Lord.
However, an unexpected path of destiny slowly unfolded.
Everything started when the girl summoned the dragon.
Reader comments
How can I put it, the overall story is good, but I feel that there is something wrong with the protagonist. The protagonist is a time-travelling, an ordinary person, but after experiencing such a harsh environment in the abyss, the protagonist is still a demonic dragon. After coming to the main world, I feel that the experience of the abyss has no effect on the protagonist. Maybe it is because there are too many powerful people in the main world, and I have to keep a low profile. Are there no women in the abyss? Nothing good to see? What about the succubus? I'm reading chapter 42 now. Damn it, I can't speak well and stuttered, which made me forget that the protagonist is a demon dragon. Damn it, how can an abyss demon dragon be as big as me? He transformed directly into an innocent little boy, and I accepted it, which made me feel torn.
The above is my current opinion. In my impression, dragons are all powerful, domineering and handsome, and the magic dragon is more powerful. In the end, he turns into an innocent boy in front of a beautiful woman. The gap is huge. I was so handsome at the beginning, but ended up like this. This is all my personal opinion, overall it's still very nice.
The description of the details is quite good, unlike other dragon novels where one goes from dragon egg to adult dragon and then conquers the world. Moreover, the identity of the protagonist is quite mysterious so far (there are 112 chapters in total). The character of the protagonist is also interesting. There is no greed and desire like other dragons. At least the character is well developed. Finally, there is the current problem with this book. A large part of this book is actually about looking at dragons, but the protagonist is a demonic dragon species from the abyss. The title of the book should be the original demonic dragon species, but being summoned to the main plane is very... And because the main plane creatures are hostile to abyssal creatures, and this is still a large plane, It is destined that the identity cannot be revealed in the early stage, which is very uncomfortable for book friends who want to read dragons. Therefore, I hope the author will deal with the issue of the protagonist's life experience in the future. It is taboo for the protagonist of dragon novels to turn into a human being. Another point is to indicate the corresponding level of the rank, otherwise it will be uncomfortable to watch and it will not be easy to evaluate the character's combat power.
There is nothing to say about the writing style, but the character needs to be strengthened and explained a little more harshly. I feel that this kind of character looks like a headache😩
The male protagonist is a very gentle and kind-hearted person, boy, girl, passionate western fantasy, harem, these are my favorites. I personally don't like to read that kind of egoism. There are a lot of them in reality, so why should I read novels?
A lot of thought was put into the scene conception and character creation, which is great. I really feel that the quality of each chapter is very high.
It is indeed not popular yet, and the ratings are not very high. Maybe it is because the writing process is demanding and I don't want to make it shoddy.
It's a treasure novel. I hope to see the author finish writing this story. It's okay to take it slow, just don't disappear.
@ Inflammation
Overall, it's good, but the point deduction is that the protagonist has too many human roles. When I came to read your book, I first saw your title: Dragon. I mainly came to see the dragon. It's not that you won't be allowed to transform into a human being, but the proportion of dragons must be higher. (Personal opinion, please discuss rationally👍🏻)
I give it 5 points for this plot outline if nothing else. Finally, an abyssal dragon came to the main plane.
At present, it feels like one of the few high-quality Western fantasy light novels, but the only drawback is that it is too short and too slow, which is not enough to read😡😡😡
Okay, okay, the plot is very good, at first I thought it was a single female protagonist, but when I looked at the homepage, it turned out to be more [staring][staring][staring]
Okay, okay, it's really good. I finished it in three or four hours. It wasn't enough. And I just hope I won't be a eunuch. This book has really high potential and it's really well written. It's rare to see such a well-written book on Tomato.
The writing is excellent, the descriptions are excellent and delicate, and the writing style is as good as if it were written by a literary major, or it could be reduced to the level of tomato dimensionality reduction to attack all kinds of novices. It is very worth reading [Learned it] [Learned it] [Learned it]
The rare fine chaff of tomatoes, don't be misled, the villain's IQ is online and buried
The writing is very good, I hope the author can finish it
The author's writing style is very gentle and makes people feel comfortable. The protagonist is also very elegant, but at the same time he is also very kind. It is a slow-burning harem novel. It is a rare masterpiece.
It's rare to see such a high-quality novel on Tomato
The writing is good. It would be better if the female characters could have more diversified personalities. Instead of all being like Xiaojiabiyu, everyone is gentle and gentle. There is no distinction. The whole point is yandere, queen, tsundere, big sister, little lolita, lively and cute, taciturn, kind, evil, etc.
A good book, a book that deserves at least an 8.5 Rating. The writing is good, a little heavy in places. The plot flows smoothly without any irritation. Can be called a boutique
A very nice book
The story is good, the pace is similar, and the genre is my favorite: Western Fantasy + Harem
But updates are slow
In addition, I felt a little bit of a brain hemorrhage after reading the latest chapter one night and it ended right before the climax of the story.
Two or three updates a month are really annoying [sad][sad][sad]
By the way, is the protagonist an aborigine or a time traveler?
This is a very interesting book. As a harem novel, it is different from other books. Each heroine has her own story with the male protagonist, which makes the characters not seem empty. The overall writing is also very smooth. It is this popularity that makes me afraid that the author will stop updating the book in the future.
Love letters in dreams are worthy of recognition
Not bad, but too weak
I like this subject matter, the writing is good
God among gods, king among kings, a true time travel adventure novel! [Praise]
Nice! Very nice
There are no shortcomings except being small.
Western fantasy ecstasy, author come on
I'm about to finish reading it, Lily, when can I see you again [crying]
Regardless of the traditional setting of the main plot, the plot, characters, details, and descriptions are all in place, all reflecting the author's great writing skills and self-consistency. This book is really fine chaff in 🍅, come on [eat melon]
How can I put it, the overall story is good, but I feel that there is something wrong with the protagonist. The protagonist is a time-travelling, an ordinary person, but after experiencing such a harsh environment in the abyss, the protagonist is still a demonic dragon. After coming to the main world, I feel that the experience of the abyss has no effect on the protagonist. Maybe it is because there are too many powerful people in the main world, and I have to keep a low profile. Are there no women in the abyss? Nothing good to see? What about the succubus? I'm reading chapter 42 now. Damn it, I can't speak well and stuttered, which made me forget that the protagonist is a demon dragon. Damn it, how can an abyss demon dragon be as big as me? He transformed directly into an innocent little boy, and I accepted it, which made me feel torn. The above is my current opinion. In my impression, dragons are all powerful, domineering and handsome, and the magic dragon is more powerful. In the end, he turns into an innocent boy in front of a beautiful woman. The gap is huge. I was so handsome at the beginning, but ended up like this. This is all my personal opinion, overall it's still very nice.
The description of the details is quite good, unlike other dragon novels where one goes from dragon egg to adult dragon and then conquers the world. Moreover, the identity of the protagonist is quite mysterious so far (there are 112 chapters in total). The character of the protagonist is also interesting. There is no greed and desire like other dragons. At least the character is well developed. Finally, there is the current problem with this book. A large part of this book is actually about looking at dragons, but the protagonist is a demonic dragon species from the abyss. The title of the book should be the original demonic dragon species, but being summoned to the main plane is very... And because the main plane creatures are hostile to abyssal creatures, and this is still a large plane, It is destined that the identity cannot be revealed in the early stage, which is very uncomfortable for book friends who want to read dragons. Therefore, I hope the author will deal with the issue of the protagonist's life experience in the future. It is taboo for the protagonist of dragon novels to turn into a human being. Another point is to indicate the corresponding level of the rank, otherwise it will be uncomfortable to watch and it will not be easy to evaluate the character's combat power.
There is nothing to say about the writing style, but the character needs to be strengthened and explained a little more harshly. I feel that this kind of character looks like a headache😩
The male protagonist is a very gentle and kind-hearted person, boy, girl, passionate western fantasy, harem, these are my favorites. I personally don't like to read that kind of egoism. There are a lot of them in reality, so why should I read novels?
A lot of thought was put into the scene conception and character creation, which is great. I really feel that the quality of each chapter is very high. It is indeed not popular yet, and the ratings are not very high. Maybe it is because the writing process is demanding and I don't want to make it shoddy. It's a treasure novel. I hope to see the author finish writing this story. It's okay to take it slow, just don't disappear. @ Inflammation
Overall, it's good, but the point deduction is that the protagonist has too many human roles. When I came to read your book, I first saw your title: Dragon. I mainly came to see the dragon. It's not that you won't be allowed to transform into a human being, but the proportion of dragons must be higher. (Personal opinion, please discuss rationally👍🏻)
I give it 5 points for this plot outline if nothing else. Finally, an abyssal dragon came to the main plane.
At present, it feels like one of the few high-quality Western fantasy light novels, but the only drawback is that it is too short and too slow, which is not enough to read😡😡😡
Okay, okay, the plot is very good, at first I thought it was a single female protagonist, but when I looked at the homepage, it turned out to be more [staring][staring][staring]
Okay, okay, it's really good. I finished it in three or four hours. It wasn't enough. And I just hope I won't be a eunuch. This book has really high potential and it's really well written. It's rare to see such a well-written book on Tomato.
The writing is excellent, the descriptions are excellent and delicate, and the writing style is as good as if it were written by a literary major, or it could be reduced to the level of tomato dimensionality reduction to attack all kinds of novices. It is very worth reading [Learned it] [Learned it] [Learned it]
The rare fine chaff of tomatoes, don't be misled, the villain's IQ is online and buried
The writing is very good, I hope the author can finish it
The author's writing style is very gentle and makes people feel comfortable. The protagonist is also very elegant, but at the same time he is also very kind. It is a slow-burning harem novel. It is a rare masterpiece.
It's rare to see such a high-quality novel on Tomato
The writing is good. It would be better if the female characters could have more diversified personalities. Instead of all being like Xiaojiabiyu, everyone is gentle and gentle. There is no distinction. The whole point is yandere, queen, tsundere, big sister, little lolita, lively and cute, taciturn, kind, evil, etc.
A good book, a book that deserves at least an 8.5 Rating. The writing is good, a little heavy in places. The plot flows smoothly without any irritation. Can be called a boutique
A very nice book
The story is good, the pace is similar, and the genre is my favorite: Western Fantasy + Harem But updates are slow In addition, I felt a little bit of a brain hemorrhage after reading the latest chapter one night and it ended right before the climax of the story. Two or three updates a month are really annoying [sad][sad][sad]
By the way, is the protagonist an aborigine or a time traveler?
This is a very interesting book. As a harem novel, it is different from other books. Each heroine has her own story with the male protagonist, which makes the characters not seem empty. The overall writing is also very smooth. It is this popularity that makes me afraid that the author will stop updating the book in the future.
Love letters in dreams are worthy of recognition
Not bad, but too weak
I like this subject matter, the writing is good
God among gods, king among kings, a true time travel adventure novel! [Praise]
Nice! Very nice
There are no shortcomings except being small.
Western fantasy ecstasy, author come on I'm about to finish reading it, Lily, when can I see you again [crying]
Regardless of the traditional setting of the main plot, the plot, characters, details, and descriptions are all in place, all reflecting the author's great writing skills and self-consistency. This book is really fine chaff in 🍅, come on [eat melon]
Not bad, good, good-looking