Primordial Demon Dragon

How can I put it, the overall story is good, but I feel that there is something wrong with the protagonist. The protagonist is a time-travelling, an ordinary person, but after experiencing such a harsh environment in the abyss, the protagonist is still a demonic dragon. After coming to the main world, I feel that the experience of the abyss has no effect on the protagonist. Maybe it is because there are too many powerful people in the main world, and I have to keep a low profile. Are there no women in the abyss? Nothing good to see? What about the succubus? I'm reading chapter 42 now. Damn it, I can't speak well and stuttered, which made me forget that the protagonist is a demon dragon. Damn it, how can an abyss demon dragon be as big as me? He transformed directly into an innocent little boy, and I accepted it, which made me feel torn. The above is my current opinion. In my impression, dragons are all powerful, domineering and handsome, and the magic dragon is more powerful. In the end, he turns into an innocent boy in front of a beautiful woman. The gap is huge. I was so handsome at the beginning, but ended up like this. This is all my personal opinion, overall it's still very nice.

The description of the details is quite good, unlike other dragon novels where one goes from dragon egg to adult dragon and then conquers the world. Moreover, the identity of the protagonist is quite mysterious so far (there are 112 chapters in total). The character of the protagonist is also interesting. There is no greed and desire like other dragons. At least the character is well developed. Finally, there is the current problem with this book. A large part of this book is actually about looking at dragons, but the protagonist is a demonic dragon species from the abyss. The title of the book should be the original demonic dragon species, but being summoned to the main plane is very... And because the main plane creatures are hostile to abyssal creatures, and this is still a large plane, It is destined that the identity cannot be revealed in the early stage, which is very uncomfortable for book friends who want to read dragons. Therefore, I hope the author will deal with the issue of the protagonist's life experience in the future. It is taboo for the protagonist of dragon novels to turn into a human being. Another point is to indicate the corresponding level of the rank, otherwise it will be uncomfortable to watch and it will not be easy to evaluate the character's combat power.

There is nothing to say about the writing style, but the character needs to be strengthened and explained a little more harshly. I feel that this kind of character looks like a headache😩

The male protagonist is a very gentle and kind-hearted person, boy, girl, passionate western fantasy, harem, these are my favorites. I personally don't like to read that kind of egoism. There are a lot of them in reality, so why should I read novels?

A lot of thought was put into the scene conception and character creation, which is great. I really feel that the quality of each chapter is very high. It is indeed not popular yet, and the ratings are not very high. Maybe it is because the writing process is demanding and I don't want to make it shoddy. It's a treasure novel. I hope to see the author finish writing this story. It's okay to take it slow, just don't disappear. @ Inflammation

Overall, it's good, but the point deduction is that the protagonist has too many human roles. When I came to read your book, I first saw your title: Dragon. I mainly came to see the dragon. It's not that you won't be allowed to transform into a human being, but the proportion of dragons must be higher. (Personal opinion, please discuss rationally👍🏻)

I give it 5 points for this plot outline if nothing else. Finally, an abyssal dragon came to the main plane.

Okay, okay, the plot is very good, at first I thought it was a single female protagonist, but when I looked at the homepage, it turned out to be more [staring][staring][staring]

Okay, okay, it's really good. I finished it in three or four hours. It wasn't enough. And I just hope I won't be a eunuch. This book has really high potential and it's really well written. It's rare to see such a well-written book on Tomato.

At present, it feels like one of the few high-quality Western fantasy light novels, but the only drawback is that it is too short and too slow, which is not enough to read😡😡😡