Da Qin: Falling from the Sky, the First Emperor Regards Me as an Immortal

Looks good, come on, come on, come on

It took a lot of effort to publish an empire novel that I like. If the author is great, he won't need eunuchs/(ㄒoㄒ)/~~

This book focuses on the Qin Empire. The protagonist's strength is average, not very strong, nor very weak. When there is really no plot, the author will write about the small world. After coming back, he will start to write some of his own ideas. After improving his strength, he will start to behave randomly. The overall plot is not bad, but if you look closely, I can only say that it is average, cannot be said to be bad, and cannot be said to be very good. Okay, the rating is about the same now, but it can be improved a bit. It's about 8 points. If you get 9 points, don't worry about it. I hope the author can polish it a little more. Based on my writing ability in reading books before, I probably opened 1 book. Now it should be the writing ability of the 2nd to 3rd book. It's not bad. If nothing happens, you can read it.

Cool! Comfortable! There is fantasy, there is science fiction, and I am pursuing [admiration] [admiration] [admiration]

Come, the author, read with me I solemnly swear: starting from today, I will never update. I will not watch dramas, travel, or get sick. I will play no games, no hydrology. Strict self-discipline, cherishing time like gold, perseverance, hard work, advocating first-class, striving for brilliance, taking pleasure in coding, being tempered into steel, and worthy of readers, worthy of youth, and worthy of the future. As an author, I solemnly declare: I firmly believe that I am an excellent author. Coding is my bounden duty. I have unlimited potential and am not afraid of hardship! I can code words diligently. I am a keyboard in the dark and a guard on the Great Wall of Internet. I voluntarily dedicate my life to code words every day and every night.

I feel good about this book, the story is novel and the plot is exciting

When I read this book, it was 7:08, but why did it jump to more than 6:00 now? I don't understand this, but I think it would be better if this book is very refreshing. I see many people in the comment area saying how to write it? How should I write it in a reasonable way? I'm thinking that novels should make people feel good, not just for you. This is my personal opinion. Well, don't criticize me. Well, I can be considered a veteran old bookworm. I have read some Tomato popular books, but not the male or female ones. I think if this book is more exciting or more updated, it may reach more than 8 o'clock. And what I just forgot to mention, you still need to have a little bit of CP, the spice of life, not too much. After all, Xiu Xian has a little relationship with him, and then, I prefer listening to books, and I don't like reading so much, so I didn't hear many typos, so I really I don't know if there are typos, and I think there are a lot of blocking points. In fact, they are not considered blocking points. As I said before, if you read a good article, you should feel good about it. This is his label. We readers only need to feel good about it. The author should be the one who has the headache. The hole he dug still needs to be filled up.

I like the outline of this book very much, but I don't like some of the settings in the book. I still hope that the author can finish the book without eunuchs.

Come on, the author is looking forward to the next one

Your Majesty's Great Qin will be immortal forever

Not bad, just a little bit less

When seeing this novel, time-travelers think of one thing. What do you think of those people on earth who have traveled to other worlds? One thing that comes to my mind is that it is like a deity in heaven. The gods from heaven were demoted to the mortal world. Let's take a look at these time-travelers on the earth. Do they look like they transported people through time? Time-traveling is called being demoted to the mortal world [cover face][cover face][cover face] Do you want the author to have a protagonist who travels through time and not engage in people's livelihood? Do you only write about traveling through the Ming Dynasty without bringing any potatoes, sweet potatoes and corn back to the Qin Dynasty?

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Good-looking ✧(◍˃̶ᗜ˂̶◍)✩Very exciting. The Xiongnu must die and the Qin Dynasty must win [crazy][crazy][crazy][punch out][punch out][punch out]

A solid five-star review.

It looks good. To be the emperor, you have to be the First Emperor Ying Zheng.

I hope the author doesn't finish the book badly. I like this book very much and will support it [laughing]

I thought the infrastructure was half cultivator and half technological. Regarding Chi You's part. ,. I'm fascinated by it [stare][stare][stare]

The writing is really awesome

The writing is okay, keep up the good work.

I finished reading it in one go, it was great, I hope the author can work hard!

I like it very much, cheers up＾0＾~

It's okay. Just improve the summoned characters a little bit.

It's just ordinary time travel, and I don't see where the magic comes into play.

Super exciting, I don't understand why the rating is so low Except for the failing point of Li Biyao, the rest of this book is still good. Keep up the good work, author.

Why don't Xiao He and Han Xin find it out? Shouldn't the left foot know it now?

Don't want to say anything! One word "absolutely"

It's still possible, author [learned], please update it quickly, otherwise I will turn you into a eunuch [laughing evilly]

It's very interesting, I hope it won't be discontinued! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

This is the first time I read a book of this type, and I feel it is quite good. The author is not a eunuch.