System*******

It looks great. Keep up the good work and keep up the good work.

Ever since the 28/20 Law came out, I have been looking forward to adapting the novel version. Come on, author＾0＾~

Will the author update it soon? This book is very interesting, keep up the good work! ! !

It's very beautiful, the only drawback is that it's a little slow! [Laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing]

Very interesting, good luck to the author! ! !

Come on, I love this brainstorming

Hey, why did Qin Shi ask Yang Hua to rescue Tao Junhui? Yang Hua didn't want her to go alone. Afterwards, Yang Hua got angry and ignored her. Wouldn't it be better to let Master Qin comfort her? She was a little unhappy when watching TV before, and it's the same now. In this regard, Yang Hua is too good for Qin Shi.

The change was quite good. In the original story, Yang Hua hated Jason so much because of his evasion. He refused to retaliate even if there was any evidence. He ran away after seeing his family being in trouble. The plot in the front was okay, but the ten episodes in the back were so fast that I felt confused and ended hastily. At least there is a system in this article, and the male protagonist is a book-wearer, living a relatively comfortable life, with support, strength and wealth, he is a winner in life.

Come on, I finally found a fan novel about the 28/20 rule of love. [Cool][Smile]

I like your book very much, keep working hard and write it.

It makes up for a lot of regrets I had when watching the drama. The writing tends to be cool and male-oriented.

Although there is not much change between the first person and the third person, the writing style is really good, but the system is lost as it is written. Then there is the one about Luo Wei Yulan, and the one about Qin Shi being beaten is gone. But it's really good to say whether to say it or not. It's okay to write it for the first time.

It's super good-looking. The author should update it soon [cover face][cover face][cover face][cover face] The author is great. This may be one of the few novels in Tomato🍅. Come on and update it! You may not be able to find any other similar novels. Hey, come on! Go with 5 stars

Come on! Like it very much

Not bad, not bad, so sweet, thank you to the author😊

Very well written, keep up the good work!

It's great. It's hard to find a TV series and novel that I like.

Come on 💪I'm optimistic about you, author. I personally think this book is pretty good. I don't think it's enough. The author should work harder to write more words.

Hahahahahaha God help me too hahahahaha

I would like to make a suggestion, can you change the first person to the third person? Don't change it, just start from now on, author? Of course it doesn't matter if you don't change it.

Your system is down, why is it gone?

Overall it seems good to me, keep writing.

Very well written, keep it up (ง •̀_•́)ง

I just finished watching the TV series and the novel came out. Come on, author! [Laugh]

It feels good. This should be the first 28 book on the Internet.

It's pretty good, I hope I don't want to be a eunuch [laughs][laughs]

There are a little few updates, and the production team doesn't even take a break, but it's still pretty good.

Come on, come on, come on

It looks good, go for it

Your system is gone, right?