One Piece: Killing Momonosuke by Mistake at the Beginning

The update is too slow, please hurry up. I want to see the boat king quacking indiscriminately

In my mind, the writing is really good. Currently, there are too few articles about Drought Jack in One Piece on the Internet, but it is still very good to be able to write like this.

Come on! Liver! ! Go! ! ! (Mainly updates) The author, at a young age, has the talent to understand the world and the earth, and has the wisdom to stabilize the country. The ancients said that the crouching dragon and the phoenix can make the world peaceful. Now, God bless us in Greater China. For 5,000 years of vicissitudes of life, there is a thunder on the ground, flying sand and rocks, dancing in the sky. In the haze, I can only see a golden-armored god standing tall between heaven and earth. This man is a hero. Holding two axes, his eyes are like lightning. When one ax goes down, chaos begins to bloom. When he goes down with two axes, Nuwa creates human beings. When he goes down three axes, Xiaosheng falls over. It is a blessing to have such a great hero, and a blessing to the people. How can it not make people cry with joy... So when will you update?

This book is the only One Piece fanfic that I have read in which the protagonist does not know the main plot. The protagonist is still Jack. Momonosuke died in the first chapter. I can only say that he is invincible. There are many interesting people in One Piece. It feels more immersive to write it with existing characters. Especially after reading the Wano Country chapter, I like Kaido and his gang even more. In the original work, I feel that it would be perfect if Kaido did not open an weapons factory (which is not good for ordinary people) and changes the development mode. At least Kaido is many times stronger than Oden in terms of personality charm.

It looks good, looks comfortable, funny and enjoyable. It's a thoroughly enjoyable story. There are no ups and downs in the plot. It just goes on slowly and invincibly. It turns Momonosuke's head off at the beginning. The original protagonist group is also a soy sauce existence. The empress was fucked as soon as she came out and gave birth to a child for the protagonist. [Cover face][cover face][cover face] Overall it's pretty good

It looks great, but is the original fruit too weak?

In fact, Jack can also master the power of nature. Think about the living environment of mammoths. I think it's possible to spray blizzards out of your nose or summon blizzards around you.

We'll talk about the rest later. Momonosuke died in Chapter 1. Then I must give this 5 stars first and then talk about it.

It's really lighthearted and funny, the main character is like a naughty kid [face covering] However, there is a lot of wisdom, but it is not commonly used. Also, it's too relaxed and everyday. I only went out to sea once or twice after watching half of it. If it weren't for the protagonist's bug, the system would be a complete waste.

When you want to write about regret, you can't just write about regret, you have to write about the emotions it often brings, the nights it keeps you tossing and turning, the symbols it drips on the diary, and the childish thoughts of longing to turn back time.

It's pretty good. Although the writing style is relatively immature, it's pretty good to read. I just feel like it's a bit boring if the whole family uses maces. I think it would be interesting if it were a flat axe. If it's a mace, I hope it's the kind that the original god uses to convince people with virtue. It's best to have two weapons, double maces.

The character of the protagonist and the design of the plot are very good. The content is also very interesting and makes people want to read on. Of course, I think there are still some flaws, that is, the ending description is a bit abrupt. Overall, this author's book is very good. Come on, author! ! !

Tomato finally has a pirate novel with a different style of painting

It can eat three Devil Fruits, three animal-type phantom beasts, which is good and fits the theme of the book. It can really resist it. Otherwise, the best thing would be a thunder fruit plus a magnetic fruit plus a self-created animal-type human fruit. The phantom beasts are not afraid of accidentally falling into the sea. The kind that can come out on their own, such as the Susanoo form, can have electromagnetism and be a sea god, so the author has arranged a new book Is the author considering writing about the Charlotte family? Charlotte Owen's superhuman heat fruit is very good. It is stronger than another heat fruit with an upper limit of 10,000 degrees. It can not only heat itself but also heat the surrounding objects. It can be matched with the armed color Haki. It can also be heated from the air and combined with the overlord color to wrap around and fight from a distance. It feels like Luffy's rubber fruit. It may be an alternative. It may awaken in the form of the phantom beast Seraph.

I don't know why it's 8 points, I don't see any difference from 9.5. Post a follow-up review. I can say that more than 300,000 One Piece fans have read this book. As for the plot, I think there is no problem in giving 10 points. You can go to the next door to charge. The book next door has not been good recently. The shortcoming is the casting. Although Jack is funny and Goldfinger is also very creative, I still don't post my current point of view. Now One Piece wants to be happy, including appearance. Jack is not good at Devil Fruits and looks. If One Piece has more room for ideas than Naruto, it can be said to be an open world, and the pressure is not so great. The author can create a new protagonist in the next book, and then eat a fantasy beast species. This book may need to eat double fruits in the future. Pirates should not have multiple abilities, or other plane abilities. In a must not lick the original protagonist, come on, many people in Tomato are novice readers, so unlike the aesthetic next door, your overall idea is fine

It's pretty good-looking. But for truly good-looking pirate fanfics, he is one-third original. Two-thirds of the plot. This book has a little more original plot. What you write are plot characters, and there are too many storylines and characters that deviate from the main plot. But his plot and character creation is also very good (excluding his own original characters [awkward laughter])

Very good, yes, the writing is very good. A bit better than the average One Piece fanfic How do you describe the Big Mom Pirates? It would be better if you use English. Or just use the Chinese description of Big Mom Pirates to make it clearer.

The author of this book is very imaginative, and the content in it is absolutely beyond imagination. I have rarely seen such a imaginative book. It is really good. Maybe I am exaggerating, but in my opinion, this book really deserves five stars (//∇//)

Fortunately, I just forgot that it was a time traveler later. I don't know what the plot of the character is.

Okay, this is one of the Pirates fics that Tomato can read now, please read it and cherish it [Like]

I didn't review it until I finished reading it. It's well written and I'm looking forward to the new book. Just a miss, it proves that I have been here

I think the novel is quite interesting. It can describe Jack with flesh and blood and make the plot logical and self-consistent, instead of like many authors who write novels to satisfy their own fantasies.

He looks good, but can his appearance be changed? He doesn't need to be so handsome. He should at least be as domineering as Kaido. Also, the red hair is all done, so it doesn't take away from Uta Awa. Drive high and go low. .

It's good now, but I don't know when to eat the second fruit.

I feel like whether a book becomes popular nowadays depends a bit on luck. This book is well written, but not many people read it.

Not to mention anything else, sending Momonosuke away at the beginning was worth it! ! !

It is highly recommended that Jack eats the dragon fruit from Momonosuke's lesson. Physically, he is almost invincible. He also has long-range attack methods, which is basically equivalent to an enhanced version of Kaido.

The writing is quite good, some parts in the front are watery and have some ink marks, but the back part is unfinished. I can obviously feel that the writing in the back is anxious, and the second devil fruit is a bit too abrupt and hasty. I personally feel it is very awkward. Since it is Drought Jack, the second natural or superhuman one is so good. Overall, I give it four stars.

This can be regarded as a ruthless novel among pirates. If you like ruthless novels, you can read it.

One of the few pirate stories that I can finish reading! Keep up the good work, author! ! ! [Praise]