Doomsday Invasion! Wasteland Survival Guide

After reading the 38 chapters currently updated, I feel that it is getting better and better as the chapters go by. The previous descriptions are too flat, and I feel like I am writing a narrative - it is as straightforward as writing a narrative. There is no desire for people to read further. The readers are a little sleepy. I hope that the later descriptions can be more vivid and three-dimensional. Moreover, many parts feel that the logic is not strict and cannot withstand careful consideration. For example, the heroine signed up to clean up the zombies because Bai Ye didn't have enough to eat, but in fact they had only known each other for a few months. It didn't feel particularly reasonable for the heroine to risk her life for someone she had only known for a few months. At the beginning, I came here because the author said that the heroine is not a virgin and has no emotional connection. I hope this character will not fall apart later. Also, if Bai Ye is the male protagonist, I don't like his character very much. His attitude towards the people around the heroine is inexplicable. He is obviously not qualified to decide the heroine's interpersonal relationships. I hope he is not a character who thinks he is handsome in the past. In comparison, I prefer Lu Yan'an, who is calm and gentle. The most important thing is that he is more normal compared to Bai Ye. Of course, I know that Bai Ye's experience determines that he will not be a normal person, but the kind of character that forces the heroine and will go crazy when seeing the heroine having normal interpersonal relationships with others will make me miss normal people more and more after watching it too much. The first few chapters after the heroine has superpowers are a bit better. I think the author has written more smoothly. I hope the content can be more interesting and make people want to know what will happen next. There is not much content that makes me feel particularly excited or interested, but it is much better than the beginning. There are some places that I also find quite interesting. Keep up the good work, author💪 There are also supporting characters like Wei Ming that I particularly like. Thanks to the well-characterized supporting characters, they can even be more eye-catching than the protagonist. After all, the world is never said to be saved and changed by one person. It is often countless little people who hold up the world. I hope the author will not kill them. I want to see the protagonists support each other and go forward. I prefer friendship to love.

Later, the heroine has special powers. After the big boss comes out, I feel that the plot has reached a climax. I don't know why watching the heroine being tortured makes me feel happy. I can't be BT~