Wearing the Original God's Vest and Causing Trouble in Douluo Continent

It's good to read, but I feel that Mond and the personnel insertion are a little bit... Abrupt, but overall, the new book is very good [like][like][like] Be conservative (╹▽╹)

Except for the few chapters, I think everything else is very good. I hope you can continue to update it! [Blowing kiss] It's not a high score, it can only be changed.

It looks great. I'm really looking forward to it. Can I have more? Is that so?

In terms of universal rationality, that's pretty good. I'm working hard to keep this book alive for a long time.

If you are interested, you can take a look at the new book "The Genshin Vest in the Fantasy World Comes Real"

Make a career, make a career Make a career, make a career friendship to friendship No CP, do not combine all the CPs in the original work All of them give me a career Laugh] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] After reading the comments, I found out that there are still pressure points.

Come on, I've always wanted to read this type of fanfic

Great book feels good to read In order to save this book, I can only score points.

Don't worry, everyone has already heard about it. The author has started a new book. It's Genshin Impact in a fantasy world. He is currently saving up the number of words. Let's look forward to it together! ! ! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

I'll give you 4 stars. I'm afraid that one day it will be completely gone [face covering]. The writing of Douluo who has not been sealed is basically very poor, and it is rare to find good writing. Plug in here to see when this book will be closed [face covering]

He said that if the rating is too high, the book will be lost, so I have never dared to comment, but I didn't expect the author to backstab me. In order to support such a weird author, I must give a five-star rating [cover face] [cover face] [cover face] [cover face]

No more, no more, the author ran away, he disappeared as soon as I clicked in, I really know how to toggle q! ! !

I finished reading it without realizing it. I think this book has a good idea. It uses the beauty of Teyvat to neutralize the cruelty of the cultivation system, and uses the idea of ​​equality for everyone to break through the blockade of the gods. The author's writing is also good, and I support it with five stars.

The writing is not bad, but the connection issues in some plots are a bit unclear, and the switching of characters is a little hasty, but overall it can be regarded as excellent.

It looks good so far, a little less filthy than Douluo and a little more relaxed and happy. Copyright issue, I give it a star

First of all, the statement is somewhat interesting. Secondly, the author does not describe the time and place in detail. How can I put it this way? Suddenly several years have passed since I was watching it, but before I could react, the scene changed as I watched it. I was still looking at who was talking to which person or doing something. In the next paragraph, the person and place suddenly changed. In fact, the author changed the place when he wrote it. If it's easy, you can add a dividing line or write something like "Let's do this on the other side at the same time." Then when writing, add some more descriptions of time, "A few years later, a few days later." This way I can have a clear timeline in my mind to sort it out. Of course the book is still interesting. (Of course, these are my small suggestions. If the author says that my words make your writing ideas confusing, you don't need to refer to it, or you can just comment on the comment and ask me to delete it.)

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I saw the author's comment, four stars, thank you so much for the author!

This... Is so sudden. I quite like this book. Well... It's a pity. Forget it. See you again... En... After thinking about it for a while, I'd better give it a three-star rating.

Alas, no more. It is necessary to be conservative.

This book is really good, but due to copyright issues I have to give it a lower score [face covering]

Ah, it's true that I reported it! But the book is beautiful! ! ! Since you have reported it, there is no need to keep score! Give it five stars! !

Wow, it's so well written in big letters. The characters and personalities of Genshin Impact are all very well portrayed, the plot is ups and downs, the language is humorous, and the subject matter is also very novel. I just hope there will be more, but there is simply not enough to watch. [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

Awesome, I came here from another website.

It's really, really, really, really beautiful. I will regret not watching this series.

My wife is so pretty! Big creativity is the first one! Very beautiful, come on!

I thought this book would be serialized for a long time, but the author reported his book [smile]

I want to give Third Young Master a razor blade, who will come with me? By the way, I cut the person on the tomato with a knife.

Four stars is the author's requirement, otherwise 100 stars would not be enough [laughs][laughs][laughs]

I really enjoyed writing it, so I'll give it a few points.