In an accident, Bai Dao traveled to the elf world and awakened the elf review system.
As long as the elves pass his review, they will change, have new characteristics, and be strengthened in all aspects.
King of Leave: I am indestructible?
Armored Warrior: You said I cheated my teammates?
Bi Diao: Only by Xiaozhi's side can I become stronger!
Xiaozhi: My elf is too strong!
Bai Dao: I really don't want to change the world, I just want to comment on the elves.
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When one review video after another is played.
All the trainers can't calm down anymore!
All three views have been changed. Is this still the elf I know?
Each of the elves has changed, shocking the whole world!
Damalanchi: We must find the author!
Sakaki: We must find the author before the Elf Alliance!
Bai Dao: Why are you panicking? See you at the World Championships!
"Elf: I asked you to comment, but I didn't ask you to change the world!" Comment: I took stock of the characteristics of elves and changed the world! "Elf Comments: Not only did I change the world, but I also allowed Ash to win the championship! Bi Diao returns, Xiaozhi will definitely win the Kalos Conference!
Reader comments
After reading these chapters, I looked solemn, lowered my head deeply, turned off my phone silently, stood up, opened the refrigerator, took out a bottle of 1982 collector's edition Nongfu Spring, held it tightly in my hand, and slowly walked to the window. The scenery outside the window was a bit dim, just like my mood, heavy, very heavy. It was raining lightly in the gray sky. Why was my vision blurred? I don't know if it was because I was crying or because it was raining harder. It's possible. My mood became even more melancholy. I could no longer suppress my inner emotions. I opened the window and shouted out the window: Just update a few pictures. Who are you looking down on? [Learned][Eat melon]
If one day the male protagonist comments on the Three Evil Dragons, the Evil Eater King, the Megalodon Shark and the Great Wolf Dog, and gives them excellent racial values and unnatural characteristics that allow them to counterattack and restrain their attributes, will they become endangered species?
I don't know why I didn't see the corresponding comments. I read 49 accounts and solemnly talked about the problems I think. I know that reading books is just for fun and does not require thinking, but I hope the author can take a look at the time. When Ash arrived in Kalos, the water fleet was gone, and the Fire Rock Team was still there, but the Red Flame Pine basically disbanded it. Then the Galaxy Team was arrested, and the Plasma Team was also there when Ash went there. At that time, N learned about Qu Qisi's conspiracy and disbanded it. Even if Plasma Group has already passed by the protagonist according to the game settings, it should be disbanded. But everything you wrote is still there, which makes me very puzzled. I might as well say that Xiaozhi just traveled not long ago, so it won't feel weird. Otherwise, Xiaozhi is in Kalos and all the villains are still there. Emmm, it feels like Xiaozhi has never been to other areas.
The author can take a look at what I said and modify the timeline a little bit. Otherwise, many Pokémon secrets like me may feel weird the more they read, and then stop reading @jealous
It's a rare good book, but it also has a lot of poisonous points.
It is recommended that the author strengthen the Speaker Cricket and add an evolved version of the Speaker Cricket. But when it comes to the Speaker Cricket, I laugh every time I read it. Speaker Cricket? ? Speaker Cricket, do you look like a hero? Do you look like a hero? You are also a cricket man with a speaker. It's a huge difference.
After you evolve for a while, come back again, ah. Or do you have a few speakers? Ah, I saw a weak Pokémon and asked me to help him. Do you have the strength to help him? Ah? Didn't you get directly crushed by others when you went up there? ? What else can I help?
I won't even say that when Dolphin Heroes are in the sea, they encounter dangers or other bullies, such as this... Chihouba is bullying others. He is bullying this and this... Mililong. Then this Dolphin Man goes up and asks me to help! It turns out that Mi Lilong is controlling this Chihouba. Ah, sorry, I made a mistake. Right? Then this is such a hero of justice(?)
What can a speaker cricket do? Still going to be a hero? You need that kind of strength to be a hero. You don't have the same muscles as anyone else. Look at their muscles. They are quite developed. Do you see that? ?
The attack power is one hundred and sixty. Did you see your attack power? You are not as high as anyone except two. (Two), you are not as high as him when multiplied by two. I'll be honest. Can the attack power of the Speaker Cricket be doubled to reach 160? It can't be right? It seems not possible.
Must be good at 55, the author must have four a day to increase the rating, come on ⊙∀⊙! !
As the first author, can you give me a reply?
It's very novel, and the author's writing style is pretty good. I highly recommend you read it. Other novels are all about the top ten trainers and so on. Few people think about those Pokémon with poor characteristics and racial values. The author thought about it and changed it. If nothing else, the author gives you a big five stars.
Is there someone maliciously giving me a low score? This book is quite interesting, why is it only 5.5? I like the fact that the review is about groups rather than individuals. I read the review article before, and after reviewing the individual, enemies have to be suppressed, friends have to protect, and opportunities will be taken away by others, which makes me a little tired...
The subject matter is novel and the plot is exciting and fun. Endless aftertaste
Excellent, very good-looking, I look forward to the day when you become popular, come on↖(^ω^)↗👍
I think it's pretty good to write about the main character's plot. If you just write reviews and read too many plots, you'll feel bored. If you only write reviews, you might as well read the Elf Next Door novel. At least the book is finished and you can read it all at once. In addition, the author's urban plot needs to be strengthened. Come on ↖(^ω^)↗
It's okay, it's a type I've never seen before
To strengthen the elves, the doll must be cursed. To be honest, it's really useless.
It's okay, but I don't know why. The elves reviewed by the author are all elves that I want to collect and cultivate in the game. I like these elves very much.
When should we strengthen Speaker Cricket and Mu Mu Xiao? We don't need to strengthen them too much, just give them an all-round transformation [eating melon]
It would be better to give future Bankelas a characteristic acceleration
Very good, keep writing
Come on, come on, come on
It feels pretty good. It's the first time I've seen a novel like this. The others are reviews of the strongest elf and so on.
No, how can the protagonist feel aggrieved? Can those two police officers revoke their licenses without finding out? You can directly report the two policemen for accepting money and being bribed. If you write like this, you will lose a lot of readers @ jealous
It's the first time I've seen this kind of subject matter, and I feel very good about it. Come on, author!
It's so cool to torture a dog!
Not bad, you can watch it when you have nothing to do.
Just remove the city
Good looking (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡, but a little short
Suits my taste
I think we can make a wave of Sting Bee. After all, the body is too fragile and there are not many people who can super evolve.
I give it four stars. I hope the author will write more reviews. I love watching Zhi Ye! ! !
Forget it, let's give it five stars! It's not easy for an author to write so many novels at once!
Very ok
Don't say it anymore. Don't say it anymore.
Nice! Put it on the bookshelf first.
Give me more shots of Xiaozhi
It's not just that little bit. But
It's a little watery, but overall it's still good, and there's still room for improvement. Compared to other Tomato products that don't live up to their name, 6 points is still a bit low.
After reading these chapters, I looked solemn, lowered my head deeply, turned off my phone silently, stood up, opened the refrigerator, took out a bottle of 1982 collector's edition Nongfu Spring, held it tightly in my hand, and slowly walked to the window. The scenery outside the window was a bit dim, just like my mood, heavy, very heavy. It was raining lightly in the gray sky. Why was my vision blurred? I don't know if it was because I was crying or because it was raining harder. It's possible. My mood became even more melancholy. I could no longer suppress my inner emotions. I opened the window and shouted out the window: Just update a few pictures. Who are you looking down on? [Learned][Eat melon]
If one day the male protagonist comments on the Three Evil Dragons, the Evil Eater King, the Megalodon Shark and the Great Wolf Dog, and gives them excellent racial values and unnatural characteristics that allow them to counterattack and restrain their attributes, will they become endangered species?
I don't know why I didn't see the corresponding comments. I read 49 accounts and solemnly talked about the problems I think. I know that reading books is just for fun and does not require thinking, but I hope the author can take a look at the time. When Ash arrived in Kalos, the water fleet was gone, and the Fire Rock Team was still there, but the Red Flame Pine basically disbanded it. Then the Galaxy Team was arrested, and the Plasma Team was also there when Ash went there. At that time, N learned about Qu Qisi's conspiracy and disbanded it. Even if Plasma Group has already passed by the protagonist according to the game settings, it should be disbanded. But everything you wrote is still there, which makes me very puzzled. I might as well say that Xiaozhi just traveled not long ago, so it won't feel weird. Otherwise, Xiaozhi is in Kalos and all the villains are still there. Emmm, it feels like Xiaozhi has never been to other areas. The author can take a look at what I said and modify the timeline a little bit. Otherwise, many Pokémon secrets like me may feel weird the more they read, and then stop reading @jealous
It's a rare good book, but it also has a lot of poisonous points.
It is recommended that the author strengthen the Speaker Cricket and add an evolved version of the Speaker Cricket. But when it comes to the Speaker Cricket, I laugh every time I read it. Speaker Cricket? ? Speaker Cricket, do you look like a hero? Do you look like a hero? You are also a cricket man with a speaker. It's a huge difference. After you evolve for a while, come back again, ah. Or do you have a few speakers? Ah, I saw a weak Pokémon and asked me to help him. Do you have the strength to help him? Ah? Didn't you get directly crushed by others when you went up there? ? What else can I help? I won't even say that when Dolphin Heroes are in the sea, they encounter dangers or other bullies, such as this... Chihouba is bullying others. He is bullying this and this... Mililong. Then this Dolphin Man goes up and asks me to help! It turns out that Mi Lilong is controlling this Chihouba. Ah, sorry, I made a mistake. Right? Then this is such a hero of justice(?) What can a speaker cricket do? Still going to be a hero? You need that kind of strength to be a hero. You don't have the same muscles as anyone else. Look at their muscles. They are quite developed. Do you see that? ? The attack power is one hundred and sixty. Did you see your attack power? You are not as high as anyone except two. (Two), you are not as high as him when multiplied by two. I'll be honest. Can the attack power of the Speaker Cricket be doubled to reach 160? It can't be right? It seems not possible.
Must be good at 55, the author must have four a day to increase the rating, come on ⊙∀⊙! !
As the first author, can you give me a reply?
It's very novel, and the author's writing style is pretty good. I highly recommend you read it. Other novels are all about the top ten trainers and so on. Few people think about those Pokémon with poor characteristics and racial values. The author thought about it and changed it. If nothing else, the author gives you a big five stars.
Is there someone maliciously giving me a low score? This book is quite interesting, why is it only 5.5? I like the fact that the review is about groups rather than individuals. I read the review article before, and after reviewing the individual, enemies have to be suppressed, friends have to protect, and opportunities will be taken away by others, which makes me a little tired...
The subject matter is novel and the plot is exciting and fun. Endless aftertaste
Excellent, very good-looking, I look forward to the day when you become popular, come on↖(^ω^)↗👍 I think it's pretty good to write about the main character's plot. If you just write reviews and read too many plots, you'll feel bored. If you only write reviews, you might as well read the Elf Next Door novel. At least the book is finished and you can read it all at once. In addition, the author's urban plot needs to be strengthened. Come on ↖(^ω^)↗
It's okay, it's a type I've never seen before
To strengthen the elves, the doll must be cursed. To be honest, it's really useless.
It's okay, but I don't know why. The elves reviewed by the author are all elves that I want to collect and cultivate in the game. I like these elves very much.
When should we strengthen Speaker Cricket and Mu Mu Xiao? We don't need to strengthen them too much, just give them an all-round transformation [eating melon] It would be better to give future Bankelas a characteristic acceleration
Very good, keep writing
Come on, come on, come on
It feels pretty good. It's the first time I've seen a novel like this. The others are reviews of the strongest elf and so on. No, how can the protagonist feel aggrieved? Can those two police officers revoke their licenses without finding out? You can directly report the two policemen for accepting money and being bribed. If you write like this, you will lose a lot of readers @ jealous
It's the first time I've seen this kind of subject matter, and I feel very good about it. Come on, author! It's so cool to torture a dog!
Not bad, you can watch it when you have nothing to do.
Just remove the city
Good looking (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡, but a little short
Suits my taste
I think we can make a wave of Sting Bee. After all, the body is too fragile and there are not many people who can super evolve.
I give it four stars. I hope the author will write more reviews. I love watching Zhi Ye! ! ! Forget it, let's give it five stars! It's not easy for an author to write so many novels at once!
Very ok Don't say it anymore. Don't say it anymore.
Nice! Put it on the bookshelf first.
Give me more shots of Xiaozhi
It's not just that little bit. But
It's a little watery, but overall it's still good, and there's still room for improvement. Compared to other Tomato products that don't live up to their name, 6 points is still a bit low.