Mercenary*****

Finally, it's not live broadcast anymore. Those live broadcasts of battles make me annoyed when I watch them. What about the live broadcasts during a battle? Ill!

There are too many points to complain about. Mercenary Paradise is a very poisonous point. I don't know why the author wrote it. Secondly, why didn't you kill those two snipers? What's the point of pretending to be kind and becoming mercenaries? You knock them out and if they wake up early and die, you yourselves are the ones who forcefully pretend to be kind. Will the third generation of America's latest 5th generation vertical fighter send mercenaries to bomb? The internal pictures and parts taken by the fighter jets are valuable to other countries, so I sent you to blow up the forced plot. Finally, I want to say that you, a novice who doesn't understand, why should you be the leader? You don't even understand basic tactics, formations, tactics, and sign language. You don't understand various weapons. Isn't it just a funeral for you to be the leader of the group?

A tourist grandma went to Afghanistan to travel and encountered a war. The key is that he is just an ordinary person. He does not know weapons, has no training, and does not even have to hack the system. He is able to form an inexplicable tacit understanding with a few strangers and become a mercenary team. He shoots people, throws mines, makes plans and acts, and is a strong force in the special service team. Is this the author's imagination? Frankly speaking, I think the battle scenes you have written so far are okay, but the problem is that they are very unreasonable when they appear on the protagonist, and the logic does not make sense. I suggest that you change the first chapter to Chapter 30, and add Chapter 29 to the front. Since there is no system, and you need to have some imagination, you must either be reborn, or seize the body, etc. You have to give the protagonist a reasonable experience so that readers can understand it, otherwise it will just skip the scene. You can refer to the wolf pack, how a novice who knows nothing becomes a ghoul. You can shorten this process, but you can't do without it.

Too much nonsense, the logic is okay, I'm just curious, how can a person with no domestic service experience be so good after just a few days of training? Brainless cool article?

Although I have tried very hard to continue watching, I just can't stand it anymore and can't bear it anymore. What the hell is this Hou Li Crab?

Come on. . . .

It's not interesting if it's not good.

There are so many flaws that I can't stand it. It's all based on the author's personal feelings.

No brainer, this pig's feet can be so awesome on the battlefield

Don't watch it? @

Seeing it hurts IQ

I felt bad after reading this book

Come on, the author is great

Okay, it looks pretty

It's very interesting. I like this kind of plot.