After the Occult Master Died Tragically, How Did She Become Everyone’s Beloved?

The whole novel is quite well written. When you finished it, some of the plots were poorly described. Was the fate of certain villains clearly described? What if it happened later? It would be better if we could add a few extra chapters to supplement these. Now there is a feeling of asking you to eat, and you need some water to give away when you are halfway through eating, but you just don't have the feeling of water. This is about the whole aspect of metaphysics, and the emotional aspect. I feel that it is over as soon as it starts. This is suitable for a long novel. For short stories, I want to have both, but in the end, it is like swallowing a jujube in a hurry. There is a storyline, and it is also good to watch. In fact,

The front was good, but the back, especially the Lin family, started all over again until the end, provoking the heroine again and again, but the heroine didn't care, and the hero just talked, and finally drugged the hero, and the hero didn't take any action, saying that they were family friends, but what else did they do besides deal with you and humiliate your wife? As for the heroine, Mingli and the guy named Lin all dropped their heads again. They harmed the Ming family couple again, but after getting rid of the ghosts, it was over. They also made them dance around, and finally said that they would suppress the company and it was over. It was so frustrating to watch.

Feeling pretty good It's just that the content is a bit short and I feel like there's not much explanation in some parts. It feels like it's not filled in. The ending also feels a bit hasty. It's like a big chess game was laid out and only a few moves were made in the end.

Chi Anyan looked at Bai Yanxia for a long time, his eyes warm but restrained. "This is our first New Year. I hope I can spend every New Year with you in the future." Chi Anyan said. Bai Yanxia turned her head to look at him, smiled and said, "Then let's do our best." Try your best to survive. Bai Yanxia never thought that every year in the future, there would be someone who would cross the gap between life and death just for today's agreement.

Good-looking and good-looking😊

Not bad, the ending is a little rushed, but the heroine has a good character, not many emotional lines, most of it is plot

Very nice and exciting, but a bit short

It is rare for a short story with less than a hundred episodes to be written like this in similar themes. Although it is not perfect, stories with shortcomings are more disappointing 🤭

I think it's quite interesting. I just like reading short stories like this.

The book is a bit too fast. Many things are rushed. It feels like the ending is for the sake of ending.