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The writing is smooth and not messy, which is good. Author, please calm down and don't abuse the master! The latest chapter is too poisonous

No, it's actually quite pretty.

It feels pretty good. The character of the protagonist is more in line with my thoughts on immortals. (Mainly because I also like to be in a daze) I asked myself if I also had this system, my physique would probably be the same. At present, the relationship between spouses and Taoists who do not appear in the protagonist is also well written. The main theme of the writing is a pastoral and relaxed feeling, which makes me feel fresh and refined (I don't know why (´▽`ʃƪ)) Highly recommend (⌣`ʃ´ƪ)

It's the Chinese New Year, some authors are updating, some are taking time out of their busy schedules to update, even Jiu Shen has updated, but there are still some authors who are silently taking a long vacation for themselves, I won't say who it is [scrolls][scrolls][scrolls]

Isn't CP Tao Yaoyao? I've read more than 30 chapters and there's no emotional connection, so here's some tips.

I give it five stars, but I have to say that it takes too long to be a mortal. After the protagonist becomes invincible, he should quickly become an immortal, otherwise it will be boring.

The setting of this book is okay, but the plot development is relatively slow. I hope it can speed up the plot a bit.

Very good! Please keep writing! [You taste carefully]

It's quite beautiful, but the people are a little lacking [thinking][thinking][thinking]

The author hastily updated me. Such a beautiful book, do you have the heart to scrap it?

It's quite beautiful, but not many people see it.

This book is well written, but the author is a woman, right? The emotional descriptions are too detailed, which doesn't mean that female videos are not good. It's mainly because I'm used to the fast pace of male videos, and it feels a bit stained. Of course, I haven't read this fairy tale in a few days that caught my eye. The early arrangement of this book is not bad. It would be better if it was more compact. It would be better if the emotional details are hidden in the normal plot and not just mentioned. Come on, author.

In Transformation, this book is very good and has the feeling I want.

It's quite beautiful. If you don't like it, please turn left when you go out and don't make any malicious comments. Everyone has their own preferences for carrots and cabbage.

Woo hoo hoo, I haven't had enough of it [Sending my heart]

It looks good but why don't you follow it? Authors should not be affected by malicious comments

Well written, keep up the good work, author

It's very interesting. It's rare to see such stories about transformation and immortality.

Ordinary but extraordinary, I hope the author can keep writing.

This is the first time I read a story about transformation. It looks good. Why doesn't the author update it? [Petrochemical]

Will the protagonist change back? If you don't go back, should you stay single or get married? I've been looking at it for a long time, but I don't know if it's Lily, the price has changed, or it's nothing.

Great author, come on

Nice. Very nice

Very good, new theme

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

No surprise, he must be a eunuch

It's quite interesting. The character of the protagonist is very interesting to me.

Is there any emotional drama? Can the author reply?

I just hope that there is no plot to seize the body. It looks uncomfortable.

It's pretty good, I hope I don't write it down.