The Protagonist Shows Up at My Door from the Start? I'm His Brother-in-Law!

If you don't want to write about a harem or multiple female protagonists, don't make other female characters into losers and have to be the protagonist. In the end, the male and female protagonists have a happy ending and the others never marry for life. This can better show a sense of superiority, right?

Why is there no system? How can the male protagonist see who is cowardly and who is inappropriate and useless?

Good-looking, very good-looking

It's already like this. If you still plan to have a female protagonist, then you can't give it away. When the time comes, you can change it to two stars.

When I saw the introduction, I felt that I could give it a try and add it to my bookshelf if it was good. But the weather was not as good as it could be. I was a little disappointed and had a lot of bad points. I can only say that the author was not very clear about the outline of the novel in the early stage. First of all, if the author wants to write a single heroine or multiple heroines, you have to clearly state in the introduction whether it is a single or multiple heroines, what type of novel it is, and the introduction should be written clearly. It is a kind of responsibility to the readers. In this way, readers who don't like it can go directly without trying the introduction and waste time. It is better than being tricked by the introduction and reading it for a while and getting a bad review. Not all readers like villain themes with single or multiple heroines. After all, there are countless poisonous articles with deceptive introductions. If you want to write a single heroine, then you The focus should be on the relationship between the male protagonist and the female protagonist, rather than the ambiguous plots of other female protagonists appearing every now and then, which will lead to some poisonous points in the whole book and reduce the appeal of the book. After all, readers who like to read single female protagonists may not like the appearance of such plots. Readers will only want to see what they want to see, and will not care about what you want to write, so it is too vague. It is understandable that the setting of the novel will lead to poor performance and criticism. If a book wants to have good results, writing skills are indispensable, and the subject matter must follow the general trend. Of course, the author just writes books as a hobby and does not care about the evaluation, performance and profit of the book. If I didn't say it, the author can write what he wants to write, without caring about other people's suggestions, and do not agree with others. Finally, the author's book and style are really not suitable for me, and I won't say that I will give a bad review or a good review specifically for this reason. I'll just say goodbye and wish the author a bright future!

Why do I like to watch more female protagonists? It's just that I don't want to see regrets. Why don't I like to watch single female protagonists, writing about love but not being able to get it, writing about ambiguity and no sense of distance. Reading novels is to satisfy your imagination, something you want but out of reach, to put it simply, to be happy. There aren't many good stories about single female protagonists, and they always involve emotional ups and downs and third-party ambiguity, which makes it very uncomfortable to watch. It is easy for many female protagonists to have weak emotional lines, but the interspersed side chapters are easy to write and at the same time, the emotional lines are deepened, which is very comfortable to watch.

The book is good, but I don't like a single female protagonist in this kind of novel with a mixed world 🥺 The author describes how beautiful the female protagonists are, and if the male protagonists don't accept them, the Child of Destiny will as well. In fact, when we read novels, looking at the author's descriptions of female characters, we always imagine their images based on our own ideal types. This caused me to feel uncomfortable when I thought that my ideal type was not that of the male protagonist, but was pushed up by other children of luck 🥺 🥺 🥺 🥺 🥺 🥺 🥺 🥺 🥺 🥺 🥺 🥺 🥺 You can think about how awesome you will feel when you know that your goddess is enjoying herself under someone else's body. Generally speaking, you can write about a single woman in fantasy novels. After all, if the heroines are strong, there will be no problem with the Son of Destiny. But in urban novels, the heroine will be more or less burdened by her family and company from beginning to end, and then she has to devote herself to the Son of Destiny.

The plot was quite good at the beginning, but it felt like it was about to fall apart. I made several promises to the heroine at the beginning, but in the end it felt like I was going to start a harem. I think the man's commitment should be the most important.

12355 Is not bad either

If you don't come out and show off, am I still in the mood to watch a single female lead? I was in no mood to watch you as soon as you came out. You have a single female protagonist, five or six protagonists, and ten or twenty women all related to you? Chapter 1 is inexplicable at the beginning. You said that the original male villain was a decent man and had never done any bad things. So how did he drug the man named Ye? Don't tell me anything about Pig's Foot halo. Did Pig's Foot know who you were at that time? If you don't administer the medicine, no one will know who gave it to you. Although you didn't administer the medicine, you didn't explain clearly how you administered it? There is also the part about jumping off a building. You said that you did not travel through time, but were reborn. So why were you reborn? It's such a mess, involving more than a dozen women, and you still have a single heroine. It's disgusting.