Traveling Through the Primitive Era: the Beginning Shocked the Primitive People

The content is good, you can read it with confidence. Big support to the author!

Generally speaking, it's okay. It depends on how the story is written later.

Come here for a visit hehe

Come on, come on, come on

This book is very good, I am enjoying it

Having clear ideas and starting something from scratch is extremely valuable. Good.

Not bad, I hope you, the author, will work harder

The writing is still feasible, and modern knowledge can defeat the primitive people without golden fingers. Although the beginning is a bit frustrating, later on the male protagonist shows his strength that is completely different from that of the primitive people, and is willingly accepted by the primitive people. Judging from the degree of trust and worship of the primitive people in the male protagonist, it must be that the male protagonist leads the tribes to live and work in peace and contentment after various efforts.

It's pretty, I like it very much

The only fly in the ointment is: Why don't there be an allusion to every thing you make?

It's well written. I suggest you stop writing original texts and instead write fictional historical texts, or just write modern texts.

The author writes with great care and a strong sense of immersion, which is not comparable to other fast food novels. I hope to continue writing, come on.

The writing is very good, keep up the hard work, why did you stop?

Great book! Recommended to everyone! !

Not bad, you can consider taking a look