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A very good Harry Potter fan novel. This is probably one of the best Harry Potter fanfics I've ever read. It has a story and logic, and judging from the author's current situation, it's very possible to write a happy ending. I personally think it's good. After all, there are a lot of twists and turns in the original work, such as Sirius, Snape, Dumbledore, one of the twins, Lupin, and Tonks all died. I saw someone saying that Ron was not worthy of Hermione in the original book [face covering] [face covering] [face covering] Actually, everyone may have been misled by the actor in the movie. In fact, Hermione is not good-looking in the book, she is probably above average, let alone beautiful at the Triwizard Ball. If a girl dresses up well, she will not be too bad. In the book, there are probably three most beautiful ones. The first one is French Hibiscus. She has Veela blood and is the top one. The second one should be Qiuzhang, the elegant beauty of the East. The third one should be Ginny. Ginny may be the school beauty of Hogwarts. After all, in the book, Malfoy hates the Weasley family so much that he scolds them all day long. Even he said that Ginny is beautiful. I currently feel that this book has a score of 9.5 Or above. Highly recommended. I hope the author will write carefully and not be a mess or a eunuch. Then write faster.

It's good-looking, not invincible, and we grow together. This is the first fanbook I've seen about Harry's group reaching second grade or above.

The quality of the HP fanfic is relatively good. I hope it will be updated more often. There are also many unreasonable places, but there are still quite few poisonous points, at least nothing serious. Overall, good luck, author, update more and improve your writing skills.

I really like this kind of HP fanfic that is plain and simple, does not engage in intrigues, and does not maliciously speculate on anyone with words! I just hope that the author will slowly pull out the knife, and then update it steadily. Instead of a thousand chapters, he can just write five or six hundred chapters to give a slightly decent ending!

I really want to complain about it before. After all, it completely follows the original work. It feels like there is no innovation at all. It just adds a "male partner" who has a better relationship with Hermione. However, it gradually gets better later on, with the male protagonist participating in more and more plots, and the changes gradually become bigger, and the author's progress can be seen.

The details are in place. As long as the author doesn't mess up, it will not be lower than 9.0. But I am not sure whether there will be background operations, but I believe this book will not be bad. [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

Delicacy without losing the tediousness, following the original without losing the immediacy. Reading it is like drinking milk tea in a busy street market, hot and strong; it is also like drinking ordinary tea, cold and light, with the afternoon wind blowing. It's very good. If it's not boring to read, it's passable in my opinion. If you can enjoy it a little, it's a step up. And this book is outside of both.

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Oh my god, this fanfic is so beautiful, just like Merlin's black stockings

One of the most comfortable Harry Potter books I have read so far. I hope it won't end in a hurry like Death. After defeating Voldemort, I hope to write about the later events, such as wizards integrating into the Muggle world, liberating elves, etc., Or maybe a little bit about the daily life of each character, please!

It suits my taste, and the writing is good, awesome!

This book is really one of the best in which Hermione is the heroine. Suitable for readers who like daily and emotional interactions Readers who are pursuing exciting articles or career lines may feel a little frustrated and uncomfortable. The advantages are obvious, the writing is good, the daily interactions are sweet, the characters are well restored, there are not so many weird secondary settings, the emotional line is well written, Hermione is not written to pieces, and there is no ambiguity regardless of age. There are also some shortcomings. It mainly follows the plot, and there are few secondary creations (the middle and later stages are better). I can remember the plot during time travel, but I am timid. I hope that the development of reality will be the same as the development of the story and I don't dare to flap the butterfly wings. In short, I believe too much in the original work I know. Personally, I feel that the second year is a bit toxic, but it starts to get better in the third year. The plot setting is very interesting. It's been so long since I've read a story about Hermione that didn't break down but had a good emotional line. It deserves five stars.

Personally, I think it's a relatively good novel, but sometimes it's a bit forced to explain the protagonist's actions by not remembering the plot. But despite its flaws, it is a masterpiece in this world of books.

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I just like to read the heroine Hermione's novels. This book is generally good. The plot is more based on the original novel to make up for some regrets. For those who like to read novels that make the protagonist shake at every turn, this is not a good book. But for those who read HP in Calm and Slow Water, this book is okay. The description of Hermione is considered to be above average among Tomato fan descriptions. Everyone will have a corresponding description of the character in their mind. In comparison, the description in this article is not the best in my opinion, but I still like it. I like Hermione, the little witch, who is smart but proud, wise but not seeking advantages and avoiding disadvantages, brave and decisive. I also like Professor McGonagall, an elegant meow who has her own principles and codes, loves students, and upholds righteousness. I hope she doesn't have to lose her flying phoenix and bat here There is also Snape, who has a life of love and hate, but he can always be the arrogant and venomous Head of Slytherin. He can teach Potions and continue to compete for the Defense Against the Dark Arts class. I hope the author can work hard and write the story in your heart, and also make up for the regret in my heart.

It's unexpectedly good. It's a pro-Harrison, Hermione-loving novel. The writing is good. At least there aren't too many irrational things (for me) right now. It depicts the life and love I long for. The magical life of growing up is more attractive to me than the fast-moving articles on the Internet list. No, it should be my story about Sur. I have never had any special power in the novel in just a few hundred hours. Come on, the author, I hope there will be a complete story for Soul and Hermione, and a story that will be unforgettable for me (the above is just my personal opinion, meaningless)

It's very interesting. It has a strong protagonist type. The difference is that although the protagonist and Hermione are a couple, they talk less about the old main plot (the younger they are, the more the old main plot is). Most of them talk about the new main plot of Queen Butterfly, and there is also a separate branch line for the protagonist, which explains how the protagonist gets stronger step by step. Most of them are logical. There is a love line of ggad, but there is no sweet love between them, but complex feelings, mutual understanding, letting go, and trust. There is not much. It is basically a branch line. It was not until the end that the main line became a little bit more involved.

This book is the best among all the fanfics I have ever read. The love between the protagonist and Hermione is very sweet. The author's writing style is very suitable for my character. At the same time, he still has his own exploration and consideration of the positioning of the original work. The original plot written is very good. The descriptions of other characters highlight their hearts. For example, Gemini is naughty. Snape can be said to be indifferent. Of course, he is cold on the outside and hot on the inside. He has a shortcoming, but I hope there is a little system.

It's beautiful, really. I haven't read the original work or anything, and it looks very novel. Well, sometimes the author doesn't know how to read the comments or search for it by himself when he talks about things in the original work [Code] It looked good, but I was a little confused when it disappeared after the fight.

(First of all, support the author's daily update of two chapters) Although it felt relatively mediocre in the early stage, the content obviously became richer in the later stage, and the writing style was excellent (applause👏). The sweet part is also very good. I hope the author can continue to work hard in the future!

It's a good recommendation. It's quite sweet. It's really six. Starting from Dumbledore's camp, it makes us aware of the secrets hidden under the Harry Potter series of movies, reflecting the splendor of magic and the ups and downs of the plot [smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][ smile][adoration][adoration][adoration][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][OK][OK][OK][OK][Like][Like][Like][Like][Love][Like][Love][Like][Love][Like][Love][Like]

It looks very comfortable and very good. Come on, don't stop updating. I express my condolences to the author who is destined to cook.

It's a very good book. I recommend everyone to read it slowly. Although some plots can be made simpler or more mindless to push the plot away from the original work, I am very happy to think that this is a new author and I look forward to the author's completion and other books.

The author's writing skills are good, and the language expression is quite similar to that of the first edition of the book by domestic publishing houses. At present, the logic of this novel is very clear, and the holes dug have basically been filled. What surprises me is the author's construction of the personality characteristics of each character in the original work, and I have to say "praise" (as we all know, group portraits are very difficult) I have read a lot of Harry fanfics (including but not limited to on Tomato), and among the limited Harry fanfics I have read, there are very few that match the language style of the original work. I have to give the author a thumbs up. Thank you for bringing such a beautiful work to readers. Come on, author!

Seriously, this is the only Harry Potter fanfic I've read so far. The protagonist has no system, and the promotion of strength is logical. The plot respects the original work more, and the slight changes are quite to my liking. The emotions of the characters are also well portrayed. Overall, it is a very good fanfic (the only highlight may be that Hufflepuff discovered an existence similar to the main world, but the author may have also discovered this surprise, so he only mentioned it briefly and did not develop it further). It is worth recommending.

So far, I think this book is very well written, at least on Tomato. The characters in the book are also relatively consistent with the original work. The only thing I think is poor is the characterization of Hermione. I personally like Hermione very much, but I think the Hermione in this book is a failure. No matter what the protagonist does, she will go back and get to the bottom of it. No matter how the protagonist feels. I think the tracking, questioning, etc. In the book is really a bit outrageous. But overall it's still very OK. I hope the author will continue to work hard

The original Harry Potter book has made up for all its shortcomings. I would call it Hogwarts' "healing novel" 🤣 It also has reasonable logic and setting, as well as an in-depth interpretation of magic. It is a good-looking novel. It's HE😌 2023.11.21 Guimao. Guihai. Jiashen. Xinwei Completed reading Lc

Super sweet, really no knife, I swear in the name of GGAD! The author's writing is very good, but it's a pity that there are only 660+ chapters, which is too short. The characters are all three-dimensional, and I would like to highlight the perfectly restored characters: Old Bee (Albus), Hagrid, Pink Toad (you know everything), Lupin, Quirrell, Socket (Voldemort), Mrs. Weasley, the Weasley Twins, Percy How to say In order to sweeten things up, a lot of OOC characters were actually added, but they were only a little bit broken, not much. The so-called broken just means that they are more lively than the original ones, such as Professor Cat (McGonagall) and the Transparent Old Goat (Aberforth). Forget it, I love watching it, but it's too short and a lot of details are not included. It is necessary to mention that starting from about 350+ chapters, the author gradually let himself go 2024.01.24, 03:11 Four-day speed pass, the highest level can be achieved as a palace fan What a great book, but it's a pity that the author couldn't come up with the material at the end, and the pace was very fast. The sixth part of the Half-Blood Prince was almost completely skipped... Sigh... It's a pity that it's half-finished. (The following is the output of dissatisfied emotions, please do not spray) Sugar! Sugar! I want candy! Angel! Can't you write about the protagonist's married life? Can't you write about the protagonist's career as a vocational teacher? Harry! Ron has changed his wife! Can't we write another 700-chapter daily extra? Author, you are too short (thumbs up, but upside down)

Generally speaking, it is very good. Although there are some inconsistent plots and some plots that are inconsistent with the original settings, the flaws cannot be concealed. There are no problems in character creation and plot advancement, and there is no weak follow-up. The overall plot trend is relatively smooth. The role of the protagonist is also very good, like a book by Toad. The protagonist mainly witnesses and changes regrets, and the changes in strength are traceable. Although there are not so many original plots, the plot does not collapse because of this. The overall writing style is relatively light-hearted, which is great. In the original novel, Half-Blood Prince, the plot was very depressing. If you want to read light-hearted writing, I highly recommend this novel. The shortcoming is that some of the original characters have been downplayed. Like Luna, the shining points of many of the original characters are only briefly passed over. This is also related to the length of the article. It would feel better if some daily and original works were added every semester to accentuate the role of some of the original characters. In general, this novel still has some flaws and shortcomings, but it is still worth reading. Personally, I think the evaluation of 9.4-95 Points is fair after all.

As a novel worth reading for a fan, the writing style is authentic, the plot has its own additional content ideas based on the original work and is reasonable, and the arrangement of the characters is also good. I have to say that watching Harry Potter brings back memories. Taking in Hermione really feels like a complete childhood.