Dream Eater

Waiting for the first five-star review [shy]

I've read ten chapters and can't stand it anymore, but I still have to give it a five-star review. Advantages: The subject matter is very novel, the plot is very smooth, and the overall writing quality is very high. This is why I gave it five stars. Disadvantages: The author should be very young, with relatively little social experience, and the characterization is a bit thin. In particular, there is a problem common to most modern-themed works, that is, a lack of understanding of "organization". "Organization" here refers to a broad range of human-to-human interactions. For example, the female character named You at the beginning of the chapter, why does the male protagonist pamper her so much and even team up with her? What is the rationality of the plot? There is also a lack of logic in the actions of other characters who enter the dream world. This is the reason why I can't stand it. To sum up, this work is generally very good and there is room for improvement. It is highly recommended for young readers who are insensitive to the shortcomings I mentioned. Nowadays, there are too few novels like this on Tomato that lack plots and have a strong "gram flavor". The author writes it very carefully, so I give it a five-star recommendation.

Not bad, it basically avoided all my faults, and I like it very much. My intuition about finding the same (referring to the core) books is quite accurate. All in all, it is beautiful and has depth. You have to see and think about it in person. I really like this type of writing that is written by Fei Shuang and Fei Xiaobai.

The plot is rigorous and not procrastinating, and the visuals are super strong. Every chapter is worth reading. The author's imagination is so big, it's amazing👍

It's a very good book, you can read it carefully The authors comment on each other [blowing kiss]

Nice idea, come on!