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The first part is pretty good, but the part where the protagonist worked as a policeman all his life and made shoes for the army with a deaf old lady is particularly ridiculous. It can be said that the writing is useless. First: the protagonist in the book said that he worked as a policeman all his life in his previous life. If it can be described as a lifetime, it can be said that he worked until retirement. So being able to work until retirement means that the protagonist was 60 in his previous life. Years old. The first chapter also wrote about what the protagonist was doing in his previous life. The problem is that he is 60 years old and still thinks of the girl in black stockings one day and leads a commando to inspect it. It doesn't make sense. Second: The deaf old lady is a capitalist girl who married an honest farmer because of the war. First of all, if he can be called a lady, it means that he is still young, at least Around the age of 20, this book combines the time period of Jia Dongxu's accident in the 1960s. The deaf old lady was all on crutches. She must be 60 or 70 years old. According to time calculation, the time period of the deaf old lady around 20 years old should be the end of the Qing Dynasty. At that time, there were only landlords and no capitalists. As for the term capitalist, it was a period of chaos among warlords. No one cared about the status of the so-called landlords and capitalists. Also, Peking was peacefully liberated. Where could the deaf old lady go to make shoes for the troops? And the article also said that the deaf old lady was a capitalist lady. She could needlework? Can she make shoes? That's totally wrong.

Stop writing it. If you give the Jia family fifty yuan at the beginning, your book is bound to be sold out. Since Goldfinger is a port. At least there were mobile phones and everything in there, but I ended up running to ask for radio and bicycle tickets. You're destined to be scolded, so don't write it.

Come on! ! ! ! ! ! !

It's really not good at writing

There is no logic, the plot and details are fucking bizarre, and there is no human touch at all.

Well written, keep it up!

Not many words now! Start writing from scratch! It's so witty to write like this!

Come on, keep going.

Come on, Saonian Ollie!

Silly Zhu came back early in the morning carrying his lunch box.

What does Chapter 23--24 mean? Not understand!

Nothing written in chapters 23 and 24 corresponds to the previous ones.