“Master, Master! Does Mentor Leng want to be our new mistress?”
“Children shouldn’t butt into adults’ business.”
“But Big Sis says if you don’t marry her, she’ll go work for another sect.”
“Why not ask her to consider it? I have a school secretary position open for her.”
“What? You want to challenge my master? Go ahead, be my guest.”
“Senior Brother, is this guy an idiot? He still dares to challenge Master.”
“Leave him be. Place your bets! How many moves can he last before he’s calling Master ‘Dad’?”
“I bet a top-grade dragon vein essence that he’ll last three moves.”
“I bet a top-grade sacred beast egg that he’ll last two.”
“I bet the Heaven-grade cultivation manual, Chaos Heavenly Origin Art, that he’ll last one.”
“Get lost, all of you! If you scare off a customer, I’ll challenge every one of you to a fight.”
I give my book a five-point rating, but it's not too much.
It's very novel and well-characterized. I just hope the plot doesn't collapse.